Guest Merciful Idiot Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 If you bothered to read my bio, you'd find out that I've been practicing manga for weeks. But what is the result? [spoiler=V1] [spoiler=V2] ........... I swear it isn't that dark, it's just the scanner and my little brother crippled up the paper a bit, but still, my best drawing thus far. To tell the truth, I'm still working on the body, it's difficult.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Looks good but why are there some parts with blue on it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Strange. Never noticed it before. Must be a scanner glitch. My scanner's dirty and hasn't been used in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gizmo00999 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 To be honest, it of course isn't that good, but im actually right where you are on drawings =D i suggest using a lighters pencil, sharpen it alot more, and not to use B9 or any other B pencils currently, you will be good with H and F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Neck is too long. The hair needs to be more "manga-styled". To the left of his head (his left, our right) he has a ditch in his hair (or possibly head) and it looks ....... weird. The eyes, nose and mouth look nice though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Removed the ditch. For some reason, I can't seem to redraw it, every time I try it, I just get it worse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Who's that? Quite fine IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 He's my original character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Imma glad its Original. I should make my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 The hair is totally off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 What do you mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 6, 2010 Report Share Posted February 6, 2010 It doesn't look realistic at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 I was aiming for manga style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted February 7, 2010 Report Share Posted February 7, 2010 It doesn't look good for it either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Bumped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 The neck is too long and narrow for the head. Hair is a disgrace. Go study some anime figures, and by study, I don't mean just look passively. Look, and look real hard. Actually pay attention to how the figure is drawn, the way the hair is made, the proportions. Try copying a few of them, to get a feel for how they are created. Some people are just naturally talented drawers. You are not one of those. "A couple weeks" isn't going to allow you to create anything amazing. Practice, practice, practice....then practice more. You'll get there eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Since December I've been practicing. And I drew this at school with nothing to study on. Right now, I'm trying to redesign him using Yami Bakura's concept art, though I don't intend him to be a crappy children's card game duelist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissonance Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Since December I've been practicing. And I drew this at school with nothing to study on. Right now' date=' I'm trying to redesign him using Yami Bakura's concept art, though I don't intend him to be a crappy children's card game duelist.[/quote'] Most decent artists have been drawing for at least 2-3 years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted February 14, 2010 Report Share Posted February 14, 2010 True, I know that. I'm gonna keep practicing and probably, when I finally get out of the horror known as School (Which would be five years, by the way), I'd be good enough to make manga/comic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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