Malik37 Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Can someone tell me what may be wrong with this card?: Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, Set or Tribute Summoned. This monster can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points is 4000 or less than your opponent's Life Points. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, Special Summon up to 3 LIGHT monsters from the Graveyard. Once per turn, during Main Phase, pay 1000 Life Points to look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field, the effect is not activated. If this effect is used, none of your monsters can attack. Thank you in advance. Oh, be sure to check out my Ninja Cards. After Cyber_Commander suggestion:Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, Set or Tribute Summoned. This monster can only be Special Summoned if your Life Points is 4000 or less than your opponent's Life Points. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, Special Summon up to 3 LIGHT monsters from the Graveyard. Once per turn, during Main Phase, pay 1000 Life Points to look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field, the effect is not activated. If this effect is used, none of your monsters can attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Well-it is hard to get out-but incredibly unfair when you do. I mean, Solemn Judgment and this thing is out in a flash. It is also incredibly strong and powerful. However, you might want to change it to: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when your Life Points are 4000 less than your opponent's Life Points. Fix the effect and OCG...good picture. 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malik37 Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Thanks. "When" was actually the word I was looking for, I just couldn't remember it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 No problem. Glad I could help. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinz Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 You could improve your grammar a bit. (no offence) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malik37 Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 You could improve your grammar a bit. (no offence) No taken. I actually prefer comments like these to improve my skills. However' date=' I am wondering where specifically did you want me to? Here is another two cards:[img']http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff307/malik737/Hellbound%20Series/HellboundTorment.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei-kun Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 How about this:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by offering 3 monsters on your side of the field as a tribute when your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points and the difference is 4000 points or more. When this card is Special Summoned successfully, Special Summon up to 3 LIGHT monsters from the Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, pay 1000 Life Points to look at 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field. The selected card cannot be activated. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn that this effect was activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 It is OVERPOWERED. I can't think of any suggestions. Plus, try improving your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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