float away

[chairman ali]

 

ideas and suggestions are welcomed.

[Alexis Rhodes]

I dont really get whats supposed to be happening

[chairman ali]

too bad.

[Alexis Rhodes]

too bad.

 

Why post it if nobody knows whats happening

[Nikkiboy029]

i really hope that this is a wip(work in progress)

because it really is just simple, i mean you have this great detailed backgound, with these very detailed shoes, but it looks like you rushed on everything else, the person in general has no shading on him but maybe very little, from what i can see

also your perspective of the person is just a little off with the forshortening of the legs, plus if the shoe were to fall off of his foot it wouldn't be in that position.

if you were to fix these problems it'd be a lot better

[chairman ali]

i really hope that this is a wip(work in progress)

because it really is just simple' date=' i mean you have this great detailed backgound, with these very detailed shoes, but it looks like you rushed on everything else, the person in general has no shading on him but maybe very little, from what i can see

also your perspective of the person is just a little off with the forshortening of the legs, plus if the shoe were to fall off of his foot it wouldn't be in that position.

if you were to fix these problems it'd be a lot better

[/quote']

 

I do hope you're kidding. You do know that when a shoe falls it instantly starts spinning. The perspective of the person has nothing to do with the background because you could have a normal scene and someone with a weird perspective. I'd agree on the shading part. And no this is like 3 days work. Digital paintings are not that easy you know.

[Nikkiboy029]

I do hope you're kidding. You do know that when a shoe falls it instantly starts spinning. The perspective of the person has nothing to do with the background because you could have a normal scene and someone with a weird perspective. I'd agree on the shading part. And no this is like 3 days work. Digital paintings are not that easy you know.

 

no i'm not kidding, although the shoe would start to spin it wouldn't be in that perfect side view position, it's be more of a three quarters view to the left. i was never talking about the person in correlation to the sky, i was talking about the persons position in general, his legs aren't foreshortened enough to make them look realistic. When painting digital it can be easy or hard it just depends on the artist themselves, i'm not saying that it's bad i'm just saying it needs a little more work, and more shading.

[chairman ali]

funny. I'll stop posting my work here so I'd get less misleading comments.

[Night]

too bad.

 

Why post it if nobody knows whats happening

who says everyone doesn't understand it. What if its just you?

 

Anyway. Im just not feeling this one.But I know how you feel, as an artist, when you think so highly of a painting, but in another persons eyes, its just "ok". For a 3 days work I think it could have been better, and a little less simple. But What do I know about digital art.

[gizmo00999]

The perspective is really good in this drawing, i like the detailed shoes, but if you want to finish the work, it would be nice to add alot details to the human too. Perhaps better clouds?

 

 

But overall i do like the image, simple, but great :)

[.Lost]

This is simply amazing. The only thing i see that looks a little odd is the thing at the top. is it a parachute? or a shopping bag or something? its kinda wierd looking if you know what i mean. and if it was a parachute, then wheres his bag?

 

I want those shoes in real life pl0x

[Seta]

funny. I'll stop posting my work here so I'd get less misleading comments.

 

You're the man!

I really like it. Reminds me of one manga characther.

[chairman ali]

Thanks, at least some people have a sense of art in this place.

 

I've made another wip,

 

[JG.]

I kinda like the feel of the second one better, on the first I dun like the bag he's holding. And you just owned everyone else here. 'Cus you're right, they're wrong.

[chairman ali]

Thanks man :)

['tyleR]

Envy is rushing over me. Very nice, sir. The second has more appeal to me, though. Just saying.

[~Energy]

I prefer the 2nd one too but the first one is still awesome and man the clouds are good.

[Night]

Thanks' date=' at least some people have a sense of art in this place.

 

I've made another wip,

 

[img']http://i45.tinypic.com/51u7g2.png[/img]

This one is much better, in my opinion. I like the shading, which is probably why I dodnt like the first as much.

[chairman ali]

thx :}

[Nikkiboy029]

Thanks' date=' at least some people have a sense of art in this place.

 

I've made another wip,

 

 

 

[img']http://i45.tinypic.com/51u7g2.png[/img]

 

 

 

now this^^^^^

this is what i'm talking about, the shading, the shoe, it's all good

the background is even better

if it's a wip then i'm anticipating the outcome of it

this is good

[Seta]

Envy is rushing over me. Very nice' date=' sir. The second has more appeal to me, though. Just saying.

[/quote']

 

Raaaaaaaaaaaaainnnnn

Be more activeeee.

 

Tbqh, the 2nd one just needs some more/better colors IMO, but it still looks great.

[chairman ali]

Yeah I know that's why I'm editing it to a night scene :)

and yh it's a wip. thnx.

[Brendano Harns]

ideas and suggestions are welcomed.

 

funny. I'll stop posting my work here so I'd get less misleading comments.

 

Wow. So many questions.

 

Allow me to start with...

 

WTF? It seems by the first post of yours that you want to get better. The easiest way to get better is to pretend that everyone else knows more than you about the subject that has even the slightest bit of experience, and take their suggestions for a spin. You do the exact opposite, it seems.

 

I'll start off with the first picture. The perspective is...off. Although the perpective is only a little off, it set the entire picture off a lot.

 

His hand makes it look as if he's only hanging onto whatever is mostly out of the picture with only his index finger and his thumb, as if he can't decide to let go or hold on, or if he's standing on something invisble and just f@{king around with the strings on the bottom.

 

His foot is completely white, with no detail. This simply will not do for a finished product.

 

I see no visible light source, and I cannot tell where light is coming from.

 

 

 

Now, for the second.

 

This one is so much better. Both are great, but this one is especially fun to look at.

 

The perspective is much better - zooming and shading have seemed to help this a lot.

 

There is a visible light source, and the shading is nearly perfect.

 

The jacket's design is a little strange. The head looks a little too far to the right in this one. Also, the foot. Ah, the foot. There is a little bit of shading this time around, but no color. You really need to make that foot darker, not only so it doesn't look like a victim of bleach, but so you can see how far away it is from the light source.

 

Unless it is supposed to be a sock, in which case it is deformed a bit, and the colors and shading are a bit off.

 

Overall, you got a lot better the second time around. I hope to see more from you in the future. ^_^

[chairman ali]

k thnx.

I WILL listen to people who WILL comment clearly with a detail structure (since this is a painting). People who just come in and say "I don't understand what this is" or "I don't like it. it's bad" can gtfo and suck some balls.

[Brendano Harns]

I agree, but Nikkiboy didn't really do that. ;)