The Legend of Zelda: Phantom Deity [CLOSED]

[Wyvern]

((can i join?

 

USER NAME: Stardust Wyvern

 

NAME: Enthai

RACE:Zora

AGE:14

GENDER:Male

APPEARANCE:Like a regular Zora except he has ice blue spots instead of dark blue. his arm-fins are longer tan normal.

HEIGHT: like 5' 10''

WEIGHT:116 lbs

FIGURE: Athletic. Tall and slender, so you can see his muscles.

HAIR COLOR:N/A

HAIR STYLE: N/A

EYE COLOR: very bright astonishing pink

COMPLEXION: White

CLOTHING: a belt, but other tan that, none.

ALLIANCE:(wait, so wit ganon, nuetral, or against ganon?)

POWERS / ABILITIES:He has the ability to receive thought processes from people and project hisown into other's minds. His prescence is very calming and makes you just want to sort of stop and act nice. But only on weak people. strong independant people will not fall for this. He can do the arm fin throw and swim at incredibly fast speeds. He can also run very fast, but he's like a cheetah; he cant go very far.

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: A really long thin sword, witha sapphire encrusted hilt. The sheath is black with silver lining.

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Giant OctoRok!

PERSONALITY: Always has a smile on his face, but his eyes make him look like he's got a plan to kidnapp someone important. He is loving and generous, but mysterious and quiet.

BIOGRAPHY:He lived on his own as a kid and captured his pet octorok. he loves it like a dog and a 2 year old. with it he became strong and independant. ))

[Aqua Girl]

Watch now evry ones gona want to be a Dark Tribe.... To bad Its hard to get in.... >.>

[Shadow Zero]

well, quite confident are you?

anyway, i would like to suggest maybe starting the rp tomorrow evening since both me and aqua are going to be gone tomorrow, and this can also give us a chance to get more characters from people joining and such.

[Saiba Aisu]

Added the Dark Hylian Tribe as a viable race after working heavily with the concept.

 

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[spoiler=Enthai]

 

[spoiler=Character Profile Submitted]

 

USER NAME: Stardust Wyvern

 

NAME: Enthai

RACE:Zora

AGE:14

GENDER:Male

APPEARANCE:Like a regular Zora except he has ice blue spots instead of dark blue. his arm-fins are longer tan normal.

HEIGHT: like 5' 10''

WEIGHT:116 lbs

FIGURE: Athletic. Tall and slender, so you can see his muscles.

HAIR COLOR:N/A

HAIR STYLE: N/A

EYE COLOR: very bright astonishing pink

COMPLEXION: White

CLOTHING: a belt, but other tan that, none.

ALLIANCE:(wait, so wit ganon, nuetral, or against ganon?)

POWERS / ABILITIES:He has the ability to receive thought processes from people and project hisown into other's minds. His prescence is very calming and makes you just want to sort of stop and act nice. But only on weak people. strong independant people will not fall for this. He can do the arm fin throw and swim at incredibly fast speeds. He can also run very fast, but he's like a cheetah; he cant go very far.

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: A really long thin sword, witha sapphire encrusted hilt. The sheath is black with silver lining.

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Giant OctoRok!

PERSONALITY: Always has a smile on his face, but his eyes make him look like he's got a plan to kidnapp someone important. He is loving and generous, but mysterious and quiet.

BIOGRAPHY:He lived on his own as a kid and captured his pet octorok. he loves it like a dog and a 2 year old. with it he became strong and independant.

 

 

 

Well, his name is certainly odd, but I guess Enthai works. However, your character is not available for consideration unless you change his age to 15 or older, since that was a requirement in the form, which you must not have read... Also, why does he have pink eyes? White skin, ice blue spots and pink eyes make him sound like an albino, and I don't think those exist among Zoras. As to his powers, I am strictly forbidding mind control or powers that affect the minds of others around them; it's simply too hard to keep track of and balance, so you'll have to pick something else. Also, the Zora are incredible swimmers, yes... but they are quite clumsy on land, meaning that he certainly couldn't run "like a cheetah".

 

His weaponry seems fine, if a little bland. I do like his method of transportation, though. Just be sure to make the "giant" octorock a reasonable size, perhaps able to carry a Zora and one smaller person at tops. As to his personality, I wasn't aware that you could identify desires to kidnap others from looking at people's eyes... His biography is too short and requires considerable expansion; also, throughout the RP, your grammar and spelling aren't very good, either. Finally, you did not decide on an Alliance for your character - yes, you must pick one out of those three.

 

Please complete these changes; otherwise, I cannot consider your character for acceptance.

 

 

 

Um, Chaos, the RP doesn't start or stop at your convenience. I appreciate the suggestion, but I would still like to wait a little bit before starting up the RP, to give more people time to join so as to not complicate the plot later on. Also, I am still hashing out the details of how to kick off everyone's missions.

[Wyvern]

((ooookay...sorry i though it meant 15 or younger... and yes i read like everything you posted on the first post except the races because i know them well. yes i will change the form....and originally i meant the "projecting thought" to be as in he could mind speak, not mind control.I go on another forum where I RP and I would definetly not powerplay. Plus my laptop has a screwy keys so my bad spelling was expected [not by you].))

 

((here goes the new try......

