LOCK ASAP PLEASE

[Jord200]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-184939.html

 

acording to some it does. I know its a little rough around the edges, but I'm working on it. is it that bad?

[Great Unclean One: VK]

Liek you said. It's rough but it got good stuff in it.

[Dissonance]

I read the first sentence and said "funk you".

 

If you can't care enough about your story to use proper formatting, capitalization, and grammar, then I don't care enough to read it.

[Juuzou]

yes, it suck large eggs from a male hippopotamus named steeve

[Zeroshot]

I don't want to read it D:

The grammar and just how it's set up is bad enough, but the story is aweful.

[Eury]

Pikaperson's post made the trip into that thread worthwhile.

[Larxene]

I'm not enough of a jabroni in this story.

 

That right there is such a big complaint that it completely overrides everything else that's wrong with it.

 

And that's really saying something.

[Pikachu]

Ok first, I'm not in it.

 

Second, bad grammar, sentence structure, lack of good vocabulary...

 

And I start to begin questioning how old you actually are.

[Womi]

Why do you even care?

[Niño]

1) No one cares, the polls section is not intended for this purpose.

 

2) Practice writing and move up a few grades, hopefuly that will improve your grammar.

 

3) Creative plot lines, come up with them, and plenty.

 

4) Do not name characters after actual usernames, it makes next to no sense, give them a similar name in relation to the selected members username.

 

5) Bye.

[Jord200]

1) No one cares' date=' the polls section is not intended for this purpose.

 

2) Practice writing and move up a few grades, hopefuly that will improve your grammar.

 

3) Creative plot lines, come up with them, and plenty.

 

4) Do not name characters after actual usernames, it makes next to no sense, give them a similar name in relation to the selected members username.

 

5) Bye.

[/quote']

 

 

I'm in 10th grade..... and I'm not mental. my IQ is 138. I'm just bad at grammar.

And would it be a YCM fan fic if I didn't name characters after users?

 

 

NOW NOBODY POST. I JUST WANT THIS THREAD TO DIE!

[Dissonance]

1) No one cares' date=' the polls section is not intended for this purpose.

 

2) Practice writing and move up a few grades, hopefuly that will improve your grammar.

 

3) Creative plot lines, come up with them, and plenty.

 

4) Do not name characters after actual usernames, it makes next to no sense, give them a similar name in relation to the selected members username.

 

5) Bye.

[/quote']

 

 

I'm in 10th grade..... and I'm not mental. my IQ is 138. I'm just bad at grammar.

And would it be a YCM fan fic if I didn't name characters after users?

 

 

NOW NOBODY POST. I JUST WANT THIS THREAD TO DIE!

 

If you were 10, I would have failed you in English. Being a Sophomore, you should be shot.

[Eury]

1) No one cares' date=' the polls section is not intended for this purpose.

 

2) Practice writing and move up a few grades, hopefuly that will improve your grammar.

 

3) Creative plot lines, come up with them, and plenty.

 

4) Do not name characters after actual usernames, it makes next to no sense, give them a similar name in relation to the selected members username.

 

5) Bye.

[/quote']

 

 

I'm in 10th grade..... and I'm not mental. my IQ is 138. I'm just bad at grammar.

And would it be a YCM fan fic if I didn't name characters after users?

 

 

NOW NOBODY POST. I JUST WANT THIS THREAD TO DIE!

 

I highly doubt you have an IQ of 138 with Grammar that horrible.