Night Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Looks good so far. Reading the rest now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Chapter 3 is the smex. :3 Loved the fight scene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Thanks guise. I really appreciate it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Character Name: Ven HawkAppearance: [spoiler= Appearance] About: Ven is 15 years old and grew up in Tyear Town. His father left him and his mother when he was 10. That day, he also became a Pokemon Trainer and started his journey with his partner, Riolu. He is a sarcastic person, but is friendly and kind-hearted. Team:1)Lucario [His evolved partner]:-Aura Sphere-Bone Rush-Force Palm-Reversal 2)Blaziken:-Blaze Kick-Sky Uppercut-Double Kick-Fire Punch 3)Swellow:-Aerial Ace-Wing Attack-Fly-Steel Wing 4)Pikachu [Knows Volt Tackle, used Everstone to stop him from evolving.]-Thunderbolt-Iron Tail-Volt Tackle-Thunder Theme: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Shiny Armaldo >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> entire site. + reps for using mah fave Shiny Pokemanz. Also, Chapter was teh smex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 It's your favorite? Wow. Didn't know that. Thanks man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Absol = fave Pokemanz of all teh timez S. Armaldo = fave Shiny of all teh timez <3 I EXPECT CH.4 TO BE AWESOMESAUCE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Awesome fanfic so far is awesome. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 I only had the time to read the Prolouge atm. I liek the progressing of it. Maybe could have been placed in a few paragraphs but overall, a nice read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 Why thank you Leo. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 20, 2010 Report Share Posted January 20, 2010 No Problem. I will probably get some rmoe time to start reading the other parts tonight. I have a French Oratorical Speech that needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted January 21, 2010 Report Share Posted January 21, 2010 Character Name:Eisaka Torimino[spoiler=[b]Appearance:[/b]] About: When Eisaka was 7 years old, he went out to get some flowers for his sick mother. A group of wild Poochyena came up to him, and started attacking. A Poochyena was about to bite, when a flame spat out infront of Eisaka. A Cyndaquil ran up, and started defending Eisaka. After Cyndaquil had saved him, Eisaka picked him up, and took him home. On the way home, a Smeargle was limping slowly on the path. He let Cyndaquil down, and picked up Smeargle. They started walking home together. Eisaka, now 14 started his Pokémon journey. Eisaka loves to joke around.Team: Smeargle, Cyndaquil. I LOVE YOUR FIC.E> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 I LOVE YOU E> Yeah. He'll be in it. Anyways, aren't I evil. I introduce a New Chara, Interrupt the Battle and leave you on a Cliffhanger. I'm so devious. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 I LOVE YOU E> Yeah. He'll be in it. Anyways' date=' aren't I evil. I introduce a New Chara, Interrupt the Battle and leave you on a Cliffhanger. I'm so devious. =)[/quote'] NOEZ!! D: MOAR MOAR!! Btw, nice. I E> Cliffhangers. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Largene was epicly, strategically 'evil' in this Chapter. Loved it. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Largene was evil? Didn't really notice that. Still, I E> Soler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 23, 2010 Report Share Posted January 23, 2010 Nah, he's not evil. He just ACTED evil. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Lol. Okay. Anyways, Scarlet introduced, Solers battle and a sight at Solers mentally insane side. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 5th chapter, awesome just like the rest. Keep up the good work. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Compass Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 The story's structure is shaping up nicely, the insane side is a good device...The only advice I can give to move the plot along more quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 5th chapter' date=' awesome just like the rest. Keep up the good work. ^_^[/quote'] Thanks. ^_^ The story's structure is shaping up nicely' date=' the insane side is a good device...The only advice I can give to move the plot along more quickly.[/quote'] Yeah. Poke-Fics usually take a year to move the plot. Anyways, I apologize to all of the people who made apps and their Apps haven't appeared. I promise they'll appear soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Scarlet owns. Just confused on where they are. Werent they at the gym? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted January 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Lol. As shown in the Previous Chapter, Soler was on the roof of the gym, jumped down, battle OUTSIDE the gym. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Good work Ice ;D. Now where the heck is my character! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 Lol. As shown in the Previous Chapter' date=' Soler was on the roof of the gym, jumped down, battle OUTSIDE the gym.[/quote'] No thats not confusing at all. [/sarcasm] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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