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<«Writer's Arena»>

 

[align=center]Welcome to Writer's Arena, where inventors of all kind unite. In this club, we discuss our new ideas and our creations. So if you're a card-maker, a writer, a roleplayer, or some other kind of creator, join now!

 

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Rules[/b]]

Number One Rule: Have average grammar and punctuation in your posts, unless we're joking around or if you have a disorder. Your grammar doesn't have to be perfect, but I don't want any noob-like sentences.

 

No Flaming

No Spamming

No Flooding

No Short-Posting

No "What are we talking about?" Posts

All YCM Rules apply.

 

 

 

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Warning System[/b]]

1st Offense= Warning

2nd Offense= 1 Neg Rep

3rd Offense= 2 Neg Reps and Ban Warning

4th Offense= Banned from the club.

 

Members Warned:

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Members[/b]]

Leaders:

Twig

Darklink401

 

Co-Leaders:

 

 

Advance Members:

Le Createur

DecayingClaw

Marsuvees Black

Magnet

Deustodo

Atman

End Game

 

Basic Members:

Blazing Wind

Master Red

KaiNine Kaisu

Dizzy~

Lazaruz

Aqua Girl

Xazeon

Nexev

Nígh₮ ฬαŁkεЯ™

Akumakagemaru

ThePhantomGuy

Versatality

Phantom Roxas

Cindy <3's You

Zeonark

radio414

creatorx2

Ayasato-chan

Deadly Beauty

Tempest Dahlia

Jake the Sage

Deranged Yoda

Kira Kills

Clair

WinterNights

Eurynome

Smeargle

Ice

The Donkey

Mr. WHAM

Cephus

Max C.

Brittle Ice

Lua

Scyire

vengeful lemonS

Spartan 919

Bucketkiller19

chrid97

ArtemisFowl

KWLegend

IonicIvy

Compass3

Daily News

-Pichu-

thurkear

Raylen

Space Ranger Gold

Benjo 8

Goblin Inquisitor

Grasslander

Stardust Wyvern

Ensenada

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Entry App[/b]]

Just ask.

 

Please wait for Darklink401 or me to accept you.

 

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[spoiler=[b]Events[/b]]

 

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[align=center][spoiler=[b]Our Fan-Fics[/b]]

 

[spoiler=[b]FanFics by Darklink401[/b]]

Fake Knights- The Story

Protect

Kami Matsuri

Origin of Awakening

Hayate the Combat Tenant

Naruto: Legend of the Kyubi Shards

 

 

Strøm ov Gulbrand by Morpheous Erobos and Enrise

Vene by Scatty

The Testament of Extrarius by End Game

Final Fantasy XV by Atman

Awakening Deception by Deustodo

Yugioh! Tales of a Galaxy by Zeonark

Good to be Bad by Master Red

Humans, Spirits, and Neo Androids[One Shot] by Magnet

A Day in the Life by radio414

Story of the Burning Treasure of Lost Kings by Le Createur

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Darklink401's Writing Tips[/b]]

Darklink writing tip #2

 

"Eliminate 'to be' verbs."

 

Darklink writing tip #3

 

"Don't stretch out your sentences with a 'that' or 'which' clause."

 

Darklink's writing tip # 5

 

"Telling or summarizing action works if the protagonist is doing something else."

 

Writing tip #13

 

"Don't use an exclamation mark AND a question mark. Stick with one per sentence."

 

Darklink's writing tip #15

 

"Never say never. All these writing tips are just suggestions on how to make writing better, but you shouldn't take it as "never" do something."

 

Darklink writing tip #20

 

"Do not filter images through some observing concience."

 

DL's Writing Tip # 21

"Base the theme around the story, not the story around the theme."

 

Darklink's writing tip #22

 

"Try avoiding using advanced diction, unless a character is saying it, and only to reveal something about the character, such as that he/she's a scholar."

 

DL's Writing Tip #62

 

"Show action instead of telling the reader that action happened, or summarizing action."

