DL Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 This is a fake type rebellion fanfic, I believe it to be quite good, enjoy. [spoiler=Chapter 1]A full moon in the sky loomed over a small town otherwise only illuminated by several streetlamps. A shifting wind, signaling a coming shift in the order of the world, blew across the street. A street devoid of movement, and scarce on life held, under a single broken street lamp, a person in a dark blue cloak who was looking up at the sky. The cloaked person closed his eyes. “Must I really do this?” He sighed and continued down the road, toward his destination. A few minutes later, he stood at the gates of a cemetery. He walked inside, ignoring the putrid smell and unpleasant sights. He walked to the very center of the cemetery and stopped right in front of a large gravestone. He pulled out a small pendant and placed it on the dirt in front of the gravestone, and then took of his hood to reveal his dark blue hair and light blue eyes. The cloaked person kneeled down. “It is time for you to arise from your eternal slumber, and once again rid this world of your mortal enemy.” A hand covered in white fur rose out of the ground. Its fingers curled around the pendant, making it glow. The dirt shifted as the arm the hand was attached to shot out of the dirt, still gripping the pendant. Out of the ground came a man with a ragged shirt and ripped jeans. The fur that surrounded his body was covered in dirt. There were dog ears on his head. He stood up and shook off some dirt, and then raised his head and howled at the moon. The cloaked person rose from his kneeling position and looked at the man-beast that now stood a foot taller than him. “So, how was death? There’s a mission for you to do. Your mortal enemy has risen again, and it’s your job to stop her.” The man-beast looked down at the cloaked person. “That girl… it’s been ages since my battle with her.” The cloaked person chuckled. “It’s been four thousand years, to be precise. It’s been exactly four thousand years since you had a battle with her that nearly destroyed half the world. You managed to seal her, and she managed to put you underground, not dead, but under a spell.” The man-beast growled. “You have too much knowledge human, who are you?” The cloaked person shook his head. “My knowledge comes from the information bestowed upon me. History itself is but a mere inch away from me. I can assure you, I’m not quite human, though I may smell like one. As for my name, you can call me… Milk-chan.” [spoiler=Chapter 2] Milk-chan and the man-beast were sitting across from each other in a dimly-lit room with no windows that only had a single table as furniture. Milk-chan still had his cloak on. Milk-chan slid a photo across the table. The man-beast looked at the photo of the blond-haired girl wearing a pink robe and chuckled. “She hasn’t aged a single day since our battle.” Milk-chan shook his head. “As you can see, she has grown in power tremendously in your absence. While you did seal her in ice, it didn’t prevent her from gaining strength during that time. While you, Timothy, were sealed under a spell that prevented your strength from growing, she kept on getting stronger.” The man-beast growled. “Call me Major Tim. Anyway, even if the little vampire did get a little stronger, I’ll still beat her like I did last time.” “Is that so? Because I was certain that the battle ended in a tie…” stated Milk-chan. Major Tim growled and stood up. “Alright, so first who do we have to find?” Milk-chan stood up and took out another photo and held it up. “First we find this guy.” The photo was of a teenage boy with golden hair. His golden eyes shone as his pale yellow robe covered his whole body except for his head. Milk-chan put the picture back inside his cloak and begun walking out the door. Major Tim turned to follow. They both stepped out on the pavement, their shadows elongated by the sun on the horizon. “So, where is he?” asked Major Tim. Milk-chan pulled out a map and put his finger on a place called ‘Thunder Ridge’. “This is where he is. It should take us a few hours by car to get there.” Major Tim chuckled. “Well then, we can get there in a few minutes if we run. Hop on.” Milk nodded and climbed on Major Tim’s back. Major Tim grinned and began sprinting toward Thunder Ridge. A few minutes later, they approached a ridge filled with yellow flowers. The flowers shook together in the wind, creating the impression that lightning was streaming down the ridge. Milk-chan looked up at the lone shack on the peak of the ridge. Major Tim began walking toward the ridge, but Milk-chan stopped him. “Look over there.” Milk-chan said as he pointed to the thin wire tied between some of the flowers. “If you had stepped through that wire, you’d be electrocuted.” Major Tim chuckled. “You think a few thousand volts can do me any real harm?” Milk-chan picked up a rock and tossed it at the wire. The rock froze in midair for one second, and then evaporated. “No, a few thousand volts may not do anything, but a few hundred thousand would probably be enough to put you back underground.” Milk picked up another rock and tossed it at the shack. It hit the shack, but nothing else happened. A few moments later, a young girl with long golden hair wearing a yellow nightgown stepped out. “What is it you want?” the girl called out. “We’re just looking for someone who lives here. We’ll be happy to talk, but how about disabling the trap first?” asked Milk-chan. The girl eyed Milk-chan suspiciously, but pulled a small lever near the door. She motioned for the two of them to come inside. Milk-chan nodded and headed toward the shack. Major Tim followed him. When Milk-chan stepped inside, he first noticed the fact that the girl seemed to be alone in the shack, except for a sleeping teenager in the corner, wearing a loose white shirt and blue shorts. Milk-chan pointed to the sleeping teenager. “That’s him. That’s the guy we want to talk to.” The girl walked over to the teenager and nudged his shoulder. “Brother, wake up. There are some people here that want to talk to you.” The teenager opened his eyes lazily. “What is it, Sis? I was having such a nice dream here. Who could possibly want to talk to me?” He finally noticed Milk-chan and Major Tim standing inside the shack. “Hey, who are you two? What do you