Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 This is something that came to my mind in the middle of an RP. I went along with the names Solari and Lunari. They really do sound like Pokémon names. [spoiler=Application]Character Name:Age: Gender: Appearance(If pic, must be in spoiler):Bio:Pokémon Team(Maximum of 3):Inventory(Pokémon food, etc. Maximum of 5 items): [spoiler=Characters 1][align=center]This will show the first two characters of the story. More will be added in separate posts, two for each, due to having a Wii.[spoiler=Sean]Character Name: Sean HamatoAge: 16Gender: MaleAppearance: 5"6, light skinned, long, flowing black hair down to the shoulders, orange in one eye and blue in other, and sun and moon tattoos on the arms. Slightly muscular on upper body and legs, red and black T-Shirt that says "Best Battler!" in graffiti form on front, dark blue skinny jeans that have been ripped slightly, and orange shoes with sky blue stripes.Bio: Read Chapter 1.Pokémon Team: 1. PikachuPichu » Pikachu » Raichu2. WartortleSquirtle » Wartortle » Blastoise3. CharmeleonCharmander » Charmeleon » CharizardInventory: 1. Beginner PokéDex2. PokéBalls(3)3. Pokémon Food Dispensor4. Pokémon Food5. Bag to hold it all. [spoiler=Alton]Character Name: AltonAge: 14Gender: MaleAppearance: brown hair and eyes, dark tan skin, brown short sleeve, blue pants.Bio: Alton is very skilled at being a Pokémon Trainer. He likes rare Pokémon with rare moves. He's beaten all of the Kanto and Johto Gyms. He wants to be a Pokémon Champion someday. If not champion, his second choice would be Frontier Brain.Pokémon Team: 1. Rare Pichu 2. Mamoswine 3. Shiny Cubone Inventory: 1. Bag of Poffins 2. PokéDex 3. Ultra Ball 4. Hyper Potion 5. Turtwig Egg More characters will be shown as the chapters add on.[/align] [spoiler=Prologue]Many tales have been told of Legendary Pokémon that either have been awakened by a time in a prophecy, when it's injuries have been healed from being attacked milleniums ago, or if a dimensional rift opened. These were the only ways that Legendary Pokémon were awakened, until the day 2 new Pokémon, unknown to us since the day of it's prophecy, have been awakened. The great Solari, ancient Pokémon of the Sun, and Lunari, ancient Pokémon of the moon. Around 3000 B.C., two temples lied in a desert-like area, the Temple of Solaris and the Temple of Lunaris. Both temples were contribed of special worships and specific types of Pokémon guardians. The Temple of Solaris was contribed of worship of Solari and Fire-Type and Dragon Type Pokémon guardians, such as Dragonite, and Charizard. The Temple of Lunaris was contribed of worship of Lunari and Flying-Type and Psychic Pokémon. These two temples had predicted that Solari and Lunari would return twice at different times through prophecy. The Temple of Solaris predicted that Solari would return in 2 specific Solar Eclipses at completely different time periods. The Temple of Lunaris predicted the same thing, but in 2 Lunar Eclipses. SolariSolari The first time Solari returned was on a Solar Eclipse in 2985 B.C. A flood occured at the moment of the Eclipse, miles back from an unnamed civilization, and a shining light appeared from the sun and landed on a sun symbol on the top of the Temple of Solaris. Solari, who looks like a combination of Charizard, Dragonite and Palkia's appearances but can speak English telepathically, walked out of the light and flew up to see the flood. Many people looked as Solari used most of his power to block the flood first and use solar energy to evaporate the water from the flood and stop the disaster. Many of the temple's people cheered for Solari as he crashed, unconscious. Then a man named Naes Otama walked up to Solari. He touched him as many of the Pokémon cried. The tears were somehow transforming into a glowing lava-like energy that was transfered to Solari. Solari glowed orange as he began to stand up. Solari looked at Naes and asked, "Human, were you the one that had given more power to me?" "It was not just me, it was all of these magical creatures as their love for you had regained your strength," replied Naes as he saw a sun symbol on his left palm. Solari had thanked Naes as the eclipse began to fade. As he returned to the symbol on top of the temple and said farewell, another pillar of light from the sun appeared and the Solar Eclipse ended. LunariLunari Exactly one year after Solari saved the Temple of Solaris. During that night, a strange, unexplained fire happened at the moment of a Lunar Eclipse. Just like Solari, a pillar of light appeared from the moon onto the moon symbol of the temple. Lunari walked from the pillar and saw the flames around him. Lunari has a similar appearance to Dialga, but a darker blue. i-Instead of glowing armor lines, they are replaced by similar yellow bars of what was seen on Regigigas, just reformed