Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Username:Stardust WyvernFavorite Books: Nightworld Series His Dark Materials' date=' Harry Potter Series, The Penultimate Peril(Series of Unfortunate events)Books Currently Reading:Percy Jackson Series, Nightworld Series, Ersatz elevator.[spoiler=Writing Example']Her body was shaking and spazzing. Her eyes rolled back into her head, and then came into view. She sat their, looking at the sky. Her eyes widened as a shadow passed over us. I looked up. Oh, no, it was Zetra, the gaint bird that stole her, and I saved her from. It was a magnifecent, majestic bird, but it was evil and nasty. I stood up, and looked at the bird. It was wearing a necklace, encrusted with two large rubies, and a orb of a silver liquid. I looked hard at it as Zetra turned around and landed in front of me. I have her soul. It murmured to me. I could understand it since I was a bird shapeshifter. Give it back. I snarled. Or what, you'll kill her? I don't care, I've got her soul. That's enough. It smiled and cocked its head as it stepped closer. It's not enough if you came back for her body.I knew he was trying to be tricky. Zetra was a little stupid. Zetra shook it's feathers and sqwuaked at me. I ruined his plan. Then, I notcied I'd been stepping back. She was still on the ground... Zetra snatched her body and stepped back, then hit me with his wings and took off. I was knocked out. No...Don't go....Come...Back... Very random story... and I love to write/read. Accepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 you don't seem excited... About what? [spoiler=Chapter one so far...]*9 Years Later*A rain storm has been terrorizing the little town of Myzville for a whole week now. The strong wind destroyed homes' date=' the continuous rain created floods, and the bitter cold air caused illness to spread. Everyone was completely miserable. "Keep working you slow poke!" Tybalt screamed. I grunted. [i']Slow poke?! I work faster than you! If you're not the boss of me, I would've killed you by then![/i] "Yeah that's right! Don't talk!" I looked at my hard day's work; five swords, fifteen axe heads, twenty pairs of forks and knives, and twenty- five horseshoes. For the first time, I had finished every single assignment Tybalt threw at me. Looking at my body, I saw cuts and bruises. It looked as if I tripped on a bed of sharp rocks. "Hey oldster. I finished everything you asked me to do." The old man turned around with a surprised face. "Impossible!" "Look for yourself." I smiled as Tybalt looked through my work. Seeing his surprised face was priceless. "Well...I guess you can go home now." As soon as he said the word, I sprinted out and headed to my house. The rain drenched me, but I ignored it. I almost slipped as I ran through a path of mud. The little hut that is my house was right there, just a few yards away. My hand could almost reach the door knob but suddenly, I tripped in a pile of wet, dirty mud. The door of the tiny house opened, revealing a girl in her teens wearing a pink dress. She looked out, but no one was there. "I swear I heard someone. Must have been the wind." The girl was about to close the door, but I voice stopped her. "Wait! I'm over here!" I slowly got myself up and looked at myself. I was completely covered in mud. "Primerio? Primerio, is that you?" The girl started off with a giggle, but then she began bursting with laughter. "Oh look at you!" My face was red, but the mud covered it. "Oh hi Millena." Millena continued to laugh. "Come on inside. I'll get you cleaned up." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 a new memeber in your club...I know I would be... but what is that chapter one of? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 It is for the club fanfic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyvern Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Oh about retrieving items for the reserruction of a dead lover, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Username: Ensenada Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading: Alex Rider Series Writing Example: No examples currently, but trust me, I can write ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Yeah. What do think? @Ensenada: Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
۞Jolteon۞ Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Pretty good.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 We need a new topic. Discuss horrible books. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Didn't we already do this? Anyways, pretty much every single teen romance novel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 o.O I just checked the 1st post. My fanfics are in a spoiler. Sweet... Anyway, a horrible book... IDK, I like most books I read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 And Another Thing... By Eoin Colfer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Eoi COlfer was epic. Artemis Fowl was genius (lolpun) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I just googled "Worst Book of All Time". Guess what book is number 1? Twilight! Hahaha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Does anybody here actually like Twilight? I don't, but I'm wondering if others do. Totally off topic, but I just realized I'm an advanced member. Yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 XD I watched the movie, and I must say, shiny vampires SUCK... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Hooray for you! And I don't like Twilight. The movie sucked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ensenada Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Twilight wins that prize, no contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 There are some books that are so bad, you don't even understand them. So yes, there are worse books than Twilight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Hooray for you! And I don't like Twilight. The movie sucked. how can anything with shiny vampires NOT suck? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azerty-of-KoL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 I just realized that a book by Adolf Hitler is more popular than Twilight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted February 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 What book is that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Any book on the holocaust, I'm guessing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radio414 Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 Eoi COlfer was epic. Artemis Fowl was genius (lolpun) Artemis Fowl is good,But And Another Thing is... to put it lightly...FAIL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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