 

USER NAME: Stardust Wyvern

NAME: Enthai

RACE:Zora

AGE:19

GENDER:Male

APPEARANCE:a regular zora

HEIGHT: like 6' 3''

WEIGHT:180 lbs

FIGURE: Athletic. Tall and slender, so you can see his muscles.

HAIR COLOR:N/A

HAIR STYLE: N/A

EYE COLOR:black.

COMPLEXION: White

CLOTHING: a belt, but other than that, none.

ALLIANCE: Against Ganon

POWERS / ABILITIES: His prescence is very calming and makes you just want to sort of stop and act nice. But only on weak people. strong independant people will not fall for this. He can do the arm fin throw and swim at incredibly fast speeds.

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: A really long thin sword, with a sapphire encrusted hilt. The sheath is black with silver lining.

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Giant OctoRok!

PERSONALITY: He is always wearing a sinister smile. He is loving and generous, but when it comes to strangers he is mysterious and quiet.

BIOGRAPHY:His parents abandoned him when he was only a small child. So living up on his own had a few advantages. He was lonely, where he could think and leanr easier, and he grew up learning how to fight. Once, he came upon a giant Octorok and began a duel with it, for it was a vile creature, not letting him pass. Some-halfway through the fight he realized that he didn't want to fight anymore, so he gave up. The octorok noticed his tiredness, and was confused. He still hit Enthai and thrashed him about. Enthai couldn't careless, except for the pain. Finally, Enthai snapped out of his trance and jumped on the beast and snared it with rope. Then, he was taken for a wild ride, which he tried to stop the beast. Eventually he did, and he and the octorok learned to live together. After awhile they liked each other a lot, and then they were really close. Enthai has traveled only a little bit because he is a Zora, a water creature. He got his sword from a Hylian merchant who had passed by. He was willing to pay a lot, and so he got a fine weapon, but it was small. He trained very hard and learned to use this sword wisely, and he's currently just living life.))

[Saiba Aisu]

Alright, Stardust, thanks. I appreciate your cooperation - be sure to expand on your character's personality and background.

 

Chaos: Character accepted. Don't make me regret this.

 

Leo: Character accepted with no issues, your grammar was almost perfect.

[Aqua Girl]

I fixed my app and added my theme for this RP

[Saiba Aisu]

[spoiler=Enthai. Second Response.]

 

[spoiler=Character Profile Submitted]

 

USER NAME: Stardust Wyvern

NAME: Enthai

RACE:Zora

AGE:19

GENDER:Male

APPEARANCE:a regular zora

HEIGHT: like 6' 3''

WEIGHT:180 lbs

FIGURE: Athletic. Tall and slender, so you can see his muscles.

HAIR COLOR:N/A

HAIR STYLE: N/A

EYE COLOR:black.

COMPLEXION: White

CLOTHING: a belt, but other than that, none.

ALLIANCE: Against Ganon

POWERS / ABILITIES: His prescence is very calming and makes you just want to sort of stop and act nice. But only on weak people. strong independant people will not fall for this. He can do the arm fin throw and swim at incredibly fast speeds.

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: A really long thin sword, with a sapphire encrusted hilt. The sheath is black with silver lining.

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Giant OctoRok!

PERSONALITY: He is always wearing a sinister smile. He is loving and generous, but when it comes to strangers he is mysterious and quiet.

BIOGRAPHY:His parents abandoned him when he was only a small child. So living up on his own had a few advantages. He was lonely, where he could think and leanr easier, and he grew up learning how to fight. Once, he came upon a giant Octorok and began a duel with it, for it was a vile creature, not letting him pass. Some-halfway through the fight he realized that he didn't want to fight anymore, so he gave up. The octorok noticed his tiredness, and was confused. He still hit Enthai and thrashed him about. Enthai couldn't careless, except for the pain. Finally, Enthai snapped out of his trance and jumped on the beast and snared it with rope. Then, he was taken for a wild ride, which he tried to stop the beast. Eventually he did, and he and the octorok learned to live together. After awhile they liked each other a lot, and then they were really close. Enthai has traveled only a little bit because he is a Zora, a water creature. He got his sword from a Hylian merchant who had passed by. He was willing to pay a lot, and so he got a fine weapon, but it was small. He trained very hard and learned to use this sword wisely, and he's currently just living life.

 

 

 

For starters, the keys on your keyboard don't prevent you from using spellcheck, do they? If you want Enthai to be considered for acceptance, you'll need to work on that. In addition, you still haven't really expanded his powers enough - what do you mean, 'calms people?' Does it make them lethargic, sleepy, or merely reduce stress? Does he somehow manipulate this ability? Again, I do not like powers that affect the mental states of others, so if you this to be included, you will have to be very specific.

 

Again, in regards to his personality, you have not described him well enough, just the manner in which he acts with strangers and the fact that he wears a sinister smile. What is that supposed to mean, anyways, since he's against Ganon? As to his biography, you need more expansion - where did he live after he was abandoned? Did he have any positive influences on his life? At what age was he abandoned? How did he survive? Remember, your application is the only chance I get to see how well you'll do on the RP if I accept you, so you need to do your best to impress me.

 

Make these changes and try and improve on your grammar and writing skills, and I may consider Enthai.

 

 

 

Alright, guys. I'm just waiting to see if we'll get any more last-minute submissions. However, I am quite pleased with the number of members we have accumulated so far, so we'll be starting soon.