and blue versions of Dragonite's wings. Like Solari, he could speak English telepathically, but with a higher voice compared to Solari's deep voice. Lunari flew to the sky as he used his abilities of psychic powers to move water from a nearby river at the fire as much as possible. He then used the last of his wind abilities to create vortex that removed the oxygen from the fire and put it out completely. Like Solari, Lunari crashed to the ground, unconscious. And like before, Naes walked up to Lunari. Naes wasn't part of either temple. He lived underground by himself, coming to the surface when his parts of the prophecy have been shown and he does whatever to follow it. Just like Solari, Naes touched Lunari as the Pokémon began to cry and the tears formed energy. Lunar energy covered Lunari as Naes let go if him and the moon symbol appeared on his right palm. Lunari stood up as the energy began to fade. Like Solari, Lunari asked Naes if it was him that saved his life and Naes answered the same. Like Solari, Lunari walked to the platform as the Eclipse faded and said farewell as a pillar of Light came down and returned Lunari to the moon. Now that Naes has finished his part of the prophecy, now it is time for his descendant to bring peace to Solari and Lunari's first encounter in the next many milleniums. This is the beginning of how things will possibly end the world in the future. Today, Solari and Lunari's first encounter is nearly upon us! Chapter 1 will be posted soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Oh great, more PokeFanfics! Character Name:Alton Age: 14Gender: Male Appearance:brown hair and eyes, dark tan skin, brown short sleeve, blue pants. About:Nice overall. He is very skilled at being a Pokemon Trainer. He likes rare Pokemon with rare moves(like his Pichu that know Volt Tackle). He's beaten all the Kanto and Johto gym leaders. He wants to be a Pokemon Champion someday. If not champion, his second choice would be Frontier Brain. [spoiler=Team]If you don't mind, I'll tell you their moves. PichuIron Tail/Thunder/Shock Wave/Volt Tackle MamoswineEarthquake/Stone Edge/Giga Impact/Rest Shiny CuboneThrash/Bone Rush/Brick Break/Dig [spoiler=Inventory]1. Bag of Poffins2. PokeDex3. Ultra Ball4. Hyper Potion5. Turtwig Egg(if possible) 5. (other option)PokaNav Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I started a fad. xD Character Name: LeoAge: 14Gender: MaleAppearance(If pic, must be in spoiler): I'll get to thatBio: Ill get to thatPokémon Team(Maximum of 3): Read aboveInventory(Pokémon food, etc. Maximum of 5 items): Read above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Okay, I'll possibly accept you two when you finish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Finished mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 You're not even going to give us a prologue or anything so we know just what the heck we're applying for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 It will be posted soon. @Twig: Accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I started a fad. xD Nah' date=' I've written many before you even had the idea of writing yours. Search if you want. ;D It will be posted soon. @Twig: Accepted. For the moment, this can hardly classify as story as there is no story. Application threads are stupid, as it seems you don't have the brain span to make your own characters, which means you have no way near the brain span to write a decent plot and story. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I started a fad. xD Nah' date=' I've written many before you even had the idea of writing yours. Search if you want. ;D[/quote'] You have to be in Club Pikachu (Like Twig) to get the joke. ;D Anyways, Snitch and Rinne are right. I'll resign my app until I get to hear about the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I'd happily suggest a Character for this. When the Plot is up, that is, as stated by Snitch and Rinne. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I started a fad. xD Nah' date=' I've written many before you even had the idea of writing yours. Search if you want. ;D[/quote'] You have to be in Club Pikachu (Like Twig) to get the joke. ;D Pretty sure I've been in there much longer than you. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I started a fad. xD Nah' date=' I've written many before you even had the idea of writing yours. Search if you want. ;D[/quote'] You have to be in Club Pikachu (Like Twig) to get the joke. ;D Pretty sure I've been in there much longer than you. :3 Oh Snitchy. :3 I meant you had to be there to get the joke. It's not funny if you dun know what I'm talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Prologue added! It's very long and I hope it works to your liking! