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Read them now. You think your fit to lead a writing club without reading the Harry Potter series!

Shame on you I would say' date='

But be that as it may.

You would make a better leader,

Than a no good cheater.

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I'll read them once I finish reading all the other books I want to read. By the way, this is not a book club.

 

How can you only read one and seven? The seventh must have made no sense.

 

The seventh made sense to me.

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Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading:Skullduggery Pleasent,The Edge Chronicles

 

Writing Examples:[spoiler=Writing Example]

I glanced up,the world stopped turning as my heart was beating in terror,there was an mysterious,unknown figure above me.I looked closely staring at this figure trying to find out what it was as my legs were shivering in fright,A thought came to my humble,small head that this could be some kind of angel.I thought i knew it when this what I called "Angel" flew down slowly.As he was making his descent my mind went blank and I tried to run away but Clouds blocked my way as a realised the angel didn't come down,i came up to the shiny but scary sky.I was weightless and was able to float around like i was a aeroplane.This angel came to me and looked very familiar to someone i had known,love and cherish for my whole life.This was my uncle Billy,I felt ashamed for trying to run away from someone i always wanted around me.Then suddenly I dropped.I opened my eyes.It was all a dream,I ran down the stairs in horror of what i had just witnessed.My Mom Quickly shouted "What Do you Think you are doing young man go back to bed and get a grip"I never thought i would hear that.I went back to my room to see something staring at me through the window,but what was it...

 

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hmm... accepted.

 

Great is there anything i can improve on maybe

 

Sorry If i am annoying you i just want to learn lol

 

You had a couple grammar and punctuation errors. It would help to separate it into different paragraphs. Besides that, it was pretty good.

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Books can make sense if read out of order. Every book series I read (Harry Potter, Twilight Saga, Inheritance Cycle, etc.), I started with the first book in the series. However, I started reading the Pendragon series on the 4th book and it made sense to me. I still want the other three though.

 

Since the Eragon movie was so screwed up, I decided to make a unofficial fan screenplay. Just for fun really. It is also my first screenplay I ever wrote. I'm also planning on starting the first book in a series I'm making in the next few days.

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hmm... accepted.

 

Great is there anything i can improve on maybe

 

Sorry If i am annoying you i just want to learn lol

 

You had a couple grammar and punctuation errors. It would help to separate it into different paragraphs. Besides that' date=' it was pretty good.

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Yeh i'll do that i frogot about paragraphs

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