[Wyvern]

((This is hard...okay i will try to apply yet again but not now.))

[Saiba Aisu]

Why do you insist on putting everything between double parentheses? And okay, looking forward to it.

 

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Anyways, guys, I think we are about ready to start now. I will make soon post the In-Game Rules of the RP, which will give you a general idea of how to behave. In the meantime, after much consideration, I have edited the rules of the RP, making it nonviable to submit characters allied with Ganon unless you present me with an extraordinary character to use as an exception.

 

If you still wish your character to be allied separately from the forces of Light, the "darkest" he/she can get is "Netural".

[Wyvern]

sigh... I insist because it's OOC and I'm used to it. EVEN THOUGH it hasn't started.

 

EDIT: Okay, so here it is...I really tried to make it better, so I hope I get it right this time. If I do get rejected, I won't be offended in anyway because I read the rules and I don't mind.

 

[spoiler=Enthai]

USER NAME: Stardust Wyvern

NAME: Enthai

RACE: Zora

AGE: 19

GENDER: Male

APPEARANCE: A regular zora

HEIGHT: like 6' 3''

WEIGHT: 180 lbs

FIGURE: Athletic. He is tall and slender, so his muscles are visible, though they aren't very impressive muscles.

HAIR COLOR: N/A

HAIR STYLE: N/A

EYE COLOR: black.

COMPLEXION: White

CLOTHING: A black belt with a silver buckle. On the buckle is a large sapphire, which Enthai found at the bottom of Lake Hylia.

ALLIANCE: Against Ganon

POWERS / ABILITIES: (I finally found a power for him!)Enthai can sort manipulate stone. He can break it, mend it, change its shape, and move it. But he cannot have a large rock fly up in the air or hit somebody. This is very odd, considering he is a Zora, a water creature. He can do the arm fin throw and swim at incredibly fast speeds.

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: A really long bow made out of black wood. He uses a tektite leg bone as a quiver for his arrows.

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Giant Octorok!

PERSONALITY: When around friends or acquaintances he is calm, knowing things will be okay. He is loving and generous, for he doesn't think life is about himself. He thinks he is very unimportant in the universe. He doesn't expect much from people except that they are willing to be faithful in themselves. He is scared of death and therefore always trying to occupy himself to try to not think about it. But if he's around someone he doesn’t know, then he goes all quiet and sort of sits on the sidelines of conversations, because [again] he doesn't think he is important. He is very obedient and is someone you just couldn't imagine as a leader.

BIOGRAPHY: His parents abandoned him when he was only a small child, about seven years old. He was abandoned somewhere in Hyrule field, so he walked until he found water-Lake Hylia. He lived in a small cave he created with his Stone-ability, and he made it a comfortable place to live. So growing up alone had a few advantages. He was lonely, where he could think and learn easier, and he grew up learning how to fight. His loneliness and wonders (about his parents and what life would have been like if they hadn't abandoned him) drove him to live on. He hunted the crows that lived in Lake Hylia's atmosphere for food. He used his bow and arrow, which he made himself out of wood and a Tektite. Once, he came upon a giant Octorok and began a duel with it, for it was a vile creature, not letting him pass. Some-halfway through the fight he realized that he didn't want to fight anymore, so he gave up. The octorok noticed his tiredness, and was confused. He still hit Enthai and thrashed him about. Enthai couldn't careless, except for the pain. Finally, Enthai snapped out of his trance and jumped on the beast and snared it with rope. Then, he was taken for a wild ride, which he tried to stop the beast and calm it. Eventually he did, and he and the octorok learned to live together. After awhile they liked each other a lot, and then they were really close. Enthai has traveled only a little bit because he is a Zora, a water creature.

 

[Saiba Aisu]

Stardust: I dunno, I am trying to stay away from powers that manipulate elements. Even though I appreciate the risk taken to make your character unique, I'd prefer it if you changed his abilities. For example, not every character needs magic-like powers. My character is just naturally acrobatic, flexible, and speedy - all qualities which help a thief. Why not make him have exceptional accuracy as an archer? I do like the fact that you went for a Tektite leg bone, although Tektites are fleshy insects that don't have bones, just an exoskeleton. Maybe make it the giant bone of a fish he found at the bottom of Lake Hylia. Everything else is fine; make those changes, and you're accepted.

 

Aqua Girl: Okay, the changes are finally good. Character accepted. I'm keeping my eye on you, so be sure to make good-quality posts with good grammar and spelling, please.

[Shadow Zero]

actually, you could say that he has part of the exoskeleton of a tektites leg, that would solve that problem. wouldn't it?

[Wyvern]

so now i have to wait five days....

