Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Hello, I have made my first fairy card, what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 You need to make a period after your first sentence. Other than that, I like it.8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Thanks ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 No problem, just wanting to help... ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 I think I fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Great! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malik37 Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Not bad for your first Fairy-Type. Although, it is just a small error, you should put a space between "battle" and "(Damage Calculations)" Are you planning on making more Fairy-Type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 I though he should do that, but I wasn't sure..lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Good pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 its good =/ =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Hmmm, not your best, but have I told you that you're an excellent cardmaker? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 nice card not a perfect one but i like the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 hey, i'm gonna make more fairys sience it sounds like it is worht it, anybody have any pictures? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 hey' date=' i'm gonna make more fairys sience it sounds like it is worht it, anybody have any pictures?[/quote'] lol yank, you know me =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 lol, yup. I just need pics, and I can make more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 another card added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 make the 2nd one a level 3 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 whoops, i forgot the level thing, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 fixed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 whoops' date=' i forgot the level thing, lol[/quote'] the first one is good =), but i think you need a space between battle and the parenthesis =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 ok, will fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 fixed the 1st cards tiny mistake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 Leslie, Fairy of Love-This is almost overpowered. Let me explain. You won't lose many Life Points if your opponent attacks this card, because they can only attack once per turn. However, they don't have to attack Leslie, so it's balanced. With The Sanctuary in the Sky on the field, this card won't be destroyed as a result of battle, and you won't lose any Life Points, allowing you to tribute summon a Monarch next turn. Rating: 8.2|10 B- (There should also be a space between Parenthesis and battle.) Luna, Fairy of Forgiveness-Lucky Pied Piper is not good compared to this card, because he has the same effect, although he doesn't have to be Second Summoned to get his effect, and you can only draw a card when he destroys a monster as a result of battle. Luna only has to inflict Battle Damage to let you draw a card. With the Sanctuary in the Sky on the field, you won't take any Battle Damage, and that is good because Luna isn't a strong monster. Rating: 9.7|10 A+ (Original Card Grammar (OCG) errors.) Mary, Fairy of Vengeance-This card is a non-gemini version of Aquarian Alessa. You wouldn't want to use this card against a Dark World Deck though, because discarding your opponent's Dark World monsters wouldn't help you. This card is basic, nothing great. Rating: 5|10 E (Basic, not interesting picture) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryukei Posted December 16, 2007 Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 You got Lazy on Luna's OCG, other than that their good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2007 nice review. thanks, i do need to work on the third 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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