Mr.WHAM Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I'd rather like to see ash with that girl who was flirting with him to make misty jealous from the pokemon 2000 movie...they'd be awesome...Then Misty, then May...And one of the gym leaders/other people that liked him, then someone else, then NUrse joy and then dawn....It makes him a pedo...he's like 20 now i think... also I would love to see broke with the rich girl who actually loved him....you know the episode with the bedrill chasing him in the forest and some girl came outta a limo and something about a snorlax towards the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Actually Ash hasn't aged in the series. It was proven by the creator. :/ And no. Dawn hates Ash, another reason why PearlShipping sucks. But that girl from the 2000 movie, 2000Shipping is one of the better Ash shippings. But I do not know about that Rich Girl. Care to explain more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Not a Pokemon club. I suggest we change the topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 What's a good way to get rid of Writers Block? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I get my ideas while riding in a car, walking aimlessly, sitting with nothing to do, etc. Usually when I have nothing to do but think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I try to get more inspiration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I have writers block right now. I usually just relax and listen to music. It helps IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 For writer's block, the best thing for me is to just ride it out. Usually I get a big idea after one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 Yeah, when I get bored of writing, I just wander off, come back, restart writing. It's really wierd. I get most of my ideas in the car, school, and before I go to sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted February 20, 2010 Report Share Posted February 20, 2010 I write sentences that have something remotely to do with the plot and string them together. It almost works.That's when I get my inspiration back. Most other ideas are lying in bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 heyy Twig want to affialte Club Pichu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 heyy Twig want to affialte Club Pichu Sure...Can I have a link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 sure there you gohttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-186562.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 [spoiler=Chapter 1]*9 Years Later*A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes, the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable. “Damn rain,” I murmured as a plethora of droplets of water came down on me. "Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed. I grunted. Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then! Here I am again, talking to myself. Someday, I'll scream at you for real. "Yeah that's right! Don't talk!" I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks. "Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do." The old man turned around with a surprised face. "Impossible!" "Look for yourself." I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless. He double checked, he triple checked, and he checked for the fourth time. There was not single missing item. "Well...I guess you can go home now." As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress. She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but a voice stopped her. "Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud. "Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you! I almost thought you were a monster!" My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena." Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up." I walked into my house expecting to see my parents, but they weren't there. Millena looked at me from the other room. I think she read my mind because she answered the question in my head. "Your parents are away. They left town as soon as you went to Tybalt. They said they're leaving to work on a more, how did they put it, suitable area. They'll come back once the storm dies," said Millena as she prepared a hot bath for me. "It's always about work for them. They always say they want the best for me, but I don't think they understand." "Understand what?" "That money can't buy happiness." "Nice proverb. Your bath will be ready in an hour." "An hour?!" "You want to take a bath in cold dirty water?" I gave her the look, signaling my answer. "I didn't think so. Patience is a virtue, my friend." Friend. That's all she thinks of me. I wish I had the courage to tell her that I love her, that I loved her since we first met. I had tried several times to take a deep breath and tell her the truth, but no words ever came out. I even tried writing her a letter admitting my love for her, but the letter was burnt. “Primerio…Do you hear that?” “What? Huh?” “I said do you hear that?” “I don’t here any-“ The sound of screaming stopped me. I could also hear the stomping feet of several horses. The screams became louder and louder. Then, the door burst open. “The village is under attack! The village is under attack!” I think I should stop there. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Bit short, but yeah. I think you could lessen the miss-lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Bit short' date=' but yeah. I think you could lessen the miss-lines.[/quote'] I can make it longer, but what miss-lines are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 For the proverb/patience bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 What do you mean by lessen? Take it out completely or take out some of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Take out some, or the whole lot for that section. It just looks wierd rigth now, with barely anything in between(the missed lines) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 I'll take your advice. I'll have to change some of it now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Also, as I said, it's short, so you could lengthen it. I suppose this is for the Club story? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Yeah. I'll make it longer, don't worry. Now we need a topic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 I have no idea. BTW, have you read the next bit of Two Perspectives? I finnaly got 'round to updating it. Two Parts in less than an hour. WHoot! Not exactly record-breaking though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Yes I did. I like it so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted February 21, 2010 Report Share Posted February 21, 2010 Heh. I've got ideas for up to C10, and then from C20 onwards, but in between, I have no idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.