[Saiba Aisu]

GM Post: Hyrule Castle Town

GM Post: Hyrule Castle Town

 

Doubly protected by a fast-running moat fed by Zora's River and high, gleaming white battlements, the prosperous form of Hyrule Castle Town can be discerned, with the white spire of Hyrule Castle—where the Royal Family lives—rising far off into the distance, shrouded by silvery mists. Despite the Town's peaceful and mercantile appearance, it is a well-defended fortress that can repel all but the most powerful of attacking forces. It had seen fire and darkness in the long years when Ganon had spread his sinister designs from its base, and after his defeat, witnessed a slow recovery as its people tried to rebuild the fragments of their broken world. Today, however, you will find that the drawbridge is lowered, and that no one will stop you from entering the city or wandering around, provided you behave yourself. Hyrule Castle Town is split into several districts, roughly characterized by the nature of the activities or goods conducted or sold there. While many respectable businesses—such as Fador's Bazaar, the Armory, or even the various Smithies—are open almost exclusively during daytime hours, the Town contains a few shadier locations as well, such as the infamous False Virgin Tavern and the celebrated, well-patronized Brothel of the Goddesses, where it is rumored one can find paradise in this world rather than the next. While it's quite easy to get lost within the many winding back allies and crowded streets if you don't know your way, there is no shortage of people able to help redirect you—whether they will actually do so is another matter entirely. Although their presence would have seems almost superfluous considering the lack of conflict, the city is marked by the presence of the Castle Guards, who regularly patrol the area and maintain order.

 

For trade, glory, personal gain, or merely to broaden your horizons—for whatever reason you may have journeyed within the Town's fortified borders—a new day is dawning, and the time for your adventure draws close. Will you rise to meet the challenges your destiny has dictated and change the very course of Hyrule? Only time will tell.

 

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The sun moved high into its zenith above the bustling, red-topped capital of Hyrule Castle Town, shining fiercely with a golden light against an azure sky. The cobbled streets below were the image of urban activity, packed with all sorts of people—behind their stands, merchants and grocers advertised their wares in ringing voices, haggling with the customers that crowded around; women gossiped as they walked home, skirts swaying; children tore through the alleys, shrieking with laughter, and travelers reached for the reassuring feel of their full moneybags. However, beneath the obvious sense of contentment that exuded from the Town, there was an almost palatable air of tension and uneasiness—although the harvest this year had been prosperous, food had been unusually scarce for the past few months and strange rumors had begun to circulate; frightening rumors that told of treachery in high places, of coming war with the other people of Hyrule, and of the growing threat of attacks by monsters.

 

For this reason, the smiles people wore were fixed, brittle—as if the slightest shock or upset would shatter them and reveal the turmoil and barely concealed fear beneath. Meanwhile, a hooded, slender figure clad in an unremarkable brown cloak stepped swiftly and lightly as she made her way through the crowds and turned onto a less frequented path, almost deserted save for the few beggars pleading for alms. As she passed, she dropped several purple rupees into a man's outstretched palm; the grimy beggar's whines cut off as he gazed at more money than he had ever seen in his lifetime. Not bothering to look back, the woman moved with purpose until she had almost reached the eastern border of the city, marked by an abandoned courtyard which had obviously seen better days. Directly in front of her, a stately chapel-like structure reared proudly from the ground, weathered with time and barred firmly by two wooden doors that were closed.

 

The Temple of Time, she thought to herself, regarding the ancient structure and placing a pale hand against its cool surface. The place where it all began, and will begin again. Then she turned and pushed open the door, which swung shut with a dull thud behind her as she disappeared into the chapel's confines.

 

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OoC: The first part of this post attempts to describe certain sections of Hyrule Castle Town, where you'll be beginning your adventure, while the second relates to you its current mood. Currently, you are free to RP sections of the capital city as you please, provided you provide ample description and do not leave or attempt to enter the well-guarded Castle Grounds or Temple of Time, for obvious reasons. For the moment, however, just be sure to present your character in some part of the city in an introductory fashion—there will be plenty of time for additional exploration later on. The next GM Post will be made once everyone is done introducing themselves; in the meantime, you are encouraged to interact realistically with one another, although fighting is strictly prohibited.

[Shadow Zero]

||||It was one of his rare free days, a day where he could do anything he wanted, or needed. For the moment, Raven had elected to get up early in the morning without disturbing his wife Mira and grabbed one of his swords, the smallest and most unremarkable looking of the 3. It was his favorite sword, one that he had since his early years when he had started studying the art of combat, and the one that he had always trained with. Walking into the backyard of his home, he looked around and smiled to himself. He could hear the bustle of activity starting as the other inhabitants of Hyrule Castle Town began waking up and doing their daily morning routine.

 

||||The sun just barely starting to rise on this warm late summers morning, Raven took a ready stance and raised his sword and began practicing his forms. A horizontal swing, followed by a second one in the opposite direction and at an angle, lowering the sword then swinging it diagonally upward, and finally bringing it down as he crouched to the ground as though dodging the blow of another swordsman and slashing at where the lower legs would be, finishing off by bringing the sword around and stabbing it into the ground where the chest would be if he had been fighting someone. Raven paused for a moment and stood up straight, his sword dangling at his right side as he directed his green eyes towards where the sun was rising. Standing completely still for a moment, Raven began to feel the same uneasiness that had pressed upon him for the past four years and ran a hand through his blond hair, trying to keep from feeling to unsettled, as he didn't want his wife to worry about him.

 

||||Raven returned to practicing his forms and continued on for the next 2 hours until he inadvertently hit the pole that was kept upright in the center of the yard, the force of his swing causing the blade to snap in half with a loud metallic sounding crack. Looking first at the remainder of the blade that was still attached to the hilt, then at the part of the blade hat had snapped off, Raven sighed and thought Well, at least it's a clean break. This should be fairly quick for Lorenz to fix. Still, he has been telling me for a while that he can make the blade stronger, and although I do not wish for this sword to me made to look different then it is now, I don't want it to become unusable due to my own foolish insistence. Raven bent down and picked up the broken part of the blade off of the ground and put it into the nearby sheath, followed by the rest of the blade that was still attached to the hilt.

