thecross Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Hi i still need some characters so if your intrested it's in the fan fic forum. [spoiler=Rules]1. No spamming, no cursing, and no making fun of a character.2. I can kill of any character i choose and i can make any character a main, so if you make more than one there's a possibility of on of your characters being a main.3.(3 max.) characters4.The power cannot be a god mode.5.Stars(levels)5 and up get to be immortal because they earned it but they need a weakness.6. FOLLOW THE RULES (members that co-operate nicely will get a rep+) thx for the co-operation and thx for being a member. [spoiler=App]Superheroe, Villian, Energy Hunter, Vigilantes(No Powers), or Immortals(5 stars and up):Name:Height:Weight:Power(2 maximum):Bio:Muscle(Super Strength only):Weakness:Weapon(Vigilantes Only)(Ill agree on the weapon or else pick something else):Appearance(i encourage pics but explainations are nice to): [spoiler=Energy Hunters]They need energy around to use their powers, if they are away from energy during a fight they are screwed. Energy Hunters all started after a scientist made himself control minds, but theres always a weakness the person he was trying to control had to be near energy for it to work. Mainly Energy Hunters aren't on sides, only different kinds of Energy Hunters, there's ones that destroy people in their way and there's ones that want peace but they do use self defense. [spoiler=Vigilantes(No Power)]A main character is going to be a vigilante, that i made, he's an exreme martial artist. He's flexible, fast, and pretty strong, but he's a hero all vigilantes are heros. A vigilante has no power only a certain skill, he can be an ex-cop that's not done defending the law if you want. [spoiler=John Chain(Prologue)]It starts out in a ring, John Chain tackled his worst enemy Kenny Viper. He's beating the life out of him by punching his face multiple times. Commentary said, "Oh no he's going to grab the rope of chain!" His signature weapon, he's going to execute his finishing move, rapping the chain around his neck and choking him out. The ref stopped the match. Meanwhile, in an alley, two guys attacked John and dragged him in a van. They drove away like nothing happened. John starts to wake up, all he sees is a blurred vision of the inside of a lab. A scientist said, "Good he's awake."John murmurs, "Where am I?""Your in my lab my boy, your going to be tested.""What am i going to be tested on?"The scientist replies, "Just hold this." He holds out his signature chain.John yelled, "That's my chain, what are you doing with that!""I'm only doing what's best for all of us." John is holding the chain now.The scientist turns on the machine. John yells "What's happening to me!" John starts to blur, until finally he passes out. He wakes up and he notices on his arms are chains, but they're not on his arms they are his arms! He checks his legs they're chains too. Everything is chains where skin is supposed to be. The scientist and three guards walk in. The scientist says, "Good morning."John asks, "What has happened to me?"The scientist replies, "John you are now fully chains, you are as tough as chains maybe even tougher." "You have a lot of strength, if i do say so myself i'd say you had super strength." "John you're living up to your last name." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 First of all, this should be in your other thread. Just press the edit button on the first post. Also, the prologue is boring. Even though it's just a prologue, at least make it interesting. Adding details would help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 tell me how that is not interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thecross Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 i cant do ch. 1 without more characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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