Crimson General Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 I got Bored in Psych Class today... honest opinions, will probably photoshop when I have times. btw. she's supposed to be lying down, and this is aerial view, didn't draw bed/floor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 D= no comments or anything?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Berserker- Posted January 27, 2010 Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 VEry cool. Except for the face. Seems flat... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 thanks ^^ and thanks for pointing that out, It's hard to notice stuff like that for me XP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Dude, this is an awesome sketch. But ya, plain face; haven't you noticed how, in anime, their eyes don't completely connect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 yea, anime is a strange bird alright. at least I know what t fix when I shoop this ^^ thanks you guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Everything's great, but the face does not belong to her. That needs to be fixed. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I agree that it is cool, but the face doesnt seem right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 again with me,your figure is good, but the face just doesn't belong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 this face thing is really bugging me now -____- i didn't think the face was THAT bad, it's not supposed to be cut n paste yugimonz style... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 this face thing is really bugging me now -____- i didn't think the face was THAT bad' date=' it's not supposed to be cut n paste yugimonz style...[/quote'] it's not bad, and nobodys saying to make it a yugioh exact-a-facei'm glad your making it your own styleit's just i think you didn't make the head size big enough to put all the features you wanted to put in it, into it(i hope this makes since)it's a great drawing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 The face is not that bad, it just doesn't fit with the pose. I still wish I could draw like you though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 this face thing is really bugging me now -____- i didn't think the face was THAT bad' date=' it's not supposed to be cut n paste yugimonz style...[/quote'] it's not bad, and nobodys saying to make it a yugioh exact-a-facei'm glad your making it your own styleit's just i think you didn't make the head size big enough to put all the features you wanted to put in it, into it(i hope this makes since)it's a great drawing hmm, at least now I know where to start, thank you for the detail ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 this face thing is really bugging me now -____- i didn't think the face was THAT bad' date=' it's not supposed to be cut n paste yugimonz style...[/quote'] it's not bad, and nobodys saying to make it a yugioh exact-a-facei'm glad your making it your own styleit's just i think you didn't make the head size big enough to put all the features you wanted to put in it, into it(i hope this makes since)it's a great drawing hmm, at least now I know where to start, thank you for the detail ^^your welcome :)and don't be discouraged from drawing or anything because you got some neg feedback on a part of your drawings, these things can be fixedbesides your drawing abilities are way better than most people on this site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Good figure, fix the face (as been told at least 57 times), Yeah tahst pretty much it. Overall Awesome sketch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 all is greatbut the face is off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 everyone says the face is incorrect. Yes, true. One of my friends wants to become a Manga Writer (I live in Japan) and so I was taught some technuiques from him. According to the future manga writer: "Ken-Chan (my name at school), The eyebrows change how a person looks 180 degrees. If you wanna write a person who's really strict and furious, make his brows like Ushio. If you wanna write a cute girl or something, make her brows thin and, if you're sketching, with a light color so that it doesn't look like she's mad. " In the case of Aki, she's a little hot-tempered, you might make it thicker than most girls, but still make it thinner than: Hope my friend helped ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 She looks like a gay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson General Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 She looks like a gay. Thanks for your detailed description of whats good and bad about the sketch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Its pretty good except from the face :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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