 

||||Looking around the backyard and the tall wooden fence that surrounded it, Raven decided to visit Raizen before heading back inside and walked across the emerald green lawn that covered the entire back yard of his house. Raven reaches the small stable that Raizen and Frost Shard shared and opened the door. Seeing that Raizen was up, he walked into the stable and breathed in the sharp scent of fresh hay and straw, as he had just changed it the previous night before turning in. Walking over to where the fruit was kept, he grabbed a large apple, a shiny red one that he buffed up on his shirt a bit before walking over to Raizen and holding his hand out. Bumping Ravens hand affectionately, Raizen accepted the apple and ate it from Ravens hand until it was all gone. Giving a soft snort of affection, Raizen stood still while Raven patted his snout. Raizen was a horse that was dark brown in color, and was also very fast. Raven had often raced against the other knights in Hyrule Castle Town during some small moments of on duty free time and not a single one of them had been able to beat Raizen, who had only finally met his match when racing against Frost Shard.

 

||||Lowering his hand, Raven walked out of the stable and back across the yard, leaving Raizen to go back and lie down next to Frost Shard. Heading straight for the back door of his house, Raven hung the broken sword in its sheath, the walked into the nearby washroom and quickly splashed some water on his arms, hands and face before drying them off and walking out again and heading for the kitchen, thinking that he would make some breakfast for Mira if she wasn't already up and cooking yet.

 

 

ooc: longest. post. ever. i'll go and message aqua now letting her know that it's her turn to post.

[Proto]

OOC: Heres my accepted App

[spoiler=Lokiri the Salesman]

 

NAME: Lokiri

 

AGE: 26

 

RACE: Rito

 

GENDER: Male

 

APPEARANCE:

 

- HEIGHT: 5'7

 

- WEIGHT: 86 lbs [Props for Blazing for giving me the weight]

 

- FIGURE: Slender

 

- HAIR COLOR: White

 

- HAIR STYLE: His hair is mostly worn as a spiky style with a short piece of twine tying up the rest of his long hair, his wings are of the same color of his hair and are quite large indeed.

 

- EYE COLOR: Orange

 

- COMPLEXION: His skin is a deep brown hue as with most other male members of the Rito.

 

- CLOTHING: Lokiri wears a version of the typical clothes of the Rito, a purple tunic covered with a bright red cloak, often used for traveling instances. He also dons a large sort of barrel along his back in order to carry supplies required for sellling and setting up his shop. He often dons a black undershit and the special shoes that allow the Rito to use their talons properly.

 

ALLIANCE: Lokiri's alliance is mostly centered around himself, as he does not wish to quarrel with others to much and enjoys his current job as a Shop Owner and occasional Postman of the Rito. He dislikes Ganon to a extent but prefers not to be a part of the resistance due to his moderate swordsmanship. At most he enjoys supplying other young heros in their journey, if they are willing to pay the right price that is.

 

POWERS / ABILITIES: Lokiri has the trademark pair of wings granted to him by Lord Valoo who gave it to him when he finally became of age. He is particularly strong at flying, which he is more sturdy then he is swift, able to pierce himself through fierce winds with ease. His mastery with weapons is average, though having a advanced knowledge of all weaponry and having decent attacks at his disposal, he is usually unable to keep his ground agianst most foes with training. He has a vast knowledge of spells and magic, being able to reconize most items at a first glance.

 

Overall Lokiri's main weapon is his cunning and ability to craft many makeshift traps or weapons. He can often trick the enemy quite easily and is able to talk his way out of most situations.

 

STANDARD EQUIPMENT: Lokiri generally carries anything required that he have on hand in his transportation barrel, often carried on his back. He has a metal blade on his person at all times, though he is not very gifted in the art of swordsmanship, it gives him a reassuring sense of security. His equipment so far consists of three metal shields constructed in the Goron Mines, a pot full of Red Potion, and a small bag of bombs.

 

MEANS OF TRANSPORTATION: Lokiri uses his wings to fly at almost all times possible, however when he wishes to take a break or is unable to sustain the weight, he has a companion, a large purple Takkuri that serves as a mount. While being over twice the size of Lokiri, this Takkuri can only carry him and several of his goods at most. This Takkuri also serves as a use of buisness, due to its fondness of stealing items and overall toughness, it gives Lokiri a option for sales.

 

PERSONALITY: Lokri mostly retains a calm demeanor to all his customers and allows ones of all races attend his store. However if the ones get him the slightest bit angry he will throw them out of the shop, to only have healed his temper when they return.

 

He is not the most noble of heros, but has a good heart, this however does not mean that he would not try to extend the price on his items when possible. He is very stingy on certain items that are close to him, or feel like they are worth more Rupees.

 

He is overall very friendly to everyone that he encounters.

 

BIOGRAPHY: Lokiri was born in the Rito Mountains, where he was originally trained with the Clawshot, as when attempted his simulated flight skills were unimpressive. Eventually he climbed with his Grappling Hook to the top of the Mountain where the Great Dragon Valoo appeared and granted him his wings.

 

Unfortunatly, Lokiri had not been given premission to access the Great Valoo's domain by the chief that day, therefore he was banished from the tribe. Lokiri was quite skilled once obtaining his wings and managed to fly away to Castle Town where he lived as a entertainer to the public.

