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Operation H.A.L.O [Chapter One is in]

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[spoiler=Prologue] [align=center]Zeke sat in a operation table. Their were approximately six men in white lab coats surrounding him. Zeke felt no pain, yet he knew they were tampering with his body.

 

This was his fourth day in this, what seemed like, prison. Zeke could not remember what had happened before those four days. He figured they injected something into him that had made him forget. Sometimes he hated how advanced humanity was becoming.

 

He was operated on in each of the four days he was here. This time was different. The other three times he was in a different room, and they were taking blood samples. He knew it would be over soon.

 

He closed his eyes and as soon as he did he felt a sharp pain in his back.

 

"Argh!" Zeke shouted. He tried too get out.

 

"He's resisting!" He heard one of the doctors say.

 

"Hold him down!" hollered another. They all ran and held him down. The sharp pain continued and then he felt something being pushed, or rather forced, in.

 

"Get the anesthetic!" One shouted. They injected him with a shot of the anesthetic, and he began too feel drowsy. His vision was beginning to blur up. He finally fell asleep, but he would forever remember the last thing he heard before falling asleep.

 

"Retrieve the Halo."

 

 

1 Year Later

 

 

Zeke still remembers the fifth and final day he spent there.

 

The time was 3:57 A.M, to be exact. He finally snapped. They had lodged something into his back. Well at the time he did not know but now...

He had broken through the cuffs holding him too the operation table and pushed his way through the doctors. They had signaled the alarm which called in a riot squad.

 

Zeke had though that was a bit much. He thought they would just hold him down until he heard one word that he, to this day, is horrified by. Fire.

 

The bullets began too fly, and Zeke instinctively ducked behind a wall. He knew he was going too die in this building today, when the pain in his back returned.

 

"Damn, not at this time..." he cried.

 

Suddenly he realized what they had placed into his back. They had emerged rapidly and saved his life. Wings. They had placed mechanical wings into his back. He suddenly realized how to operate them. They had placed a mechanical chip with all the knowledge he would need about the wings in his mind.

 

He then flew up. He gracefully soared past all the riot-men and flew out.

 

He was free.[/align]

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1]

[align=center]Current Time - July 21, 2100

 

 

Zeke woke up in the same old rundown, abanded apartment he sleeps in every night, seeing as though nobody would want to hire a teenager with wings.

 

Zeke began too get hungry, seeing as he didn't eat anything yesterday. He decided too go fishing and put on his gear and his fishing rod. The stream was across town and Zeke would cause too much hassle if he flew.

 

Zeke walked for about half an hour when he noticed something odd about a local jewelry store. There were about 4 police cars and 27 officers there.

 

All of a sudden a lady in a red suit jumped out. She looked about 16, 2 years older then Zeke. She had red boots, a red shirt, sleeveless and red pants, all made out of leather and the same tint of light red.

 

She sprinted past the police officers. She held a brown, bulging bag in her hands. Zeke began too walk away but figured he might be able too get some jewels if he stoped her. He then opened his wings witch could fold be into pods in his back. They made holes in his shirt and almost ripped them.

 

He raced after her flying about 5 feet from the ground. That's when the bullets flew. They began by shooting at the girl but, due too shock and horror, aimed at Zeke.

 

Zeke heard a series of voices mainly saying.

"Kill that thing!" or,

"What the hell is that?!?" or his least favorite,

"Monster!"

 

"What the hell, I'm trying too help you!" Zeke grunted.

 

Zeke began too sped up. He didn't want too let the girl die so he lifted he off. Zeke picked up speed and flew higher. He was now about 50 feet from the ground. Some how a bullet managed too scrape his arm.

 

He nearly dropped the girl but they managed too get too the creak, which luckily was vacant. Zeke gently let the girl down. He noticed some more detailed features now. Among those were, she had a tail.

 

Zeke stared wide eyed at the girl. She began too blush and grabbed her tail.

 

"I swear if you tell anyone I'll slit your thought." She barred her claws. Her voice was light and not suited for a teenage thief.

 

"Only if you don tell anyone about these. My name is Zeke." Zeke said flapping his wings.

 

"My name is Scarlet. Do you wanna explain how you got those?" She asked.

 

"You first." Zeke said in a sarcastic voice. Contradicting too that he meant it.

 

"Fine but not here. Lets go somewhere were no one will hear us."

 

She began too run north, towards forest. Zeke got his wings and followed. The cut from the bullet began too hurt.[/align]

 

 

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[spoiler=Prologue] [align=center]Zeke sat in a operation table. Their were approximately six men in white lab coats surrounding him. Zeke felt no pain' date='[/b'] yet he knew they were tampering with his body.

 

This was his fourth day in this, what seemed like, prison. Zeke could not remember what had happened before those four days. He figured they injected something into him that had made him forget. Sometimes he hated how advanced humanity was becoming.

 

He was operated on in each of the four days he was here. This time was different. The other three times he was in a different room, and they were taking blood samples. He knew it would be over soon.

 

He closed his eyess and as soon as he did he felt a sharp pain in his back.

 

"Argh!" Zeke shouted. He tried too get out.

 

"He's resisting!" He heard one of the doctors say.

 

"Hold him down!" hollered another. They all ran and held him down. The sharp pain continuedc and then he felt something being pushed, or rather forced, in.

 

"Get the anesthetic!" One shouted. They injected him with a shot of the anesthetic, and he began too feel drowsy. His vision was beginning to blur up. He finally fell asleep, but he would forever remember the last thing he heard before falling asleep.

 

"Retrieve the Halo."

 

 

3 Years Later

 

 

Zeke still remembers the fifth and final day he spent there.

 

The time was 3:57 A.M, to be exact. He finally snapped. The had lodged something into his back. Well at the time he did not know but now...

He had broken through the cuffs holding him too the operation table and pushed his way through the doctors. They had signaled the alarm which called in a riot squad.

 

Zeke had though that was a bit much. He thought they would just hold him down until he heard one word that he, to this day, is horrified by. Fire.

 

The bullets began too fly, and Zeke instinctively ducked behind a wall. He knew he was going too die in this building today, when the pain in his back returned.

 

"Damn, not at this time..." he cried.

 

Suddenly he realized what they had placed into his back. They had emerged rapidly and saved his life. Wings. They had placed mechanical wings into his back. He suddenly realized how to operate them. They had placed a mechanical chip with all the knowledge he would need about the wings in his mind.

 

He then flew up. He gracefully soared past all the riot-men and flew out.

 

He was free.[/align]

 

 

The bolded are fixes. There were several missing commas, but it was okay.

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