Zimiri of the Muse Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 sory for my inactivity, ive been busy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 I need to stay up-to-date with this topic. =S I'm still drawing the characters for my Yu-Gi-Oh fan-fic and still planning my book series. So maybe some time this weekend I'll have more info on them for y'all. =] Can somebody fill me in with the current projects going on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 YCM Productions(Mine) is the only recent project.. Oyeah, the Club fic's put on hold.. And we've been discussing sentences, grammar and creatorx2's app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 YCM Productions? Explain, please. I'm not the best with grammar, but i'm getting better at it. Goodnight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 See my fanfiction. It's on this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Why could have I forgot application for here? Username: Kenta the Forbidden OneFavorite Books/Books Currently Reading: Percy Jackson, Cirque Du Freak, The Demonata[spoiler=Writing Example]This is a part of the "Chronicles of Kenta", a long story I'm writing now. It's about X, the main antagonist of the series, who was possessed by an evil immortal spirit, battling the main character "Kenta". The monsters appearing in this story, such as the Dragelions Horde and the Garzayz Clan, are 2 types of beasts created by the father of X, Extrarius, another major antagonist. Dragelion Precipitators and Garzayz Di Nadian can fly. Dragelions are a Dragon-Crustatian Hybrid, while Garvayz are zombie counterparts of living animals. Di Naidans are bats. [spoiler=Here it is] “Fall to death!” X cried, and struck at the speed of pure light. That second, I almost instantly blew myself away with a quickly chanted spell, and I went flying away, crashing and battering, cutting myself upon the spines and thorns of the minor beasts that I flew over. Some tried to dig its claws into my arms, but before any of the hands could grab me, I managed to mouth another piece of wizardry, and I flew into the open air. Several Dragelions of the Precipitator Horde shot up along with me, but I snapped my fingers, and they all exploded into green blood and slimy shellplates. The remains of the Mr. Uglies splattered upon the inconsequential devils, which screamed to death as the acidic blood melted their weak, gray flesh. As soon as the blade’s tip battered the ground, cutting through the earth, a slit wide enough for a plane to slip in skimmed through the ground, several thousands of miles deep, probably creating another plate. Dragelions and Garvayz, mutants and shadows, warriors and homes, everything in its path was swallowed in like a hungry black hole, screaming in sheer terror, but yet helplessly falling down. A Dragelion Precipitators and Garvayz Di Navian tried to fly up, but as a tremendous gust of wind blew into the gap, they were sucked in. I couldn’t see inside because it was covered in darkness, and I probably didn’t want to see it either. Cursing, X raised his blade again, preparing to propel himself the air with his blade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 1, 2010 Report Share Posted April 1, 2010 Apparently, I forgot to finish the last sentence in my last post. I meant: "Goodnight, guys, I'm going to bed." I want to read Percy Jackson, and I heard Cirque du Freak was good, so I want to check it out. Those are the top of my list of books to get, if they have them, at the library. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Why could have I forgot application for here? Username: Kenta the Forbidden OneFavorite Books/Books Currently Reading: Percy Jackson' date=' Cirque Du Freak, The Demonata[spoiler=Writing Example']This is a part of the "Chronicles of Kenta", a long story I'm writing now. It's about X, the main antagonist of the series, who was possessed by an evil immortal spirit, battling the main character "Kenta". The monsters appearing in this story, such as the Dragelions Horde and the Garzayz Clan, are 2 types of beasts created by the father of X, Extrarius, another major antagonist. Dragelion Precipitators and Garzayz Di Nadian can fly. Dragelions are a Dragon-Crustatian Hybrid, while Garvayz are zombie counterparts of living animals. Di Naidans are bats. [spoiler=Here it is] “Fall to death!” X cried, and struck at the speed of pure light. That second, I almost instantly blew myself away with a quickly chanted spell, and I went flying away, crashing and battering, cutting myself upon the spines and thorns of the minor beasts that I flew over. Some tried to dig its claws into my arms, but before any of the hands could grab me, I managed to mouth another piece of wizardry, and I flew into the open air. Several Dragelions of the Precipitator Horde shot up along with me, but I snapped my fingers, and they all exploded into green blood and slimy shellplates. The remains of the Mr. Uglies splattered upon the inconsequential devils, which screamed to death as the acidic blood melted their weak, gray flesh. As soon as the blade’s tip battered the ground, cutting through the earth, a slit wide enough for a plane to slip in skimmed through the ground, several thousands of miles deep, probably creating another plate. Dragelions and Garvayz, mutants and shadows, warriors and homes, everything in its path was swallowed in like a hungry black hole, screaming in sheer terror, but yet helplessly falling down. A Dragelion Precipitators and Garvayz Di Navian tried to fly up, but as a tremendous gust of wind blew into the gap, they were sucked in. I couldn’t see inside because it was covered in darkness, and I probably didn’t want to see it either. Cursing, X raised his blade again, preparing to propel himself the air with his blade. Accepted. Welcome. ^^ I've never heard of Cirque du Freak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 It's another series written by Darren Shan. Also known as the Saga of Darren Shan. Cirque Du Freak in US, the Saga of Darren Shan in the UK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 I need to read more, but YCM is...addicting. >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 Indeed, YCM is very addicting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 I've never heard of Cirque du Freak. I can't believe I read that . . . You've actually never heard of Cirque Du Freak!? Its one of my all time favorite book series and is increidbly addicting to read; which I have read them all. Those the ending at first got me mad I eventually liked how it turned out now that I'm an amature writter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 You spelt 'amatuar' wrong.. I think I spelt it wrong as well 0-O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 It's spelled Amateur. What an Amateurish mistake (lolpun) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 HAI! BTW, anyone want to check out my first peice of work on this site?] Warning-It's very long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 Sure.. Lemme find it.. Its in my subcriptions. By post quality might drop, but that just means i'm in a hurry, so dont grammar nazi or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I noticed we're not discussing anything... Discuss literary devices. I like using metaphors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Brilliant! A good metaphor can easily make a writting look intelligent and add depth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 Personifications are nice, too. They help build good imagery. cwutididthar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 yesidotwig And personifications are nice as well. I like using metaphors to try and "code" the truth so I can reveal it later . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 yesidotwig icwutudidthar And personifications are nice as well. I like using metaphors to try and "code" the truth so I can reveal it later . . . Personifications are metaphors. I don't really understand what the bold meant... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I like putting the key plots behind methaphors and the like so no one understands what I turly mean until I reveal it later in the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 I like putting the key plots behind methaphors and the like so no one understands what I turly mean until I reveal it later in the story Oh... The literary device that I don't usually write are allusions. I don't use them much, don't know why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 You should. I love the idea of "showing my hand" to the readers and them be completely unaware of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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