 

He eventually was approached by a increasingly large bird, while traveling to find work. The Takkuri attacked him at first but he managed to subdue it by feeding it and encouraging the bird that he was not a foe. The Takkuri and Lokiri traveled across the land, however the Takkuri toke a increasing interest in valuable items and managed to "borrow" several shields from passerby. Eventually Lokiri and his fine feathered friend settled down back in Castle Town as a salesman this time.

 

 

 

 

The airs of Hyrule were calm today, as the Wind was whistling through the air and sun shining bright. However this all came to soon as a tanned red marked figure with white hair and beak-like nose stumbled out of a nearby inn, in his hand clasped a empty mug clinking as he walked slowly towards a large balding purple bird, resembling a condor or a eagle. The strange bird-man had the look of him that looked rather shabby, his clothing was a bit torn and his eyes looked as if they had not shut for quite a while.

 

The strange balding bird picked up the Rito with both of its large talons and with great effort, pulled him up into the sky, after some time they arrived at a optimistic looking store. The sign above it titled "Lokiri's shop for the Brave". The bird-man walked into the purple painted shop, it was quite a nice one with desk and a pot of red liquid, a rack of three finely crafted steel sheilds, and a small sack of homemade cherry bombs. The Rito pushed himself through the door and produced a tiny bottle from his coat and scooped up some of the red liquid and put it to his lips.

 

The second the liquid had reached his throat his eyes opened newly, his body was changing to cancel out his old drunkard self. Suddenly the newly awakened smiling Lokiri ran through a small door behind the counter and got changed into a purple tunic with special shoes to enlarge his talons. He then ran outside to change the "Closed" sign to "Open for buisness" as the large purple bird rested on the top of the settlement. The delighted Rito dashed behind his counted and began waiting for customers.

[leoluiz]

Skull Kid was mounted on Wolf, his wolfo serving as a mount. He could see the city gate. It was a giant, white stone wall. When they approached the city, they could see the drawbridge across. He was about entering the city, when he was stopped by a guard.

 

"Hey boy, beasts can not enter the city." he said in a warning tone. Skull Kid took apart the back of Wolf. "Wolf back home, I call when I need you." he stood watching Wolf back toward the forest. He started walking toward the city when the same guard stopped him again. "A child can not carry a weapon like a bow, is very dangerous." Skull Kid was getting angry. "I'm not a child." he shouted, "Calm down,boy," the guard said trying to calm Skull Kid. "Can I enter the city now?" He said calmer. "Sure, but you could take the mask?" after hear the last sentence, Skull Kid get very angry, but calmly replied, "Sorry, but I can't." he was now going into the city when he took something out of a bag. "Here, this is a present. Just do not throw it on the floor near you." He gave a small seed to the guard and continued to walk to the city. Seconds later he heard a noise, like a small explosion. "They never listen to me." he said, beneath the mask he smiled.

 

He continued to walk around the city. Some time later he sat on the roof of a house and started playing his flute. Some people stopped to hear the beautiful music that he played.

[Andx]

In the Castle Town you could usually find any sort of person you cared to look for. Though hardly ever was a Zora seen in the Castle Town, much less casually walking through the streets. Lorenz had just barely got back from a quick swim in the river that would eventually have taken him to Zora's Domain had he stayed in it. The river was probably the only reason Lorenz could live in the Castle Town. A Zora needs some exposure to water everyday.

 

As Lorenz walked through the town he acknowledged several people who said hello or simply recognized him. It had been a while since the last time the people had given him awkward, almost "What are you doing here?", sort of looks. After a year, though it was still curious, the people had seemed to become accustomed to having a Zora among them.

 

Lorenz made his way through the bustling center of town. It was the intersection of the various districts and was generally the most full of people. Lorenz turned to go down to the southern district which was where several small businesses, like his own, gathered together in great number. He was already about an hour late to opening so Lorenz needed to get there relatively soon. Not that he was ever incredibly busy, it just looked bad if the shop owner was there for a good part of the day. Still, Amy, his young female secretary or assistant, would be mildly annoyed with him for being late.

 

Lorenz walked up to his simple shop and entered the old, beaten door. Lorenz hadn't exactly been rich when he went about buying the place. And as he'd rather have better living quarters than working space he bought an old abandoned shop. Of course he'd cleaned it up but couldn't really go about replacing anything yet. As he entered he saw a note on the desk where Amy should have been working. It simply read that she had too many things to go about doing today and that she wouldn't be able to come in; along with an apology at the end.

"So, just me today then? Not like much exciting ever goes on in this shop anyway." Lorenz said as he set the note down. He opened the curtains to the large window in the front of the shop and took out the "closed" sign from the window to tell the busy people of Hyrule Castle Town, that he was open for business.

[encapturer]

Oh? I could've sworn I had more... Deralen examined his money pouch as he sat off to the side in the bustling Castle Town. He was standing in front of a building, counting his rupees as people traveled to and fro along the main path. Deralen frowned after finishing, wondering where all his rupees went, forgetting that he had spent it all at an amusement arcade the day before. With the amount he had, he could only spend about two weeks longer at the inn he was staying at.

