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How o you think I wrote the story on the page before this one...Also my favorite thing I ever wrote is in that writing...I blew Up chicago....All in the course of a few minutes without even a nuke!!!!

 

lolwut?

 

 

I already planned most of the club fanfic.

 

[spoiler=Chap 1 so far...]

*9 Years Later*

A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes' date=' the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable.

 

"Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed.

 

I grunted. [i']Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then! Here I am again, talking to myself. Someday, I'll scream at you for real.[/i]

 

"Yeah that's right! Don't talk!"

 

I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks.

 

"Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do."

 

The old man turned around with a surprised face.

 

"Impossible!"

 

"Look for yourself."

 

I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless. He double checked, he triple checked, and he checked for the fourth time. There was not single missing item.

 

"Well...I guess you can go home now."

 

As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress.

 

She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but I voice stopped her.

 

"Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud.

 

"Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you! I almost thought you were a monster!"

 

My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena."

 

Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up."

 

I walked into my house expecting to see my parents, but they weren't there. Millena looked at me from the other room. I think she read my mind because she answered the question in my head.

 

"Your parents are away. They left town as soon as you went to Tybalt. They said they're leaving to work on a more, how did they put it, suitable area. They'll come back once the storm dies," said Millena as she prepared a hot bath for me.

 

"It's always about work for them. They always say they want the best for me, but I don't think they understand."

 

"Understand what?"

 

"That money can't buy happiness."

 

"Nice proverb. Your bath will be ready in an hour."

 

"An hour?!"

 

"You want to take a bath in cold dirty water?"

 

I gave her the look, signalling my answer.

 

"I didn't think so. Patience is a virtue my friend."

 

Friend. That's all she thinks of me. I wish I had the courage to tell her that I love her, that I loved her since we first met. I had tried several times to take a deep breath and tell her the truth, but no words ever came out. I even tried writing her a letter admitting my love for her, but the letter was burnt.

 

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I ,like IT!!!! and Yea i destoyed Chicago...Its towars the End of the story so I'll only post that Excerpt....

 

[spoiler=The destruction of Chicago] There was a white flash as a long cylindrical object appeared in his hands. He wasted no time and pulled it back as it released an invisible pulse wave. It connects with the two leaders as they were about to collide and kill each other. However, something wrong happened. The fuse box was sparking and Cruchinex could see something had gone wrong as every wire connected to an outlet began to surge and overload with power; all of the devices began to explode over the overload of power and light fires in their wake. Cruchinex could see the supercharged wires as sparks traveled down the walls and throughout the entire building. Suddenly there was a loud boom as something in the basement of lone building began to erupt. The building was shaking swayed left and right from is wake as the first person died in a resulting explosion from his car’s exhaust pipe. More and more destruction was caused as more vehicles blew up. On the top floor Cruchinex had an aerial view of what was happening. Then he saw the worst part yet.

The overloading circuits did not stop at the island surrounded building but headed forth unto the power plant. There it seemed to be contained as the plant had special devices for such overloads however as a light bulb exploded from traveling through the building wire sparks caught onto exposed wires and boosted the power of the overloading wave. The building began to erupt as volts of electricity arced from place to place and fire broke out. From the plant, it traveled through the wires in poles, circuits, and outlets all over the series. Electrical fires emitted throughout the city as Cruchinex watched Chicago literally burn to the ground.

The building he was in was not exempt from the chaos so as he watched the scene from a damaged window, more explosions erupted from the building swaying it to the right. Cruchinex lost his footing and was knocked into a wall. He lay there unconscious as the building began to crumble and swayed to his left and launched him out the very window Cruchinex was watching from. Unconscious he fell to his demise on the lake floor below when BlaCroc jumped into the air and caught the boy on his back. The child lay still as they landed softly on the ground. He awoke seconds later to see that he was on BlaCroc’s back. The wolf was running incredibly fast as they tried to escape from their ruination.

There was the sound of a car pulling up as Cruchinex turned to see a car pulling up to his house. The sky was so black from the fires and his vision was so blurry that he couldn’t make it out completely. “BlaCroc, go back,” he said as the wolf ignored him. “Go Back! Stop! STOP! STOOPP RUNNING NOW! Turn around!!” Cruchinex said with tears streaming down his face. He was convinced that the car belonged to his parents and that they had got his message. He began to beat the wolf as he still ran trying to escape. “Why won’t you turn around??!!! Why won’t you—“ Cruchinex was interrupted as the was a loud noise like thousands of peals of thunder all at once as he saw a fireball emerging from the FBI building. It began to grow rapidly in size as it expanded across the water incinerating everything it touched. It reached his house and Cruchinex screamed as his yellow house, the car, the building and the people were lost in the giant blaze. Finally, the fireball exploded and sent a shockwave in all directions which knocked down several towers, trees, and a multitude of other objects. The shockwave was faster than BlaCroc could run and reached them knocking the unconscious and sent them hurtling into the nearby Lake Michigan. They drifted away form the devastated scene, eventually waking up, with no memory of anything that happened but a clear view of all the destruction that had wreaked havoc in their city. Cruchinex and BlaCroc walked in silent tears, headed off into the unknown, with only each other for companionship and support and their hearts with nothing more they could bear.

