The Wasteland LOCK

[Skarlet]

^ Well, I'd like to see a simply better writen version, spelling and grammer are important in RPing because people need to be able to read what you've written. In addition to that, you're gonna need to expand your appearance a bit. And I don't overly care about the last one, but could you give your weight in somthing other then stones?

 

Once we get two more accepted apps, we'll start ha?

[Skarlet]

Bump.

[bran2939]

is it ok now? i edited height and weight!

[Skarlet]

You physical appearance isn't in great depth, but it'll do, accepted.

[bran2939]

thanks!

[Jeroukoo]

Name: Jason

Age: 16

Gender: M

Height: 6 Feet

Weight: 210 lbs.

Physical Appearance: Avi without the wings

Biography (There's no need to make it as long as mine): Jason was accused for stealing from several banks in one day. He was sent to desolation with his mentor ( Anyone welcomed for the position) and found the garbage heaps with the other escaped criminals. Jason is a bit insane and loves his alcohol, but will fight to the finish.

Possessions: 50 wooden shiskabob sticks, coat hangers around a rusted pipe.

[Skarlet]

This looks okay. I'll accept you, if you find the mentor you're after.

[ArtemisFowl]

I ArtemisFowl, The Salesman, would be glad to take up the role as jeroukoo, Jason,'s mentor.

[Skarlet]

Excellent, on that note, we may start.

 

 

IC: Leasha glanced up at the sun as it slowly sunk bellow the horizon. the strange greenish sun of this planet looked earily beautiful at sun-set, but Leasha simply could not aford to get engrosed in this. she had to get a kill, food for the people of the coloney, and make it home. It was dusk, perfect hunting time for some of the strange and imposing preditory creatures native to the Wasteland.

"What was that?" she whispered under her breath. having heard scuttling.

'Clunk! Clunk!' The sound of metal seperating as the hungry creature leared out of the darkness, a perfectly white, monsterous rat the size of a large human. It's tails though, yes, tails, two of them, long scorpion like tails. It made a furious chittering noise, clearly mal-nourished, the creature leared at Leasha, and she shakily raised her wire-covered fist do defend her self. Surveying the area, she saw a dis-used car, somewhere to run if the fight goes south.

[Otaku-sama]

Saki skillfully jumped and strided through the mountains of garbage, her robe flowing behind her. She had finished a normal day of scouting. There hasn't been a single inmate ship for what she believes are weeks. Maybe it was the threat of Desolation that served as a deterrant for possible inmates. This gave her mixed feelings. Being a Humanist and human rights activist, she was thankful that they wouldn't been sent into this hellhole, but if there are no more inmates headed for Desolation, she would never get off this hellhole herself.

 

She continued to stride through the metal mountains until she saw the short blonde hunter of the colony having a showdown with one of the giant rat-scorpion things. Saki knew that there was no way for someone to get within striking range of the rat-scorpion without getting poisoned and/or disemboweled and the girl was woefully unprepared for the task at hand. Saki knew this could be an interesting fight and decided not to save the blond's hide yet. She found an old refridgerator and lay down on her belly, propping her upper body up on her elbows and swaying her legs in interest. This was gonna be good . . .

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

A small flying spaceship was making it's way across the sky and to the base on the baron and dusty planet, it was no secret that it was there and it was easy for all the waste-landers to see. The spaceship landed an a man walked out wielding a longsword on her back and a short sword strapped on his left side. A business looking man ran over to the man and grabbed him by the shoulder and said. "Oh my! I'm so glad your here Mr. Goleman! I don't know how long those miscreants have been out there but they are making me oh so nervous!" This man "Mr. Goleman" walked directly out of the way of the business looking man. "First of all, I'll need two weeks of rations. Secondly I'll be going after these escapees alone." The businessman was about to protest but "Mr. Goleman" just kept talking. "Thirdly if you ever call me Mr. Goleman or touch me ever again, I'll make sure that your vocal cords and arms are properly removed." He said and the business man had has mouth hung open. "Mr. Goleman" was given his pack of rations and threw it over his left shoulder. "My name is Baleaze, and I'll be back way before these rations are gone..." Baleaze announced and then took off through the sandy and baron world he was now on...

[Jeroukoo]

Jason violently woke up on his heap of trash. He had dreamed that he was caught by the guards and taken back to prison. In his dream he was slowly killed by a strange machine that was very loud and disturbed him almost as much as the pain. No wait calling back the pain...He had never wanted to dream that again. He looked over to The Salesman. He was sleeping, Jason didn't know if it was soundly so he lied back down and didn't try to wake up his mentor.

[TheArbiter]

Name:Rhak'sun

Age:29

Gender:male

Height:5.2 ft

Weight:189 lbs

Physical Appearance:large, bulky, brown eyes, brown hair, beggining of a beard

Biography:First came as a gaurd, and preferred his modified pistol(scope, 5 extra bullets, can shoot different bullets) over regular sidearms. One day, his gun got broken in a fight, and he went out to get parts. He was locked out, and has been lost ever since.

