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this is chapter 1

 

*9 Years Later*

A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes, the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable.

 

"Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed.

 

I grunted. Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then! Here I am again, talking to myself. Someday, I'll scream at you for real.

 

"Yeah that's right! Don't talk!"

 

I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks.

 

"Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do."

 

The old man turned around with a surprised face.

 

"Impossible!"

 

"Look for yourself."

 

I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless. He double checked, he triple checked, and he checked for the fourth time. There was not single missing item.

 

"Well...I guess you can go home now."

 

As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress.

 

She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but I voice stopped her.

 

"Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud.

 

"Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you! I almost thought you were a monster!"

 

My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena."

 

Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up."

 

 

and you've read the epilogue, right? If not, then go find it, cause I'm not going back to page 5 or whatevs...

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I'm writing one called Zero Blades. It's okay, I guess. Not that original, IDK.

 

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[spoiler=Preview of first chapter]

Ch 1 - The Zero Project

 

 

Two girls stood at the entrance of a hotel. One had sky blue hair and the other brown hair tied into a ponytail.

 

The brown-haired girl looked at the blue-haired girl. “How long are you going to stare off into the distance like that? We’ve got to get moving.”

 

The blue-haired girl nodded. “I know, I know, I’m just… thinking about what we’re doing… are we doing the right thing?”

 

“You know that thinking about things in that way would make anything seem bad, but if you see this in a positive light, it’ll get us one step closer to our goal.”

 

“You’re right, let’s get moving.”

 

The girls walked inside the hotel. There was a receptionist at the desk, and a few people wandering around, some carrying bags, others pulling suitcases.

 

The blue-haired girl scratched her head. “Well, here we are... What should we do now Arya?”

 

Arya walked toward the receptionist desk. “It’s no use standing here. So let’s go see what we find.”

 

The receptionist saw the two girls, and greeted them. “Hello, may I help you two young ladies? For how long will you be staying?”

 

“We’re not here to stay. We’re just looking for someone, and we think she may have checked in here. Is a young girl about our age staying here?” Rin asked

 

The receptionist nodded. “Actually, a she just left a few seconds ago. You might be able to catch her.”

 

Arya waved at the receptionist as she and Rin walked out of the hotel. “Okay, thanks.”

 

When Arya and Rin exited the building, Arya began looking left and right. Cars zoomed past her, and the occasional horn was heard over the roaring of engines. There were several people standing at a bus stop across the street. There were two kids standing near a woman who was talking on a cell phone, and a girl who looked to be in her teens. There was also a man looking at his watch.

 

Arya pointed at a girl standing at the nearby bus stop. “That could be her, she matches the description.”

 

Rin nodded and they headed toward the girl. A bus passed them and stopped in front of the bus stop, blocking the girl from view. When the bus began driving again, the girl was gone.

 

 

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Soory! and speaking of writing books...

 

 

I should tell you guys. I'm on the fifth draft of a book that starts my series. It's really hard!This series is about another world, like Earth, but way more earth(land) than water. It's based off around a girl who is fullfilling a prohpecy she doesn't know about, with lots of romance, action, and sadness.

 

And I'm on the second part of another book I'm writing. It's like this: When you dream you enter the dream world. The dream world is a giant labyrinth (i mean giant) and in the middle is Rogue's castle. Rogue is the leader of this all, and he's like a giant adramalech-looking thing. the main character has to destroy him, because he's evil and wants to kill her, and she was stuck in the dream world for two years....

 

whatever, if you dont get it, PM me. lol

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Would you care to tell us how much the Percy Jackson movie Phailed?

 

Go to movie section. We're talking about it there.

 

Hey Twig are you you gonna join the fan fic?

 

The Pokefanfic? YES!

 

If someone would give me a quick resume of the Fanfic so far and how we're gonna do this' date=' I'd gladly assist.

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[spoiler=Darklink showed you ch1. This is the prologue]

The clock struck the twelve with both hands, signaling that midnight had arrived. Born under a large tree, a baby unlike most babies was born. Even in the ominous wind, not a cry uttered from his small mouth. For comfort, all he had was the warmth of his parent's embrace. All three of them sat there, illuminated only by the glow of the full moon and light of the shining stars. The mother cried, a smile across her face...

 

"It's a miracle," Clerotes, the father, said.

 

Before the baby was born, Enallia, the mother, had a severe illness. They thought the illness could harm the baby, or even worse, kill him. It was a miracle to the parents that nothing had happened. Nothing went wrong. Nothing at all.

 

"Oh it's a boy! What should we name him?"

 

"Now, now, Enallia. We should find a good place for you and the baby to rest."

 

 

 

*Seven Years Later*

 

"Father, where are you going?" asked Primerio.

 

"To work in the fields."

 

Primerio frowned and crossed his arms. "I thought you only worked for eight hours."

 

"I am working two more hours. The price of food has risen. I'm afraid you'll have to start working, too."

 

"Work in the fields?"

 

"They won't take anymore workers, and if they were, they would not take you. You're too young. I've talked to the blacksmith, Tybalt Reguran."

