sabre Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Here are my first cards based on kingdom hearts! Please rate i am open to any constructive critisism.:)I will be making a lot more as i have a fractured wrist at the moment!:D P.S does anyone have any kingdom hearts pictures for me to use as i cant find many decent ones? Drive!'s effect:This card can only be played when a "sora" card is on the field. Depending on which cards are on the field Any monster equiped with this card gains the following effects:+If "goofy" is on the field then it gains 500 ATK points.+If "Donald" is on the field then it can attack twice in the same battle phase.+If both "Goofy" and "Donald" are on the field then you can equip a "keyblade" to the Monster from your deck.+If both "Goofy" ,"Donald" and 1 other monster is on the field the monster gains all of the above effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 These are really good. 8.5/10. There are some grammar mistakes but they are good. Keep it up and you'll be a great card maker in no time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 thanks i am suprised as these are some of my first cards where are the grammar mistakes so i can edit them! Thnx again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pika1849 Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 8\10 for this set!I love kingdom hearts but not the bestAWESOME thought... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Absolution: rewrite the effect like this: This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Keyblade Wielder" in its card name.The equipped card gains 500 ATK. When the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.Just try to write like the people who make the cards. I think there's a thread where you can learn how to write properly somewhere on the forum. If I find it I'll post it for you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 great job! just some little grammar mistakes: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Thanks for all the great comments :) i will be changing absolutins effect today. i will make loads more cards as my friend is coming round tonite so we will be mking some more. i am going to do some disney cards for this set next!!!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megasean3000 Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 I got ur message. :D Yup, Im a Kingdom Hearts expert :D The images are slightly off, such as Kairi Sora Riku and Roxas. It is preferable if they are genuine instead of drawn. (Ie, instead of the Sora you got from possibly DArt, why not an image of him looking at the Door of Light at the end of KH2?) The effects are slightly unoriginal, why not make them have an effectthat makes them stand out from the crowd. (Eg, Organization XIII Gathering is almost equivalent to Return from the Different Dimension. Instead, why not Special-Summon as many Organization XIII members from your hand to the field. And at the end of that turn, return them to your hand.) Some images may be genuine, yet they lack one thing: backgrounds. If a card has no backgrounds, it will be deemed fake instantly. If you have MS Paint, add a background to the canvas then add the desired monster, then use a variety of colouring skills to blend it in. (I used the same method with Sora, Riku and Kairi. =P) A few spelling errors on the cards, it has to be detailed as possible. Read the section on effect writing made by one of the moderators for more info. And finally, the ATK and DEF of most of your monsters don't match the monster's strength, such as Heartless Phantom, in the game, he was so strong that I couldn't even beat him :( so he should be a sacrifice monster etc. Use these info to optimize your set, and future cards :D Good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjj Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 the effects are great, but the pics are even better! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 These are cool! You could have better pics though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 thanks for all your comments but megasean3000 is there anything else except mspaint i could use? also does anyone want to suggest any more cards or images i could use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megasean3000 Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Nope, MS Paint is easy to use, so don't worry. If you want KH images, try Photobucket, or Google Images. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 cheers for all the help megasean3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 U coul'of had better pic,BTW great cards!7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugi Jyudai Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 loved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted January 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 cheers for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Final Fantasy Revolution Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 ok lets see effects are good picks are solid theres no background to some of them so 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clxmj Posted January 26, 2008 Report Share Posted January 26, 2008 im no KH fan but fair dos, they are good cards with good effects.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxi-kun Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 thats are my pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
overheat Posted August 31, 2008 Report Share Posted August 31, 2008 the pics have the text take them off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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