Possessions: water bottle, modified pistol(slightly broken), 19 bullets, uniform, a slingshot, 5 sharp metal balls, small pack of meat, and random parts

[Skarlet]

The scoprid, as this beast was known, Chattered strangely as Leasha instinctively circled the creature, her experience with thise critters told her that they became dizzy very easily. The best bore it's first stinger down toward her she threw herself forward and avoided the sting, The creature's other tail swung horizontally toward her face, this blow also missed as Leasha ducked. she charged in and delivered a swipe with her tiger-wired glove, before retreating back to her circling tactic, the creature howled in pain as it's strange, pinkish blood began to spill onto the sand.

[Sp1at]

I woke up after a terriable nightmare. I went over to my food storage. I grabed the last breakfast item in the bin. I went over to my bed and started to eat. This was the best breakfast item in the bin. He had been saving it for last. After he gobbled down the food he went outside and started digging through the waste with his hand and dagger. He dag through the waste for hours hoping to find something cool, but as aways it was just full of wrappers,cans and boxs.

[ArtemisFowl]

OoC:What kind of "creatures" would be on this planet?

 

IC:Jecht awoke and sat up rubbing his neck. Another night on miserble garbage. He looked around and saw Jason and that he was awake. He looked around and wondered why he had Jason with him for the thousandth time but thought he could be useful sometime and he would have probably gone insane if he was alone. "C'mon boy!" He said getting up with a grunt and his pathetic excuse for a balde, barbed wire, and his trusty rope. "We gotta get moving! You know the longer we stay in one place the chance we have of one of dem guards catchin' us." He looked around and decided it was time to go hunting again because the last of their food was gone and he was hungry.

[Skarlet]

OoC: I intend to write up basically an "Encyclopedia of Creatures" soon, That will be found on the first post and should answer your question.

[bran2939]

IC: joey crawled uot from underneath the wrecked truck, he had been there for a few days. he looked around him, all was clear, he needed to look around because he had no friend with him.

"i should get another friend," he sighed "its not easy livivng on your own"

he grabbed his things and started walking north where he saw people fighting, he ducked behind a car that was near.

was that a scorprid? he's only heard about them, never seen one before. the woman had killed the beast so joey ran over causiosly,

"who are you?" he asked "im joey"

 

Ooc: p.s im still only meeting up with happygosplat so say sumin like run along...

[Skarlet]

OoC: I have a couple of problems here

1) please use proper grammer.

2) I didn't kill it yet, please do write in that I did.

 

IC: The scoprid seemed enraged. previously its soul motivation was food, but it was looking for blood at this point, it seemed to attempt it's signature attack, sandwhiching the opponent between it's two venemous stingers. Leasha attempted to step out of the way, and appeared to be successful, the Scoprid's stingers clashed, stabbing deep into one another, causing the beast sevear pain, reflected by a screech from the monster. Leasha took the oppertunity and charged forward, sinking her wire-covered glove deep into the creatures eye, eventually, she felt it start to 'tickle' the brain. She removed her now blood-covered hand and the creature fell to the ground in a heap, Soon followed by the now-poisoned Leasha, earlier, when she had attempted to dodge, apparently the stinger had grazed her side.

[六兆年と一夜物語]

OoC:

 

Name: Aristotle

 

Age: 22

 

Gender: Male

 

Height: 6'1"

 

Weight: 180lb.

 

Physical Appearance: A man in priest clothing, however most of the parts are shaded with red. Under his priest clothing, he wears beat up armor that's rusted that he found in a junkyard pile.

 

Biography: As a child he had a knack for predicting events that were to happen. He grew up to be a poor philosopher, who gave messages to the poor and convicted. He got a big break for answering a prophecy for a rich man. However, he was terrible wrong and was immediately accused and sent to the desolate wasteland.

 

Possessions: Old priest clothing with stains of blood, beat up and rusted iron armor, a shotgun without the proper instruments for shooting, and a traditional Japanese sword thrown away by a very rich man.

[Skarlet]

This is an iffy one I really don't like the armor or the sword, otherwise it should all be okay.

[giovanni senza paura]

qualcuno parla in itaiano perche io sono itaiano

my italy! helppp

[六兆年と一夜物語]

This is an iffy one I really don't like the armor or the sword' date=' otherwise it should all be okay.

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The sword I can take away, however the armor is rusted and beat up, so of course it would be thrown away.

[Jeroukoo]

Jason was startled slightly at the sound of his mentor. He thought it would be a little onger before he woke up.

"Yessir!" Jason flipped up from his laying position.

Jason looked around at the area. Trash, he could see nothing more than that. He picked up his weapon, of which he called a sword. Being slightly insane, what else could he call it? The piece of junk I use to defend myself? No, that would be to long for Jason. After looking a the landscape he snapped his sights back at his master.

"Salesman, I was wondering..." Jason loosened his grip on his weapon. "After hunting should we find some others? We will have a better chance at surviving."

[bran2939]

he saw the woman drop into a heap newr the scorpid,

'uh oh!' he thought 'not good'

he decided to get into cover since it was nearing dark, he grabbed the person and dragged her over into cover, he decided to stay up all night on watch, he grabbed his spear and stood guard throughout the night..

he looked up at the stary sky, i wonder what earth is like now.. he thought is it still like a few years ago, or has it changed?

he shook his head, better not lose focouse! he thought he nearly nodded off but slapped himself to stay awake, he saw a shooting star, what should i wish for? he thought, ah i know!