Aqua Demon Cards

[Alsharid]

 

Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned, or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned while "Toon World" is on your side of the field. You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. This card cannot attack in the same turn it is Summoned. Unless you pay 500 Life Points, this monster cannot attack. When "Toon World" is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponents Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target.

 

 

 

 

[VainZiler]

For the first card, the OCG is off. Should be ATK and DEF in place of attack and defense, and it's overpowering. As well, as it'd be written like this:

"Increase the ATK and DEF of monsters who have "Aqua" in their name by 500 points." like that.

 

For the third card: Increase is at the begining of the sentence, and needs to be capitalized, and it's DEF, not defense.

 

For the fourth card: Tribute, not sacrifice, it should say Special Summon, 2 not two, and Deck needs to be capitalized.

 

for the last card: need " " Around the cards name in its effect, Summoned needs to be capitalized, should be Special Summon, Deck needs to be capitalized. Effect is horribly written and is way to overpowering.