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[DL]

Try:

 

The clock struck the twelve with both hands, signaling that midnight had arrived. Born under a large tree, a baby unlike most babies was born. Even in the ominous wind, not a cry uttered from his small mouth. For confort, all he had was the warmth of his parent's embrace. All three of them sat there, illuminated only by the glow of the full moon.

[EliminateHRN]

How long is will the Prologue be? Just as few sentences or a few pages? Also, Darklink has a pretty good one.

[Twig]

Try:

 

The clock struck the twelve with both hands' date=' signaling that midnight had arrived. Born under a large tree, a baby unlike most babies was born. Even in the ominous wind, not a cry uttered from his small mouth. For confort, all he had was the warmth of his parent's embrace. All three of them sat there, illuminated only by the glow of the full moon.

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O_O

 

I'll try to be more creative. I'm only in seventh grade. By the way, you spelled comfort wrong.

[DL]

me = 10th grade

 

I know I mispelled it. I didn't spell-check. And I ahve an urge to put an n. If you were from brazil, you'd feel that same urge... XD

 

Anyway, you're creative, it's just, I showed more. See how showing can make a paragraph come to life?

[Twig]

me = 10th grade

 

I know I mispelled it. I didn't spell-check. And I ahve an urge to put an n. If you were from brazil' date=' you'd feel that same urge... XD

 

Anyway, you're creative, it's just, I showed more. See how showing can make a paragraph come to life?

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Yeah. I'll try the best I can. You can tutor me as I go. xD

[DL]

I'm not that good at writing XD

But if you want, you can run by any chapters through me first, so I can try and make them better.

[Twig]

I'm not that good at writing XD

But if you want' date=' you can run by any chapters through me first, so I can try and make them better.

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Oh really? I'll just finish the whole prologue or at least part of it and show it to you.

[DL]

I've seen better writers in my creative writing class.

 

But I sure know how to fix up a story. ^_^

[Twig]

I need some names for the father and the mother.

[DL]

Clerotes Vinnizio

Enalli Vinnizio

 

how's that?

[EliminateHRN]

I need some names for the father and the mother.

 

Names? I have trouble with girl names, but for the father maybe something like Eston something (I can't think of a good last name).

[Twig]

Clerotes Vinnizio

Enalli Vinnizio

 

how's that?

 

Clerotes is the mother and Enalli is the father right?

[DL]

We've established the last name as Vinnizio, right? Unless they're very strange parents that don't give their child their last name...

 

And this is set ages ago, so I dont think eston would work XD

 

It's a good name, though.

[Twig]

We've established the last name as Vinnizio' date=' right? Unless they're very strange parents that don't give their child their last name...

 

And this is set ages ago, so I dont think eston would work XD

 

It's a good name, though.

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Yeah, we're going with that last name.

[DL]

Clerotes Vinnizio

Enalli Vinnizio

 

how's that?

 

Clerotes is the mother and Enalli is the father right?

 

IDK, Clerotes can go both ways, but maybe it could be Enallia for the mother?

[Twig]

Clerotes Vinnizio

Enalli Vinnizio

 

how's that?

 

Clerotes is the mother and Enalli is the father right?

 

IDK' date=' Clerotes can go both ways, but maybe it could be Enallia for the mother?

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Ok. Multi Tasking is hard. >.<

[DL]

XD

 

I'm reading a fanfic and helping with one at the same time XD

[Twig]

Anybody have a good name for a blacksmith?

[Aero~]

Anybody have a good name for a blacksmith?

 

John Thecker.

[Twig]

Anybody have a good name for a blacksmith?

 

John Thecker.

 

Thecker? John is too modern. Remember, this is in a medieval setting.

 

Edit: I got the name. You guys can start a new topic now.

[Eury]

Krystök - Chief God and God of the Earth and Stone. He is the Guardian of Krystokalites, whose powder is said to contain 1/2 of the energy required to bring someone back from the dead.

 

Kørpusklar - A fiery scorpion who is said to reside underneath the gates of Ħäł. No man who has come face to face with this creature has lived to tell the tale. Eurynome finds this beast a pest as it feeds on the souls of the dead, which give Eurynome power.

 

Ħäł - The underworld. The God Eurynome resides here.

 

Some characters for ya. ;D

[Azerty-of-KoL]

Here's my idea for the setting.

 

I was thinking that there be three different countries/factions. In the NorthWest lives the natives of the continent. Their land mainly consists of mountains, which gives them a defensive advantage. The natives are deeply rooted in their myths and legends. The two other groups of people traveled from other nations. They were racing to conquer the last unexplored continent, and they now each own about a half of the remaining land. The natives were forced back to their current location, and own the least amount of land. The two foreign groups' land is made up of mostly marshes, plains, and rivers.

 

This is just a (really) rough draft.

[ArtemisFowl]

Username:ArtemisFowl

 

Favorite Books:Eragon/Eldest/Bringser and Alex Rider

 

Books Currently Reading: Alex Rider (Discontinued for now) Looking for books. Thinking about reading Percy Jackson. (I have like three of the books but haven't read them lol)

 

[spoiler=Writing Example:]

Jecht and Britney were sitting on a beach. Water glistened in both their hair. Their surf boards laying down beside the each of them. The sun had just started to rise on the beautiful water that adopted an orange color. They were laughing at eachother. "Are you serious?!" Britney said not able to contain her laughter any longer. "Yeah, I was on vaction and a huge wave came up. I went for it and wiped out. When I got out of the water my shorts were gone! But I didn't notice until I was ahlfway up the beach!" They both fell over laughing, then sat up again and fell silent. Jecht was staring into her face. Wow, I never noticed how beautiful she was. They had been friends since they were kids. They met in a surfing class and were friends instantly and he had never even considered the fact of them being anything but friends. She was staring back at him. They leaned in and closed their eyes but when Jecht open his eyes he found himself looking at his TV that was left on last night. "GODDAMMIT!!!!!!" He yelled at the top of his lungs. "NOT AGAIN!!!" He got up andlooked out his window staring at the beach and suddenly Britney's face popped up. "Angry much?" She said sarcasticly and Jecht face turned a bright red. OH MY GOD!! NO WAY SHE HEARD THAT!!!

 

[Eury]

Here's my idea for the setting.

 

I was thinking that there be three different countries/factions. In the NorthWest lives the natives of the continent. Their land mainly consists of mountains' date=' which gives them a defensive advantage. The natives are deeply rooted in their myths and legends. The two other groups of people traveled from other nations. They were racing to conquer the last unexplored continent, and they now each own about a half of the remaining land. The natives were forced back to their current location, and own the least amount of land. The two foreign groups' land is made up of mostly marshes, plains, and rivers.

 

This is just a (really) rough draft.

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1 problem: I was planning on making Dwarfs/Elves/Fairies/etc. D:

[Azerty-of-KoL]

Well, since this medieval/darkages, the whole continent will not have been explored. The Dwarfs/Elves/Fairies/etc. could just live in the wilderness, where humans have not explored.