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Here's Chapter 2 of the club fic.

 

This was kinda rushed, so expect rewrites later. Either that, or I could Darklink edit it.

 

 

 

“Who are you?” the boy asked.

 

“I’m the one who should be asking questions. Now get me out of here!” Yuki shouted.

 

The boy didn’t trust him. What is this place anyways and why is he here? He decided to explore the tunnel. As soon as he turned around, he heard a screaming girl.

 

“Help!” the girl shrieked.

 

“Wait…Wha- How-“ the boy was surprised to see a blue haired girl instead of the silver haired boy.

 

“Where am I?” the girl asked. “Why am I tied in roots?”

 

“Where did you come from?”

 

“I’ll tell you once you let me free!”

 

The boy untangled the roots and let girl free. As soon as she can move, she punched the boy hard enough to knock him out.

 

 

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Kris walked towards N.E.M.A Headquarters with a thousand butterflies in his stomach. Joining the organization that was out to find and kill him sounds like a suicide attempt, but oddly, it’s the complete opposite of that. He had thought of it over for a week and decided that if he wanted to live, this was his only choice. He had no shelter, no food, and no water. N.E.M.A would provide all of this.

 

Kris pushed the revolving door feeling as if he was about to enter hell. Well “hell” didn’t actually look too bad. The main lobby was larger than it looked from outside. The whole place was painted with different shades of silver. Hunters, men and women, walked here there in groups. Just to think, if they were to find out, he would be dead in seconds.

 

Kris took a deep breath and walked to the front desk where a lady wearing black, just like everyone else here, waited for him.

 

“Welcome to N.E.M.A Headquarters, home of Niro’s Elite Monster Anhialators,” the lady said.

 

So that’s what N.E.M.A stood for, Kris thought. They really do think we’re monsters.

 

“Let me take a wild guess. You’re here to join, aren’t you?” the lady asked.

 

“How’d you know?”

 

“A lot of people have applied to join. We only have two spots left, so they’re having tryouts at the Training Center.”

 

“Where’s the Training Center?”

 

“Third floor.”

 

Kris made his way to the elevator. The doors of the elevator opened, and there stood a man wearing a long coat as black as darkness. The man hid his eyes with an ebony wide-brimmed hat. Kris walked into the elevator thinking that the man could kill him any second, so he used is power to continually see five seconds into the future just incase the man would attack him.

 

Fortunately, nothing happened. The elevator got to the third floor, and both of them exited. Kris noticed that they were headed for the same direction. Is the man trying out, too?

 

“Break a leg,” the man said.

 

They both walked into the Training Center, and when they were about to split, the man said, “Literally.”

 

 

 

Was it too short?

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Yay! Thanks Twig, I really like being the bad guy :D

 

Also, for the time of battle, I'll have something to tell you: I can continuously look 0.8 seconds into the future without straining myself in any way (because my heart beats that often anyway). And I would probably use that during the fights, not to get tired for nothing.

 

But can you add the fight to the second chapter aswell? It's too short...

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BTW, can someone tell me how to improve on this chapter?

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Kids with Guns

 

- Why so happy? - Meika asked to Deus

 

- Simple, someone that I knew in the past told me that the world would fall in chaos if I was gone. - Deus said - I think she was right.

 

- I see, well, I think I couldn't expect anything less from you.

 

Deus and Meika were walking near Nexev's old Office's building, when they saw a soda can in the middle of the street, in perfect conditions, around a bear's trap.

 

- Ok, this is either the stupidest trap ever or someone forgot a soda. - Deus said

 

Meika didn't tell Deus but, they were being watched, and as soon as Deus reached the sodas can, up to 12 kids came from nowhere, aiming at Deus.

 

- Listen to me, you big guy - the kids leader said - If you don't want to eat bullets, you will come with us.

 

- I would rather eat bullets, since I haven't eaten anything for some time.

 

- Let's see how funny you get when you die!

 

The kid pulled the trigger, but Deus was quickly enough to move his body away, he then grabbed the bear's trap still open, and put near of the kids face.

