Kiyo Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I noticed I only drew boys when I drew manga, so I decided to try my hand at a girl. I couldn't scan the pic because I lost the CD for my printer, so sorry if the quality isn't the best. Name: Tsuyayaka "Tsuya" Akabara ~Please comment and rate~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scyire Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 The eyes are very bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiyo Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Thanks. Advice on how to improve them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Thanks. Advice on how to improve them? The eyes are too close to each other, so spread them out. ;DAlso, they're too dark. Other than that, looks great. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Nice drawing. ^.^Just make the eyes.. a little less dark.Its hard to see them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Its good. Eyes are a major problem. The fact that they are so screwed up distracts from everything else. They're too close together and too big for the face. Also, you need to put it in the right perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 It looks awful to me. Sorry but it's the truth. The whole head ruins it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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