 

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I'm only good at writing Pokemon stories. I hope you don't mind me giving an example here.

 

[spoiler=Pokemon: Maker of the Heroes]

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: Almost Too Soon:]

 

Peter ran down the hall of school. "Summer Vacation at last!" he said, feeling free. When he ran home, he changed his white polo and dark pants to his green shirt and yellow pants. His white shoes were slipped on in replacement of his black ones.

 

Peter then ran down the street, hoping to get to Professor T-Bone's lab, before all the new Pokemon were taken. He tripped over a rock, and landed on a Magby. The Magby then released flames from it's mouth in order to get Peter off, which he did.

 

"So, big brother...you're finally getting your first Pokemon?" said a strange blue-haired girl dressed in red and blue. "Cassandra..." said Peter, looking up at her. "So, is this your Magby?" "Actually, it is... the new Pokemon are all baby Pokemon, Budew, Magby, which I took, and Azurill, which is what is taken by Sammy, the new girl." Sammy was the new girl in town, and had left Peter with no choice but Budew. Cassandra left, and Peter got up and kept walking.

 

When he finally got there was a lne waiting behind him. "You came almost too soon..." said the tall, bulky Professor T-Bone. His white lab coat shined in the light. "Come in, Peter."

 

Peter walked in and looked at the table. The single Pokemon had to be Budew, what he wanted. He took it and ricocheted it off the ground. "Go, Budew!" he said. The little Budew bounced out, and his Poke-ball returned to his hand. The Budew jumped on Peter, then smiled.

 

"I think it likes you." said Professor T-Bone. "You should go now." Peter left the lab, mumbling to himself again and again 'You were almost too soon'.

 

He walked to the side-walk and walked out of town. It was time for him to enter the Pokemon League. He walked with courage until he ran into a group of bullies at school.

 

Oh no. This was NOT going to be good.

 

 

 

 

So, what do you think?

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I ' date='like IT!!!! and Yea i destoyed Chicago...Its towars the End of the story so I'll only post that Excerpt....

 

[spoiler=The destruction of Chicago'] There was a white flash as a long cylindrical object appeared in his hands. He wasted no time and pulled it back as it released an invisible pulse wave. It connects with the two leaders as they were about to collide and kill each other. However, something wrong happened. The fuse box was sparking and Cruchinex could see something had gone wrong as every wire connected to an outlet began to surge and overload with power; all of the devices began to explode over the overload of power and light fires in their wake. Cruchinex could see the supercharged wires as sparks traveled down the walls and throughout the entire building. Suddenly there was a loud boom as something in the basement of lone building began to erupt. The building was shaking swayed left and right from is wake as the first person died in a resulting explosion from his car’s exhaust pipe. More and more destruction was caused as more vehicles blew up. On the top floor Cruchinex had an aerial view of what was happening. Then he saw the worst part yet.

The overloading circuits did not stop at the island surrounded building but headed forth unto the power plant. There it seemed to be contained as the plant had special devices for such overloads however as a light bulb exploded from traveling through the building wire sparks caught onto exposed wires and boosted the power of the overloading wave. The building began to erupt as volts of electricity arced from place to place and fire broke out. From the plant, it traveled through the wires in poles, circuits, and outlets all over the series. Electrical fires emitted throughout the city as Cruchinex watched Chicago literally burn to the ground.

The building he was in was not exempt from the chaos so as he watched the scene from a damaged window, more explosions erupted from the building swaying it to the right. Cruchinex lost his footing and was knocked into a wall. He lay there unconscious as the building began to crumble and swayed to his left and launched him out the very window Cruchinex was watching from. Unconscious he fell to his demise on the lake floor below when BlaCroc jumped into the air and caught the boy on his back. The child lay still as they landed softly on the ground. He awoke seconds later to see that he was on BlaCroc’s back. The wolf was running incredibly fast as they tried to escape from their ruination.