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Prologue added! It's very long and I hope it works to your liking! This isn't long. Granted, it's better than most prologues, but it's only 800-ish words. A prologue should be about half the length of a standard chapter, and for comparison, when I used to write stories, my chapters always were around 8000. No great shakes if you put it in perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Just one complaint. There's no such thing as wind type pokemon. Only flying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 My bad. I had forgotten. I'll change it now. EDIT: Changed. Now for those who were to apply, I'll wait for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Cool Fan fic so far I expect more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Thank you. Chapter 1 will be up soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slicer224 Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Good, because it's awesome so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I might put each chapter in separate posts, though. Since I have a Wii, having each chapter in separate posts help me save time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 I guess I make make a guy... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 When you're ready, post your app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Yankeefan has been accepted via PM. This will also be the schedule post from now on. Here are the first scheduled dates for posting Chapters 1-3: Chapter 1 Posted☆ - 1/26/10Chapter 2 Posted☆ - 1/30/10Chapter 3 PostedΩ◎ - 2/4/10 3 new dates will be posted when the 3 shown above meet their scheduled times. ☆=Scheduled time has been met.Ω=Chapter in progress.◎=Time to finish chapter is delayed for 1-2 days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 The scheduled dates are now changed to a day longer for each, due to the fact that I won't be on long enough to post Chapter 1 completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted January 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2010 Okay, It took time, but I finally got it! Here's Chapter 1! [spoiler=Chapter 1]It is July 3, 2010, a week after the beginning of Summer Vacation. Sean Hamato was preparing to go to the forest to see if he can find injured Pokémon and bring them to his mom. His mother, Carie Hamato, was a Pokémon caretaker. When Sean found injured or sick Pokémon, he would bring it to her and see what she can do about it and how long it will take. Carie is like the Nurse Joy of the family, while Sean's father, Joshua Hamato, is a Gym Leader. Joshua left Carie when Sean was born, though, so they both don't know what town he's a Gym Leader for. When Sean entered the forest, he began looking around. He then came across an injured Cyndaquil. It was weakly yelling for help and Sean came to his rescue. "Don't worry, I'll help you," Sean said to him. He slowly grabbed Cyndaquil, making sure not to scare him, and ran back to his house. "Mom, I found one!" yelled Sean. "Good, put him on the bed!" Carie said. Sean put the Cyndaquil on the bed, and Carie began to look at the damage. She saw what looked like a few bruises and and cuts. All it needed was a wrap-up in bandages and some rest. Sean sighed with relief, that it wasn't too serious, as Carie began to wrap around Cyndaquil's bruises and cuts. Aside from helping one Pokémon out a day, ever since summer vacation, Sean was having visions of what had happened so many milleniums ago. He could not understand why he is having these visions, but he will soon. Sean also is a top-notch battler when it comes to using his Pokémon. He nearly won every battle he was in. The first time Sean battled is when he had a Pikachu, much like Ash Ketchum, only Sean's Pikachu back then was shy and wanted to make Sean happy. Now, after countless battles, he now has Charmeleon, Ivysaur, and Raichu, who Pikachu evolves into. Meanwhile, somewhere in the outskirts of the Sinnoh Region, a team of investigators have been researching Legendary Pokémon, learning about how each one could be captured in its own way. Two of those investigators, Joe Kipano and Chris Romassu, have heard about Solari and Lunari. Their main goal was to capture Solari and Lunari and use their powers to rule over the world. If they can't do that, they will instead try to turn them against each other to rid the world of peace and tranquility. The prophecy of the next known Solar and Lunar Eclipses are near. In the next week, Sean and a few others will be going through parts of the prophecy that have been foretold to lead to preparation of Solari and Lunari's return. There are three others that will help Sean. The first one is named Alton. Because he was mysteriously mentioned in the prophecy, he has no other choice but to help in Sean's quest of preparation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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