 

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Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading :

CURRENTLY READING SERIES

arthur penahligon and the keys to the kingdom (garth nix)

eric rex (kaza kingsley)

bobby pendragon and the travelers ( d.j. mchale)

found (margeret j haddix)

among the hidden (margeret j haddix)

percy jackson

ink heart

eragon

Writing Example(10 lines or more in a spoiler. Optional):

[spoiler=battle mech prologue]

Koya was strapped in a chair. His sword scattered across the floor. His hands and feet were tied. He looked at the bomb just out of reach. 50, 49, 48, 47, 46, 45, the clocked ticked closer to zero. 40, 38, 37, 36, 35, 34, When that counter hit zero all of his families hope would be lost. 29, 28, 27, that C.P. would transform him from 100 percent human, into the ultimate being of destruction. 20, 19, 18, 17, 16, 15, 14, 13, 12, everything he had worked for. 9, 8, 7, all these years, 3,2, all the people he saved. 1, click.

Koya Sala

The year is 2971. After 4 nuclear war, the earth is a barren wasteland. There is little to no fresh water. All the leftover toxic waste has fromed into a new threat, a componet the last of the 'human' beings have name Corrosive Power This new element has crippled mankind. From the point of contact it slowly corrodes your insides. It turns you veins into pipes, your blood to oil. Your heart into a gear and cog. It turns your brain into a microchip. And it replaces your skin with metal. After hundreds of years with this there is no normal human. All of mankind has been transformed into hideous grotesque beings, those who were lucky enough not to become fully transformed. When the transformation is complete you loose all control. You have become a mech minion. Ruled and controlled by the mech king. An unknown force that rose up and took over the mech minions. Then by some mircle a baby was born with no trace of c.p. in his body. They name him Koya, and from the time he learned of the mech king, he knew he must be stopped, this is his story, and his legacy. © this is coprighted!

 

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Username:eliteduelists

 

Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading :

CURRENTLY READING SERIES

arthur penahligon and the keys to the kingdom (garth nix)

eric rex (kaza kingsley)

bobby pendragon and the travelers ( d.j. mchale)

found (margeret j haddix)

among the hidden (margeret j haddix)

percy jackson

ink heart

eragon

Writing Example(10 lines or more in a spoiler. Optional):

[spoiler=battle mech prologue]

Koya was strapped in a chair. His sword scattered across the floor. His hands and feet were tied. He looked at the bomb just out of reach. 50' date=' 49, 48, 47, 46, 45, the clocked ticked closer to zero. 40, 38, 37, 36, 35, 34, When that counter hit zero all of his families hope would be lost. 29, 28, 27, that C.P. would transform him from 100 percent human, into the ultimate being of destruction. 20, 19, 18, 17, 16, 15, 14, 13, 12, everything he had worked for. 9, 8, 7, all these years, 3,2, all the people he saved. 1, click.

[i']Koya Sala[/i]

The year is 2971. After 4 nuclear war, the earth is a barren wasteland. There is little to no fresh water. All the leftover toxic waste has fromed into a new threat, a componet the last of the 'human' beings have name Corrosive Power This new element has crippled mankind. From the point of contact it slowly corrodes your insides. It turns you veins into pipes, your blood to oil. Your heart into a gear and cog. It turns your brain into a microchip. And it replaces your skin with metal. After hundreds of years with this there is no normal human. All of mankind has been transformed into hideous grotesque beings, those who were lucky enough not to become fully transformed. When the transformation is complete you loose all control. You have become a mech minion. Ruled and controlled by the mech king. An unknown force that rose up and took over the mech minions. Then by some mircle a baby was born with no trace of c.p. in his body. They name him Koya, and from the time he learned of the mech king, he knew he must be stopped, this is his story, and his legacy. © this is coprighted!

 

 

I see several spelling errors and some punctuation errors. Anyways, accepted.