There was the sound of a car pulling up as Cruchinex turned to see a car pulling up to his house. The sky was so black from the fires and his vision was so blurry that he couldn’t make it out completely. “BlaCroc, go back,” he said as the wolf ignored him. “Go Back! Stop! STOP! STOOPP RUNNING NOW! Turn around!!” Cruchinex said with tears streaming down his face. He was convinced that the car belonged to his parents and that they had got his message. He began to beat the wolf as he still ran trying to escape. “Why won’t you turn around??!!! Why won’t you—“ Cruchinex was interrupted as the was a loud noise like thousands of peals of thunder all at once as he saw a fireball emerging from the FBI building. It began to grow rapidly in size as it expanded across the water incinerating everything it touched. It reached his house and Cruchinex screamed as his yellow house, the car, the building and the people were lost in the giant blaze. Finally, the fireball exploded and sent a shockwave in all directions which knocked down several towers, trees, and a multitude of other objects. The shockwave was faster than BlaCroc could run and reached them knocking the unconscious and sent them hurtling into the nearby Lake Michigan. They drifted away form the devastated scene, eventually waking up, with no memory of anything that happened but a clear view of all the destruction that had wreaked havoc in their city. Cruchinex and BlaCroc walked in silent tears, headed off into the unknown, with only each other for companionship and support and their hearts with nothing more they could bear.

 

 

Ummm....okay.....

 

I'm only good at writing Pokemon stories. I hope you don't mind me giving an example here.

 

[spoiler=Pokemon: Maker of the Heroes]

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: Almost Too Soon:]

 

Peter ran down the hall of school. "Summer Vacation at last!" he said' date=' feeling free. When he ran home, he changed his white polo and dark pants to his green shirt and yellow pants. His white shoes were slipped on in replacement of his black ones.

 

Peter then ran down the street, hoping to get to Professor T-Bone's lab, before all the new Pokemon were taken. He tripped over a rock, and landed on a Magby. The Magby then released flames from it's mouth in order to get Peter off, which he did.

 

"So, big brother...you're finally getting your first Pokemon?" said a strange blue-haired girl dressed in red and blue. "Cassandra..." said Peter, looking up at her. "So, is this your Magby?" "Actually, it is... the new Pokemon are all baby Pokemon, Budew, Magby, which I took, and Azurill, which is what is taken by Sammy, the new girl." Sammy was the new girl in town, and had left Peter with no choice but Budew. Cassandra left, and Peter got up and kept walking.

 

When he finally got there was a lne waiting behind him. "You came almost too soon..." said the tall, bulky Professor T-Bone. His white lab coat shined in the light. "Come in, Peter."

 

Peter walked in and looked at the table. The single Pokemon had to be Budew, what he wanted. He took it and ricocheted it off the ground. "Go, Budew!" he said. The little Budew bounced out, and his Poke-ball returned to his hand. The Budew jumped on Peter, then smiled.

 

"I think it likes you." said Professor T-Bone. "You should go now." Peter left the lab, mumbling to himself again and again 'You were almost too soon'.

 

He walked to the side-walk and walked out of town. It was time for him to enter the Pokemon League. He walked with courage until he ran into a group of bullies at school.

 

Oh no. This was NOT going to be good.

 

 

 

 

So, what do you think?

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It's fine. Could have used more details.

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[spoiler=Chapter 1 so far...]

*9 Years Later*

A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes, the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable.

 

"Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed.

 

I grunted. Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then! Here I am again, talking to myself. Someday, I'll scream at you for real.

 

"Yeah that's right! Don't talk!"

 

I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks.

 

"Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do."

 

The old man turned around with a surprised face.

 

"Impossible!"

 

"Look for yourself."

 

I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless. He double checked, he triple checked, and he checked for the fourth time. There was not single missing item.

 

"Well...I guess you can go home now."

 

As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress.

 

She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but I voice stopped her.

 

"Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud.

 

"Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you! I almost thought you were a monster!"

 

My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena."

 

Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up."

 

I walked into my house expecting to see my parents, but they weren't there. Millena looked at me from the other room. I think she read my mind because she answered the question in my head.

 

"Your parents are away. They left town as soon as you went to Tybalt. They said they're leaving to work on a more, how did they put it, suitable area. They'll come back once the storm dies," said Millena as she prepared a hot bath for me.

 

"It's always about work for them. They always say they want the best for me, but I don't think they understand."

 

"Understand what?"

 

"That money can't buy happiness."

 

"Nice proverb. Your bath will be ready in an hour."

 

"An hour?!"

 

"You want to take a bath in cold dirty water?"

 

I gave her the look, signalling my answer.

 

"I didn't think so. Patience is a virtue my friend."

 

Friend. That's all she thinks of me. I wish I had the courage to tell her that I love her, that I loved her since we first met. I had tried several times to take a deep breath and tell her the truth, but no words ever came out. I even tried writing her a letter admitting my love for her, but the letter was burnt.

 

 

It's 3rd quarter in my school and my teachers are packing me with homework.

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