<«Writer's Arena»>

[iCherry]

I prefer me genderbending.

 

I managed to fool someone so easily.

 

IT'S A TRAP.

 

FUUUU-

[DL]

Exactly.

 

 

I'll probably love to death every moment my character transforms.

[Pichu]

i just love death

[DL]

I like life, thank you very much.

 

Although, speaking of ch 2, I think it'd be better if I said "This guy with silver hair just trapped me here and escaped!"

[Deustodo]

And it be, 4chan, you give Twing some ideas for Chapter 3 if you care that much.

[DL]

IDK what he has planned.

 

he's the story guy.

 

I'm the super writer that's also an awesome editor.

[Deustodo]

That sucks as being awesome, yes, we all know that.

[Twig]

Yay! Thanks Twig' date=' I really like being the bad guy :D

 

Also, for the time of battle, I'll have something to tell you: I can continuously look 0.8 seconds into the future without straining myself in any way (because my heart beats that often anyway). And I would probably use that during the fights, not to get tired for nothing.

 

But can you add the fight to the second chapter aswell? It's too short...

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Who said you were going to be a bad guy?

 

How'd you know I'm going to make go in a hunt?

 

I keep freakin' forgetting this topic. I'm sorry. I need to read the fan-fic and see what's going on.

 

Anyway' date=' I'm currently writing a few things. One is a Pokemon fan-fic I'll be posting this weekend. But it isn't going to be here, probably on SAW or FF.Net.

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Is it that hard to not post it here?

 

Chapter is too short D: Also' date=' I think more Word poopage is needed <,<

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Yeah' date=' there are indeed a lot of grammar mistakes. But I'm just glad I'll be able to hunt Master Red :D

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I'll rewrite today. I don't have as much homework as I usually do.

[Deustodo]

So, the character for the Club fan-fic are just the ones in the first post?

[Twig]

So' date=' the character for the Club fan-fic are just the ones in the first post?

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Yeah. If you want to make a character, I can give you an app.

[DL]

If you give Deus the app, he'll make an invincible character who is sadistic, most likely.

[Deustodo]

Don't blame me, 4chan, after all, the character probably wouldn't appear much in the fan-fic.

[Twig]

Name:

Age&Gender:

Description:

Personality:

Power:

 

There's the app if you want.

[DL]

I wonder, when will the 3rd chapter be up?

[Scatty]

Name:

Age&Gender:

Description:

Personality:

Power:

 

There's the app if you want.

 

I wonder what will he put at name, age, and power...definitely NOT Deus, 1000000 years, and immortality...

[DL]

No, probably something like "shotgunning people"

[Deustodo]

Well, the name is Deus. And no, 100000000 years would be just stupid. Less than 2000 is enough. Immortality only if wanted to me showed only a few times, so I changed for something like 4chan just posted.

[Scatty]

Well' date=' the name is Deus. And no, 100000000 years would be just stupid. Less than 2000 is enough. Immortality only if wanted to me showed only a few times, so I changed for something like 4chan just posted.

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Wow, now that's a huge leap forward, I suppose...

[DL]

Only 1 post in a day?

 

I suppose Twig is busy...

 

And, everyone else is too...

 

 

Oh well, at least I might get to see more Yuki later on.

[Deustodo]

It would help if we had something to talk about. Like, Writing or something like that.

[DL]

Oh, oh,

 

DL's Writing Tip #62

 

Show action instead of telling action, or summarizing action.,

[Deustodo]

Example? Or as 4chan's user would say: "Sauce please?"

[DL]

Kawashima chased the car that had hit his uncle rapidly and relentlessly.

 

Instead of

 

Kawashima hated the car, and chased it, worrying for his uncle.

[Deustodo]

And you're telling this, because?

[DL]

...

 

It was an example.