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Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading:

Favorite books: Harry Potter series, A series of unfortunate events

Books currently reading: Halo: Call of Reach, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows(again)

 

Writing Example:

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Mitsuki grabbed Daisuke’s arm and dragged him out of the tent. “Then you should have refused politely, seeing as three’s a crowd, and with you in the tent, it makes three.”

 

Daisuke followed Mitsuki out of the tent. Mitsuki entered her tent. Daisuke was about to follow her when Mitsuki closed the tent door in his face. Daisuke sighed and curled up in the ground. As his head pressed against the ground, he felt cold steel against the side of his face. He sat up and looked at the ground. He touched it with one hand, and felt something cold. He brushed the dirt off, and uncovered a metal handle. He gripped it and pulled. A door swung open, making the dirt on top of it slide off. Daisuke’s eyes widened as he saw a staircase descend into the ground. He looked around and thought about calling Mitsuki to help him investigate, but he shook his head to clear that thought out of his head.

 

“Mitsuki-san has enough to worry about, and I can’t rely on her all the time. Plus, I still have the sword Suzuki-san gave me. I just hope I don’t have to use it.”

 

Daisuke took a deep breath and descended down the staircase. He was instantly engulfed in darkness as the door to the entrance swung shut, locked from the outside.

 

 

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no particular series

Writing Example:

 

He woke up that day to find himself in the dark. Darn, he set his alarm clock 2 hors early. Itr was 5:00 AM. He punched the clock.Not a morning person, he wasn't. He ripped his cover off and went out to ruin everyone elses lives. He walked himself into his parent's room with a bucket of icewater. We'll leave it at they woke up with a jolt.

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Zimiri of the Muse

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Username:eliteduelists

 

Favorite Books/Books Currently Reading :

CURRENTLY READING SERIES

arthur penahligon and the keys to the kingdom (garth nix)

eric rex (kaza kingsley)

bobby pendragon and the travelers ( d.j. mchale)

found (margeret j haddix)

among the hidden (margeret j haddix)

percy jackson

ink heart

eragon

Writing Example(10 lines or more in a spoiler. Optional):

[spoiler=battle mech prologue]

Koya was strapped in a chair. His sword scattered across the floor. His hands and feet were tied. He looked at the bomb just out of reach. 50' date=' 49, 48, 47, 46, 45, the clocked ticked closer to zero. 40, 38, 37, 36, 35, 34, When that counter hit zero all of his families hope would be lost. 29, 28, 27, that C.P. would transform him from 100 percent human, into the ultimate being of destruction. 20, 19, 18, 17, 16, 15, 14, 13, 12, everything he had worked for. 9, 8, 7, all these years, 3,2, all the people he saved. 1, click.

[i']Koya Sala[/i]

The year is 2971. After 4 nuclear war, the earth is a barren wasteland. There is little to no fresh water. All the leftover toxic waste has fromed into a new threat, a componet the last of the 'human' beings have name Corrosive Power This new element has crippled mankind. From the point of contact it slowly corrodes your insides. It turns you veins into pipes, your blood to oil. Your heart into a gear and cog. It turns your brain into a microchip. And it replaces your skin with metal. After hundreds of years with this there is no normal human. All of mankind has been transformed into hideous grotesque beings, those who were lucky enough not to become fully transformed. When the transformation is complete you loose all control. You have become a mech minion. Ruled and controlled by the mech king. An unknown force that rose up and took over the mech minions. Then by some mircle a baby was born with no trace of c.p. in his body. They name him Koya, and from the time he learned of the mech king, he knew he must be stopped, this is his story, and his legacy. © this is coprighted!

 

 

I see several spelling errors and some punctuation errors. Anyways, accepted.

 

Sorry about that. I was at my mom's house and her internet connection was slow, and I was past my curfew so I had to hurry.

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fantasy' date='i vote for this one and i fixed up the grammar but besides that did you like the prologue?

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It was kinda hard to read. Every new person talking should be a new paragraph. I don't really know what is happening.

 

 

 

Our fanfic will be fantasy. Now here comes the hard part. We need to think of a good plot.

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