 

"You want me to work for him?"

 

"You'll be his apprentice."

 

"But father! He is a grumpy old man. Nobody likes him at all."

 

"I am afraid we have no choice. He's the only one taking an apprentice. We have spoken to everyone. You will start tomorrow."

 

Primerio's father headed outside with a sad face. Before he left, he said one more thing. "Your mom and I only want the best for you."

 

Primerio was about to reply, but his father had already closed the door. Why do they always have to work? Not only are they in the fields most of the time, but do we really have to live in a village where kids are scarce? Primerio had caught the bad habit of talking to himself. There’re hardly any kids, and the kids that are actually there don't talk to him.

 

Primerio decided to go outside to have his last walk around town freely before he has to work with Tybalt Reguran, the blacksmith. As he strolled down the green grassy field, he saw a girl. He stopped in his tracks. He had never seen a girl before. He'd seen women, but never a girl, much less one the same age as him.

 

The girl stood in the middle of the field, facing away from Primerio. At first glance, he knew he liked her. She had long, flowing brown hair, and she wore a thin white dress that flew in the direction of the wind. She was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

 

The girl slowly bent down and picked up a white daisy. Primerio quickly ran to a nearby tree to hide. The girl plucked the petals of the daisy one by one. The blowing wind sent the white petals spinning around the girl. Then, the petals flew towards Primerio. Thinking that the wind will blow the petals to some place else, he remained in his position. The petals continued to head toward him. Before long, he realized those petals weren’t going to stop.

 

The girl turned around to see where the petals had gone. Primerio stood frozen in fear for a second before he turned around to hide. Please don’t find me, please don’t find me, please don’t find me. Plea-

 

“Hello there,” a little voice said.

 

“Oh. Oh hi,” Primerio said, a little too loud. He’s never felt this before. He found it harder to talk for some reason, and he found himself breathing deeper. What's...what's this feeling...

 

"Uhmm...hello? You look sick. Are you alright?" the girl said.

 

"Uh...yeah. I'm fine."

 

"Well your face is red and-"

 

"Umm...I gotta go. Bye."

 

Primerio freaked out and ran.

 

 

What he doesn't know is, this is the first time he saw his future love.

 

 

 

More info is on the front page. Check Events.

 

I would help as well' date=' if I could get a tiny replay of your progress on it.

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See above.

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I forgot about this thread. I have to many "projects" I'm working on at the moment, a few fan-fics, a screenplay, and a book series. I have to much time on my hands.

 

Anyway, I'm thinking about going to the library this weekend. I'm wondering if anybody has any books I should check out (if they have them). I already read the Harry Potter series, Dark Tower series, and Inheritance Cycle (Eragon). I was thinking about checking the Percy Jackson books out, I like reading the books before watching the movies. So, any books I should check out (if it is a series, give the name of the author and/or the first book in the series)?

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I'm writing one called Zero Blades. It's okay' date=' I guess. Not that original, IDK.

 

EDIT:

 

[spoiler=Preview of first chapter']

Ch 1 - The Zero Project

 

 

Two girls stood at the entrance of a hotel. One had sky blue hair and the other brown hair tied into a ponytail.

 

The brown-haired girl looked at the blue-haired girl. “How long are you going to stare off into the distance like that? We’ve got to get moving.”

 

The blue-haired girl nodded. “I know, I know, I’m just… thinking about what we’re doing… are we doing the right thing?”

 

“You know that thinking about things in that way would make anything seem bad, but if you see this in a positive light, it’ll get us one step closer to our goal.”

 

“You’re right, let’s get moving.”

 

The girls walked inside the hotel. There was a receptionist at the desk, and a few people wandering around, some carrying bags, others pulling suitcases.

 

The blue-haired girl scratched her head. “Well, here we are... What should we do now Arya?”

 

Arya walked toward the receptionist desk. “It’s no use standing here. So let’s go see what we find.”

 

The receptionist saw the two girls, and greeted them. “Hello, may I help you two young ladies? For how long will you be staying?”

 

“We’re not here to stay. We’re just looking for someone, and we think she may have checked in here. Is a young girl about our age staying here?” Rin asked

 

The receptionist nodded. “Actually, a she just left a few seconds ago. You might be able to catch her.”

 

Arya waved at the receptionist as she and Rin walked out of the hotel. “Okay, thanks.”

 

When Arya and Rin exited the building, Arya began looking left and right. Cars zoomed past her, and the occasional horn was heard over the roaring of engines. There were several people standing at a bus stop across the street. There were two kids standing near a woman who was talking on a cell phone, and a girl who looked to be in her teens. There was also a man looking at his watch.

 

Arya pointed at a girl standing at the nearby bus stop. “That could be her, she matches the description.”

 

Rin nodded and they headed toward the girl. A bus passed them and stopped in front of the bus stop, blocking the girl from view. When the bus began driving again, the girl was gone.

 

 

 

so, what do you guys think of this?

 

Also, essays =/= short story fiction

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