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[DL]

It's just mildly better.

 

But I DID take out the unneccesary tell.

 

Now, to wait for ch 2.

 

It's awesome how my character appeared in ch 1, though.

[Twig]

By the way, what should the title be?

[DL]

Hmmm... I still don't know the plot. All I know are the characters.

[Twig]

I guess it's too early to name...

 

New topic?

[DL]

Actually, what is the plot?

 

Unless you don't want to reveal it?

 

 

As for a new topic...

 

Hmmm...

 

 

Oh, I know, fly on the wall.

[Twig]

Actually' date=' what is the plot?

 

Unless you don't want to reveal it?

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I have a plot in mind, but it might change overtime...

 

Revealing will ruin all the surprises! =O But it is a club fic...

 

Oh' date=' I know, fly on the wall.

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Like, omnipresence or something like that?

[Master Red]

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My character isn't pure evil' date=' his power just claims something in return. No one said he liked murdering people to keep living, he just values his own life enough to do it ;)

[/quote']

He still creeps me to death. Will I seriously have to work with you in the end?

Well, *brushes imaginary dust of shoulders* I guess my work is done then :)

IDK if you'll have to work with him *shrugs* I just wanted to make a character with an interesting power (and also have a power that needs something in return from him)

But why people? Why not sheep?

Animals are often considered to be soulless creatures whereas humans and most humanoid creatures are considered to have one. The power requires a sacrifice from a creature with a soul, teherfore he cannot kill animals to satisfy the sacrifice needed.

 

I liked the first chapter, but I saw taht Dark Link managed to miss one spelling error. because right bnow the leader says somthing like "I wan him" (don't remember exactly what he sait but it was missing a T on the want)

[Scatty]

By the way' date=' what should the title be?

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Crescent Destiny? it's short, simple, and easy to remember.

 

I pretty much liked the first chapter, and it got even better after the edit.

 

And Red's char still freaks me out...can't you have him kill once a month?

[Naimo]

Back again ^^ (sorry for zoning out slightly, it's been hectic back here on the writing front ^^") Have I missed much?

[Master Red]

@Versatility: Of course I could, but where's the fun in that? ;)

[DL]

You missed a lot, such as a new club fanfic after having the other one scrapped.

 

Also, fly on the wall is like, a story that would be told from a fly on the wall's perspective, so, no going into characters heads, and all show and no tell.

 

It was hard for me at first.

[Naimo]

Hmmm, yes, I realise after reading back a few pages. Do you reckon Twig's still accepting characters?

[Scatty]

@Versatility: Of course I could' date=' but where's the fun in that? ;)

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...because you would kill 4 times less people? And because your powers would reduce 4 times slower?

Hmmm' date=' yes, I realise after reading back a few pages. Do you reckon Twig's still accepting characters?

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Yup. You can be my assistant if you want.

[DL]

I think he is.

 

Magnet... I thought you were a guy on YCM, too. O.o

[Master Red]

Well keeping (a natural) death away from you as well as having no need for sleep or food whereas you also have enhanced speed and strength must have a price. Killing someone each week makes it harder for him to acctually survive and therefore he isn't as OP as he would be if it aws simply once a month.

[Naimo]

@Darklink401: your reaction is the best xD seriously!

@Versatility: Nah, I think I'll have Mango as a standalone character (ie she's not your assistant)

 

Name: Mandy "Mango" Smith

 

Age&Gender: 16, Female

 

Description: Mango is 5'5", and has glossy brown hair that falls to her waist. Her eyes are a jade green. She wears a simple purple and pink checkered shirt, with a wide black belt buckled just under her chest. On her lower half are a pair of dark blue skinny jeans, and on her feet are a pair of calf-high black boots, which she wears over her jeans. On her hands, she wears a pair of mitts that stretch to just past her wrists. From her hands, sparks of harmless electricity constantly fly, though they fly so fast they are impossible to be seen by the naked eye, and they often fade before they can land on anything.

 

Power: Mango has too much electricty in her body (though it doesn't hurt her); because of this, she is unable to directly use it. To use her electricity, she must form a corona first, the size of which can vary from a small orb to as big as a model globe. Once the corona is formed, she can use her electricity in any way she wishes, though it is limited according to how big the corona is, as it shrinks with each use until it becomes nothing. If she doesn't use the corona, it will burn off energy itself and can last from 30 seconds to 3 minutes, depending on size.

There is a slight drawback; if Mango tries to bypass forming a corona, and uses her electricity directly, it will seriously hurt, perhaps even paralyse or kill her and others surrounding her. She also seems to have some kind of resistance to electricity as a result of her power, and, although this is unconfirmed, she is likely to increase the chances of a thunderstorm happening whenever she overuses her corona ability.

 

Personality: Mango is quite a kind, generous girl who would never swat a fly. She is a tad too naive sometimes, but at other times, she's quite smart and intelligent. Tricking her is difficult, as she knows exactly what she's thinking and doing, and appears to be more aware of the world than people first realise. However, she has a bad temper, and people must speak carefully to avoid angering her, otherwise they might find themselves having to face a corona and all the electrical energy in it.

[Twig]

@Magnet: I got an idea for your character. The hunters will catch her. Then they'll experiment on her and make her temporarily evil.

 

Will that be fine?

[Naimo]

Yeah, sure (Oddly I was expecting something like that to happen)

[Master Red]

I want another chapter of the forum fic x3 *jumps up and down*

[Blake]

I am looking forward to more of the CLub Fic. Also, Magnet's character interests me.

 

EDIT: We're Stickied!

[Twig]

Yay! This calls for a celebration!

[Master Red]

this calls for another one of my sexy parties ;)

[Blake]

But what kind of celebration?

 

@Red: No, not a sexy party. This is the internet. There are no women, just girly men (With a few exceptions).

[Twig]

I don't know...

 

Anybody have ideas?

[DL]

A celebration that should have to do with the club fanfic!

 

 

I still can't believe the chibi knights got stickyed... So happy... T_T

 

This club deserves it, though.

 

Oh, also, I forgot to mention, my character isn't bi, even though he can turn into both genders.

 

he's just straight.

 

Owait, gender-swapping, right....

 

 

Uh, he likes girls, not guys.

 

 

 

Though he's not the 'romantic' type, as you have probably noticed.