asuma181 Posted December 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 GINOURMOUS BUMP AND SORRY FOR DIGGIN UP MY OLD FANFIC BUT I FORGOT MY PAS FOR LIKE EVER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted December 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2008 sorry for posting 4 times but heres the new episode and my great comebackname: aron jonesattitude:musicianbio: a young boy who loves music and wants to be a great duelist like his big brodeck:guitaristpic: Duel EVIN/v.s./ARON Evin: WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOUR OUT OF ALIEN PACKS Shopkeeper: sorry Evin just sold my last one a couple minutes before you got here Evin: man Aron's gonna kill me i swore i would get him a deck Shopkeeper: well i have this new pack its full of guitar monsters Evin: well Aron would like that he's a guitar player i'll take five Shopkeeper: here you are *handing Evin the packs* twenty dollars please Evin: here you go *handing the Shopkeeper the money* and thanks you saved my butt LATER AT EVINS HOUSE Evin's families: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ARON Aron: wow a new duel disk thanks mom and dad now Evin got me a new deck yes Evin: how bout we test it and your new duel disk out *getting into dueling position* Aron: ok lets go *getting into dueling position* Evin: I'll go first i summon double dragon *a blue dragon and a red dragon appear that look identical and then they look at each other and laugh* and know ill play dragons gate *a green portal appears with what looks like a face at the back of it* and bring out blue eye's white triplets *out from the mouth of one of the portals three blue eye’s white dragon babies come and sit down by each other and start breathing out baby white lightning’s* now i play double summon *two warlocks appear and raise there staffs into the air and a giant ball of energy appears and a dragon forms in it* and now ill sacrifice my two monsters to bring out freeze ray dragon *a giant blue dragon appeared with a blue mane and blue fur on the back of his arms then he let out a threatening roar* now i end Aron: it's about time i was about to fall asleep now i summon anchor guitar player * a squid looking human with a guitar shaped like a anchor and got positioned to play* and now i play double summon and bring out guitar player dragon * a dragon wearing a old wore out shirt and pants with a bowler hat a bottle and a guitar in his hands* now i equip him with a axe of despair and end Evin: well your monsters to strong for freeze ray but his effect will do i freeze both your monsters *both monsters got captured in a block of ice* and I get two freeze tokens *two flamish entities appear on the field* and now ill sacrifice them and summon dragon ruler scorpinoc *a giant red dragon appears with a scorpion like tail and black horns then it let out a tremendous roar* now I'll play pot of greed so i get two new cards now i play lightning vortex and all your monsters go bye bye *two big bolts of lightning strike the creatures in the ice and they shatter* now scorpinoc freeze ray attack for game *the red dragon charges and slashes its tail and freeze ray dragon launches his usual beam of ice at Aron it hits Aron and Arons life points drop to zero * Aron/0000Evin/4000 Aron: man I lost Evin dont worry I've been dueling a lot longer than you its natural you lost ha ha ha ha Aron: shut up MEANWHILE AT SLICER'S HEADQUARTERS Slicer: WHAT DO YOU MEAN MASTER I AM GETTING KNOCKED OUT OF MY POSITION ????: I mean your out shadow is taking your position unless Slicer: unless unless what ????: unless you can beat the Evin boy in a duel like shadow Slicer: yes I will beat him master ????: you must also beat his friend john Shadow: MASTER THATS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE FOR ME JOHN HUGH'S IS A STRONG DUELIST HE EVEN BROKE MY CONTROL OVER THE EVIN BOY ????: thats the whole point of the test Slicer: I will not fail you master ????: you better not Slicer or the most action you will be seeing is grass growing ________________________________________________________________________________cards this chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cronos Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 dude this is a awsome fan-fic i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 come on guys check this out it took me forever to get it right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crystalB Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 cool bro i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everquest5 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 oooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmgggggggggggggggggggggggIt's the best fan-fic i've seen in agesAnd the cards are better than mine10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 heres the new episode Aron: mom how come Evin gets to go to Europe and i have to stay here and pack Aron's mom: because he paid for it himself Aron: so its still not fair MEANWHILE IN EUROPE Evin: wow John you really out did yourself this time how did you ever get Ms.Jenson the stuck up teacher to let us go to Europe John: I didnt I asked the principle MEANWHILE IN DOMINO CITY Slicer: you are you the one they call Evin Jones Aron: no im his brother the names Aron Slicer: oh even better lets go *grabs Aron and runs away* MEANWHILE IN EUROPE Evin: hey John me and you havnt dueled in a while how about we *phone rings* one sec *talking on phone* hello Slicer: hello Evin Evin: alright who is this and how did you get my number Slicer: you'll find out in due time you will come back to Domino City and find me in the ally where you dueled shadow and duel me that is if you want to see your brother again Evin: wait you have Aron put him on now Slicer: sure why not here take the phone boy Aron: Evin help me please Evin: Aron hold on ill be there as soon as possible Aron: hurry please Slicer: bye bye *hangs up* Evin: John we have to get to Domino City fast John: got it lets go get Mr.Wheller Mr.Wheller: I'm sorry boy's but I cant take you back until the scheduled date tomorrow Evin: but why not I have to be there by ten A.M. tomorrow or somethng bads gonna happen Mr.Wheller: what is this bad thing thats gonna happen Evin: my younger brother Aron has been kidnapped by some dude and I have to get back to the city and duel him to save my little brother Mr.Wheller: Im sorry i cant take you guys back Evin: can you at least drive us to the airport i have enough money for two tickets Mr.Wheller: that i can do yo Ms.J watch the kids ill be right back come on lets go MEINWHIL IN DOMINO CITY Slicer: so I hear your brothers quite the duelist Aron: he's a better duelist than you any day Slice: we'll just see about that now won't we MEINWHILE AT A AIRPORT IN EUROPE Mr:Wheller: well here you boy's are lets go get your tickets *walks in the door* Ticket counter lady: two tickets to Domino City here you are Evin: thank you *walks to gate with John* thanks for everything Mr.Wheller Mr.Wheller: no problem just beat this guy for me to Evin: alright I will see ya around John lets go *walks on plane and sits* John: ys thanks Mr.Wheller *walks on plane and sits* Evin: *in his mind* Aron here i come Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 big bump sry computer broke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 26, 2010 Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 Okay some things are wrong in this fic. 1 you don't give a backstory on these characters.2 The continuity factor is small to say the least.3 Make the duels detailed. 4 You need Spoilers. And fast. That is all for now. good luck with the rest of your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asuma181 Posted September 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 baha bump lost account and computer go boom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valliant12 Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Script format' date=' writing your fanfic with a layout similar to a theatrical play or a film manuscript, is [b']not allowed.[/b] Read the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Jesus Christ, people, can't you learn not to necro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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