 

- This is gonna hurt, kid.

 

Deus just needed to touch the trap with his finger to activate it. The trap's strength was so intense that it penetrated the kid’s skull, killing the kid immediately.

 

 

- If don't want to die just like your friend here, drop the guns. - Deus said - Actually, you can't die like him, since we have 1 trap, anyway, drop the guns if you don't wanna die.

 

All the kids were staring at their friend's body, and dropped their guns not by Deus's threat, but because they were shocked with scene.

 

- H-h-ho-how could you kill him like this... - one of the kids asked crying.

 

- Really simple, you need to place the trap near his head, then you activate the trap somehow without harm you, I will write a manual later then I'll give it to you. - Deus said

 

Deus looked at Meika, he was looking at the body as well, Deus grabbed it and gave it to Meika.

 

- What should I do with this? - Meika asked

 

- You are vampire, you drink blood, he has blood, you are hungry, and you will drink it. You probably don't eat for a long time, so I'm surprised you didn't start to suck his blood like a doomed.

 

- I see you care about me, in a totally weird way, but since the worse has passed, and I haven't drunk anything for about a year, I guess I will have to do what you suggested.

 

- So, kids, I know you must think I'm the worst being on the whole planet, you might be right, but I'm probably the strongest being as well, so you if wanna protection, if need something, then take me to your shelter.

 

The kids didn't say a word, after all, watching their leader being killed in such violent way and in the coldest blood form they had ever seen. They just picked up their guns and started to walk away, Deus and Meika followed then, as the time passed, Deus could noticed some of the mutants: Giant lizards, giant radioactive bees, even mole rats, but they were at the same side of a bulldog, so they didn't look that cute. The kids stopped in front of a fortress, with teenager gathering the gates, they asked who Deus and Meika were and why the kids brought them there as well, one of the kids just told them to open the gate quickly and they would give the details inside. The teenager agreed and opened it, their houses were made only by debris, water wasn't even nearby, and they probably would be dead in a few days without any help. The kids went into the main building, and asked to Deus and Meika to wait outside; they told who should be the leader, 15 years old a boy wearing a battle suit, from what happened, telling every detail, the leader try to think a solution for that inconvenient. The Leader opened the Main House's door. He looked at Deus, who was sitting on a chair watching some kids playing soccer. The leader took a deep breath, and walked into Deus's direction.

 

- You. - The fortress's leader said - I think we can do business with you.

 

Deus turned his head, laughed a bit and then stands up.

 

- The opposite - Deus said - I think you can help me.

 

- What do you want with us? - The leader asked at the same time angry and scared

 

- I want to save your people's ass.

 

- And how do you think you gonna help us?

 

- You need water, I can make water. You need protection, I can protect you.

 

- It is look like I don't really have much of a choice here, but I would have more trust in your if you create some of the water you mentioned right now. By the way, my name is Leon

 

- Then just give me a cup, Leon, and I will make some water.

 

Leon gave Deus a dirty plastic cup, Deus only cleaned it up first, and then start to create water inside the glass. How? Somehow, Deus managed to put together atoms of hydrogen and oxygen to make water. Deus gave the glass the water to Leon.

 

- The trick is how to the minerals into the water. - Deus saying laughing - Also, my name is Deus.

 

Leon drank all the water, it was so pure and clean that burned his inside, since the only water he could ever drink was radioactive.

 

- You, the one that likes to be called Deus, got a deal with us, but what do you want in exchange?

 

- Nothing at the moment, but I like to think that I should balance my good and bad actions for a while.

 

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eh, holding back your powers doesn't make them useless :P Being able to just gives you a higher chance of survival. yes people may notice he doesn't age, but that would take years as you don't necessairily age (physically/appearancewise) a whole lot during your twenties.

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Story = we still don't know.

 

 

Heheh... There's not many edits to be done, it's fine as it is BUT, I'd replace black as darkness with black as *insert something solid here* darkness isn't solid.

 

 

Anyway, I loled at my character's usage of his genderbending powers.

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