want?” Milk-chan smiled. “What we want is simple. We want you to join us. We have need of your abilities, Pikachu.” [spoiler=Chapter 3]Chapter 3 - Little Vampire Pikachu stood up. “You’re not from the government, are you? I already told you I won’t join you…” Milk-chan shook his head. “Of course not, we’re just two people who are looking to get rid of a certain vampire queen of ages past.” Pikachu looked at his sister, and then back at Milk-chan. “You’re not going to accept no for an answer, are you?” “Probably not, unless, that is, you can beat us. I’m curious as to how strong you really are. So, how about we have a little match? If you win, we stop bothering you, and leave, but if we beat you, you lend us a hand, deal?” “I may be able to beat both of you together, but I’d prefer if this was one on one…” said Pikachu. “Oh, of course. You’ll be facing me in a one on one match. First to give up or get knocked out loses. How does that sound?” Milk-chan asked. Pikachu nodded and followed Milk-chan and Major Tim out the door. His sister trailed after her brother, wanting to watch the fight. Milk took his position a few yards from Pikachu, and both of them stood ready to fight. Pikachu raised his arm, which was surrounded by lightning. Milk was about to open his cloak, when the ground between the two of them exploded. As the smoke began to clear, they looked up to see a teenage girl, looking to be around eighteen, hovering above them. Her blonde hair waved in the wind, along with her pink silk robe. Her light blue eyes were as piercing as the voice in which she spoke. “It’s been far too long, Timmy.” she said, smiling. Major Tim’s lips curved into a snarl as he saw who the girl was. “It hasn’t been nearly long enough, little vampire.” Milk-chan chuckled. “Well, well, it seems the vampire queen, Dark Magician Girl, decided to pay us a personal visit…” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Cool, the return of the ancient apocalypse battle thing. And the best part is I will be in this since I'm in both clubs! Score! I hope I get be interesting, if I'm a bland minor character I will sic Pidgeon Devil Man on you. Plus if you need ideas, I'm you man, I have one idea for Kotaro but I'd need his permission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 This is an excellent opener.Wait...Why is this opening more epic than ours? (Jk). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 well get his permission and tell me the idea XD Anyway, you're basically like milk, except less wicked (in the fanfic).... but I'll probably find a good role for you.This is an excellent opener.Wait...Why is this opening more epic than ours? (Jk). I thought that too XD I've just gotten better throughout XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 And this tells the otherside of the story taking place in the FK fan-fic? So everything will be from their point of view and things will cross over.Right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 yeah, except this will cast the characters in a different light. so expect your character to be a mastermind bordering on evil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Good, I like that.Quick question, will the same storyline carry out or will it be altered to where they are winning?Serious questions and I'm interested because this is semi-related to the FK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Well, you'll just have to see huh? I can say there will be some alterations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 OK, as long as the storyline remains intact it should be alright.We can't have them beating us the first time around, otherwise the fic will end all to soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 yeah, though it won't follow the storyline precisely, and the setting is less futurstic too. So instead of a moonsized ship, you'll get - ...you'll find out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 ...What are you doing to my Ship DL? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Oh nothin much, just this, and that....... you'll see around ch 5 or so, or whenever it is introduced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 It better not be screwed up, other wise your going to be screwed up.Its best to not mess with my stuff, especially when it comes to the Ultima. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 well it's still gonna have most of the stuff, it just...wontbemoonsizedormuchofaship Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 WAIT! Lemme guess, no moonstone cannon and it doesn't fly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I refuse to answer you question (said in monotone) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 It wasn't a question, it was a statement.Otherwise one of these would have been there ---> ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I refuse to comment on your statement... Oh, and a miracle happened. I was accepted into the Org.13! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thats nice, I saw btw.Be warned, you stepped into a loony bin.Oh and you can't have my couch, nd the other belongs to Lar(xene) who uses pandas to type since she is too lazy to leave the couch.Are you Heartless or Nobody? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Beware my stuff, all of it is haunted by some demon or minor deity. All of it. Plus never act like you know anything more than anyone else, people like Zero and Deus would be eaten alive. Lar and Zex dont like arrogance unless it's in a obviosly BSing tone so it's a clear joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 ... I fear for what I may encounter...oh, I tried applying for heartless the first time, I think but then decided to nobody it in my second app. Thus I'm nobody ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 yeah' date=' except this will cast the characters in a different light. so expect your character to be a mastermind bordering on evil.[/quote']And I will be like? And I can't wait for my fight with Puppy Boy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 YOU'LL HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 bumpz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 new chapter added ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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