 

Deralen was always fully equipped for traveling, though for him this basically equated to his rupee bag, his bomb bag, and his bracer-blades. The latter did not have have a proper name yet, since it was the first one ever made for actual use. Deralen kept thinking about giving the weapon a good name, but kept putting it off for various reasons. Still, it was a sturdy weapon, especially for one so modular. Right now, the grip which would normally release the blades was disabled, and shifted off to the side a bit to allow Deralen to manipulate things with his hands directly. He had no idea how that worked, just that the smiths and craftsmen that collaborated to make this weapon were geniuses.

 

Deralen closed his bag and began walking the town once again, planning to listen to gossip as he walked, and to learn about the current events of the areas outside of Death Mountain. He had gotten restless with the current training regime required to keep himself in top form back at home. Thus, he took a break from the league, deciding to do a little traveling. And among the few Gorons in Castle Town, he is practically a celebrity. Outside of his race, though, his fame dwindles, as only a few even know of the sport, much less the current champion.

 

There were no races planned today, where Deralen would challenge someone to a race where they could use whatever method they wanted, and he would just roll around the field which made up the track. The various races he won and lost reinvigorated his spirit, and he felt he could return home anytime to train again. However, he still did not see all of castle town, and he may not get the chance to do so again anytime soon. For now, he proceeded slowly through the crowd to a clearing he discovered a few days ago. After all, even if not with his coach, he can still train himself here.

[Guest Tainted Black]

Billos sat on the side of Death Mountain, outside of a cave, looking out over the land of Hyrule. He thought as he satred, . He stood and paced thinking. He'd left Hyrule as a citizen a while ago, and he was now a rogue. He had no plans, and no one to turn to. He only had power. His book, which he could not figure out how to break the seal on it, and Farore's Wind, which, for some reason, caused him a great physical strain when he used it. It made no sense really, as he had magical aptitude, but it did. He only used it to find supplies, escape anyone after him, or to come here. His home. For now. He turned to the entrance, and walked in.

[Hydra of Ages]

A colony of ants. They lived together, they died together... All but their Queen. The queen was kept stored in her little pocket, in her shielded position of the nest, where she would command all of the lesser ants. Even though many of the workers never met with the queen, they followed her commands despite such. They did so because their situation, their culture, was baded around said Queen; Without her, how would they function? Who would they bring food to, how would they live their lives, how would they be safe from their numerous predators and enemies?

 

Such was the life of an ant. Constantly hunted, always in danger... the weaker ants would always die for the sake of a Queen, toted as better not because of her skill or because the other ants thought she was any better than any of the other ones, but simply because they had been taught to put the Queen's life before their own. Most of them hadn't even seen the queen before, as their jobs centered on the more remote and dangerous parts of the nest, away from the cushy nook the Queen never had to escape from.

 

It was a simple, clean, and heartless system. No ant had any real power in it; Even the Queen was bound by her duties and her birth, she had no real choice in the matter. Everyone was screwed by everyone else, and while they perhaps grew as a society because of it, their rights as indeviduals suffered.

 

But then again, they were just ants, right?

 

Funny, thought Siriri as she looked down upon the nest of the tiny little black insects from high above, how Hylians somehow think they're better then the other insects that inhabit this continent of ours.

 

She circled around three times in a tight circle until she saw the bowmen atop the gates of the castle's boundry give her a thumbs up; That was the respected signal a flyer needed before they could land anywhere in Castle Town. Rito were highly discouraged from entering from above, instead supposed to land by the drawbridge instead of possibly causing a disturbance in the crowds, but what the hell, she wasn't much a stickler for rules anyway. So long as they didn't pump her full of arrows, she couldn't care much what they thought of her.

 

Her ebony wings fluttered franticly as she outstretched with her talons, delicately landing with both claws pointed downward and cushioning the impact with a few final flaps, before she finally tucked away the feathered appendages. She smirked, the edges of her beak twitching upward a little, at the Hylians that has paused to watch her descend before they walked off. Rito weren't exactly uncommon over in Castle Town -after all, they controlled the entire postal system, and Castle Town was a capital city- but they rarely landed right in the middle of a crowd; generally, they'd just walk in by the drawbridge like the rest of civilized public and only take flight only later, or else they'd simply land in the Mail Tower before flying off for other buisness.

 

She glanced up at the Mail Tower, which was erected atop one of the archer's Battlements along the Town Wall. No Rito were flying in and out of it today, which either meant the Rito were holding some sort of meaning, there was mail backup, or it was simply a slow week. Sariri hazarded a guess that it was the later; even in the most dire circumstances, SOME Rito would still be attempting to deliver the mail. That was their motto; No matter what the weather, no matter what the situation, the Mail would always be on time. The Rito took their oaths seriously, and especially their duties as the messenger carriers of all the races of Hyrule.

 

Sariri stretched a little and stifled a little yawn from the back of her throat. Even thinking about it made her bored. The Mail Room, the deliveries... the same routes, every day, every time.... It was all so very, very dull. It was Soul-Slaughtering. They liked to assign the Postrito to the same routes, week in, week out. Assumingly, making the same run a routine over the years would ensure the mail was always on time and the Rito didn't get lost or something. Sariri had always hated that; she traded her routes all the time with other people, just for more variety. She wanted to fly around more of Hyrule than just one little strip every week; That little stagnant policy they employed was just one of the reasons bear to be there anymore.

