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i really hope that this is a wip(work in progress)

because it really is just simple' date='[/b'] i mean you have this great detailed backgound, with these very detailed shoes, but it looks like you rushed on everything else, the person in general has no shading on him but maybe very little, from what i can see

also your perspective of the person is just a little off with the forshortening of the legs, plus if the shoe were to fall off of his foot it wouldn't be in that position.

if you were to fix these problems it'd be a lot better

 

About 35% of it was useless.

 

The bolded parts were not.

 

However, most parts are not explained to the fullest extent, and I understand most of his suggestions would cause for remaking a lot of the picture, which is very difficult.

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Both look nice. 2nd one definitely shows improvement. Shading is better for sure. Plus i really like the detail such as in the cloud. First had nice detail too, but not as good. Plus i dun rly like the parachute thing on the first. Overall, both are epic, 2nd is better. And for the 3rd BG is the same but a dif color. The vine seems kinda random, but when i look longer it looks like its pulling him back down, and it got his shoe. So its really nice.

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