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Favorite Books: Nightworld Series His Dark Materials' date=' Harry Potter Series, The Penultimate Peril(Series of Unfortunate events)

Books Currently Reading:Percy Jackson Series, Nightworld Series, Ersatz elevator.

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Her body was shaking and spazzing. Her eyes rolled back into her head, and then came into view. She sat their, looking at the sky. Her eyes widened as a shadow passed over us. I looked up. Oh, no, it was Zetra, the gaint bird that stole her, and I saved her from. It was a magnifecent, majestic bird, but it was evil and nasty.

 

I stood up, and looked at the bird. It was wearing a necklace, encrusted with two large rubies, and a orb of a silver liquid. I looked hard at it as Zetra turned around and landed in front of me. I have her soul. It murmured to me. I could understand it since I was a bird shapeshifter.

 

Give it back. I snarled.

 

Or what, you'll kill her? I don't care, I've got her soul. That's enough. It smiled and cocked its head as it stepped closer.

 

It's not enough if you came back for her body.I knew he was trying to be tricky. Zetra was a little stupid.

 

Zetra shook it's feathers and sqwuaked at me. I ruined his plan. Then, I notcied I'd been stepping back. She was still on the ground...

 

Zetra snatched her body and stepped back, then hit me with his wings and took off. I was knocked out. No...Don't go....Come...Back...

 

 

Very random story...

 

and I love to write/read.

 

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you don't seem excited...

 

About what?

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter one so far...]

*9 Years Later*

A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes' date=' the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable.

 

"Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed.

 

I grunted. [i']Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then![/i]

 

"Yeah that's right! Don't talk!"

 

I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks.

 

"Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do."

 

The old man turned around with a surprised face.

 

"Impossible!"

 

"Look for yourself."

 

I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless.

 

"Well...I guess you can go home now."

 

As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress.

 

She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but I voice stopped her.

 

"Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud.

 

"Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you!"

 

My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena."

 

Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up."

 

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