 

She glanced around, placing her arms behind her back innocently as she glanced at the people bustle in and out. She had landed near a fairly ornate fountain, she observed; Such an elaborate centerpiece, and the key path that led directly to the main entrance of the fabled Hyrule Castle was very telling that she had landed right in the City Square.

 

She mused over the fact that she'd never been here before. She'd been over to Castle Town, but never any farther than the Mail Tower; there was never any need, and the Postal Service was rather strict with people who dallied in one area for too long. Now that she had a closer look, the Ant's Den was really quite an interesting place; Cobbled streets that tined this way and next, shabbilly dressed peasents wandering in and out in various states of awareness, trickling down paths like drops of water, the rather maze-like combination of the colored buildings and the streets, like the internal system of some massive beast... it was all rather exillerating, she noted.

 

She smirked, and with a few flaps of her wings, generly vaulted herself to the top of one of the nearby shops, the roofing tiles clinking gently under her bare talons. She glanced around, holding a hand flat above her eyes as she observed the roofline of the city, admiring the view for a few seconds.

 

She giggled, watching the people move from one of the many large districts of the vast city to the next.

 

"They look like ants from here." she mused, pushing back some of her long raven hair so that it wouldn't impede her vision.

[Shadow Zero]

||||Raven noticed that the kitchen was still empty and wondered at that. Usually Mira was up buy now, at least sitting at the table and sipping a cup of tea if nothing else. Bringing out a pan and putting some oil and several eggs and some preserved meats in it, he struck a a couple of stones together and started the fire underneath it, using the wood and tinder that had been placed there the night before.

 

||||Waiting for a while to make sure that the breakfast was coming along smoothly, Raven walked back to the bedroom that he shared with Mira and smiled. She was still fast asleep, the covers still right where Raven had left them, covering Mira up to her neck and keeping her warm. Walking over, Raven kneeled at the edge of the bed and lightly kissed Mira on her forehead, before going back into the kitchen and finishing breakfast.

 

||||Once breakfast had been made, he served up his portion of it, making sure that he left the larger portion in the pot and ate his breakfast quickly. Having finished his breakfast, he wrote a brief letter and left it on the table, apologizing for not waiting for Mira to wake up and explaining why he left. Having finished writing the letter, he put his shield and swords on, making sure that he had everything else on before he walked out of the house.

 

||||Taking in a deep breath of fresh air, Raven set off for the center of Hyrule town from where his house was close by the path to the castle. Okay, first thing I need to do is drop off my sword at Lorenz's shop. After that, I think I'll go and relax over by the fountain. It's been a long time since I had an off day, so I might as well enjoy it.

[Aqua Girl]

If you see the future do you know it?

 

There’s a thunder around the room is dark, Mira does not understand, she looks around only to turn to her left and see The Dark Lord Gannon Impaling Raven, "Nooo!!!!!!!!" She screams, as the top of the tower where she stands becomes incased in Ice.

 

Mira awoke in a cold sweat, she quickly regained her usual denemor and got up and took off her shirt and underwear, she walked to the kitchen with her new underwear on, she found the food still hot and the note, Mira blushed at the things Raven said apologizing to her because of leavening early, She got the food on a plate and ate the rest of the food. After Mira washed the dishes she went to the room, she got her white dress out and put on a cute white sun hat she gathered her things and left the house.

 

Mira passed by the stables, Frost Shard jumped up and galloped over, she Greeted Mira with a sniff to the face, Aside from the usual ride or race against Raven and Raizen Frost never got to get any real exercise, Mira headed off to the castle when she got inside the city gates a Group of Children raced up to her, "Its the Snow Lady! Make it Snow!" The children chanted.

 

Mira Brought out her Ocarina and played the song of Blizzards, the clouds began to darken she stopped playing and manipulated the storm with her magic so the storm was only a temporary light snow, the children cheered, Mira gave them each a Rupie and went to the market to find Raven.

 

When Mira had gotten to the fountain she saw a bunch of girls crowded around Raven, she just stood with an angry face waiting for him to notice her......

[Aqua Girl]

If you see the future do you know it?

 

There’s a thunder around the room is dark, Mira does not understand, she looks around only to turn to her left and see The Dark Lord Gannon Impaling Raven, "Nooo!!!!!!!!" She screams, as the top of the tower where she stands becomes incased in Ice.

 

Mira awoke in a cold sweat, she quickly regained her usual denemor and got up and took off her shirt and underwear, she walked to the kitchen with her new underwear on, she found the food still hot and the note, Mira blushed at the things Raven said apologizing to her because of leavening early, She got the food on a plate and ate the rest of the food. After Mira washed the dishes she went to the room, she got her white dress out and put on a cute white sun hat she gathered her things and left the house.

 

Mira passed by the stables, Frost Shard jumped up and galloped over, she Greeted Mira with a sniff to the face, Aside from the usual ride or race against Raven and Raizen Frost never got to get any real exercise, Mira headed off to the castle when she got inside the city gates a Group of Children raced up to her, "Its the Snow Lady! Make it Snow!" The children chanted.

 

Mira Brought out her Ocarina and played the song of Blizzards, the clouds began to darken she stopped playing and manipulated the storm with her magic so the storm was only a temporary light snow, the children cheered, Mira gave them each a Rupie and went to the market to find Raven.

 

When Mira had gotten to the fountain she saw a bunch of girls crowded around Raven, she just stood with an angry face waiting for him to notice her......