Twig Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 How about a serious comedy fic? Not like gag comedy' date=' but serious comedy. Like, a series based on tense situations that seme they would be silly, but the tension, and the fact the characters are all serious, make it funny.[/quote'] It kinda...makes sense. No, not really. @End Game: Yeah, I just noticed. The active people here are 5 and 6 stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Trust me, it does. I'll give you an example soon. Shin stood silently staring at Ken. I don't think he's noticed me yet... no, he hasn't, there's no way... Shin sunk his head down a bit, to avoid being seen as Ken turned around. Did he notice? Did he notice I was looking at him? Wait, what if he found out? What if he found out I replaced his pencil box with another one, with the exact same pencils? Was he able to tell the difference? But HOW? It's impossible...there's no way. no, no, he wouldn't know it's me. Shin eyed Ken suspiciously. But what if he did know? Did he scan the pencil box for fingerprints? DId he uncover it was me? That it was me who swapped it? Did he figure out that I plan to swap it again, for the original, later on? This is bad... no, I can't let myself get uptight. He'll notice. He'll notice it was me, and my crime will be found out... And notice his 'crime' was swapping the pencil box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 >.> Dl it sounds like something you would do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Well, that's what I meant by serious comedy. The character is so serious, but to us, it seems comedic, cause it's so silly that he would take it seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Trust me' date=' it does. I'll give you an example soon. Shin stood silently staring at Ken. [i']I don't think he's noticed me yet... no, he hasn't, there's no way...[/i] Shin sunk his head down a bit, to avoid being seen as Ken turned around. Did he notice? Did he notice I was looking at him? Wait, what if he found out? What if he found out I replaced his pencil box with another one, with the exact same pencils? Was he able to tell the difference? But HOW? It's impossible...there's no way. no, no, he wouldn't know it's me. Shin eyed Ken suspiciously. But what if he did know? Did he scan the pencil box for fingerprints? DId he uncover it was me? That it was me who swapped it? Did he figure out that I plan to swap it again, for the original, later on? This is bad... no, I can't let myself get uptight. He'll notice. He'll notice it was me, and my crime will be found out... And notice his 'crime' was swapping the pencil box. Makes sense now. I think there's irony in it, helping the comedic effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Actually, the character is being completely serious. But yeah, that's basically it. As for OUR fanfic, we can make it even something with normal people, who have books that let them do stuff, and they have to fight shadow creatures that get sucked into the books once they're defeated (on-the-spot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Actually' date=' the character is being completely serious. But yeah, that's basically it. As for OUR fanfic, we can make it even something with normal people, who have books that let them do stuff, and they have to fight shadow creatures that get sucked into the books once they're defeated (on-the-spot)[/quote'] That's actually a great idea. I might go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 o,o I was half-joking, or rather, I just wrote what popped into my mind.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kira Magister Magi Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 You realize School Rumble (anime) is basically like that, right? It's funny mainly because of misunderstandings that the chars take either too literally or overly seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Gokusen's the same thing too. Though, the theme of a teacher being a yakuza leader makes it seem more of a situational comedy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Well' date=' that's what I meant by serious comedy. The character is so serious, but to us, it seems comedic, cause it's so silly that he would take it seriously.[/quote'] I suck at comedys. But I guess I could give it a try? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Remember, though. Dark Humor rules. Try writing vuvuzelas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Deus is the kind of comedy. Without trying, he writes things in a funny way. Twig, I'm gonna PM you a cleaner version of that plot, then, if you think it's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Deus is the kind of comedy.oreally.DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS DEUS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I meant king. It was a typo >,> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 IT is not DEUS, End Game, It is DESU, now restart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 nan desu?~ it is also a Japanese phrase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 So.... what? I don't see any reason to say it is a japanese phrase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I don't either. But I am bored~desu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 There's an idiot in Fanfiction named madd. It's hard to explain something to an idiot. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 xD So, are you planning to write that story I gave you the idea for, Twig, or do ya want to give the job to the super writer? I'm free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 I might give to you since I'm working with PokePoll Murder Mystery. Or maybe I can write to get used to not being lazy. ...We can both write. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 @YukiWhat about those other 7-9 Fan-fics your working on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted July 15, 2010 Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 @Lulu - I'm only working on my naruto fanfic right now. I'm free, basically. @Twig - Hmm, I wouldn't mind writing it all. I can turn an epic story epic with my super write epicness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted July 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2010 @Lulu - I'm only working on my naruto fanfic right now. I'm free' date=' basically. @Twig - Hmm, I wouldn't mind writing it all. I can turn an epic story epic with my super write epicness.[/quote'] I can write one chapter, and you do the next and so forth...Would that work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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