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Yugioh - CP After more than 3 months Chapter 10 is up! Read it, it's a good one!


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This is a pretty good fic. My only complaint is that the characters seem to draw the same cards all the time. By the way' date='will any of the characters ever have more than one Scion monster?

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Don't worry, they have different monsters, and sorry about them always drawing the same cards. I have their deck lists all written out, but I just haven't made them use them yet. I'll make sure they do in a few chapters.

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I made the Scion Monsters! I didn't put on a pic,SRG,because I didn't know what you'd like them to look like. I plan to get the card backgrounds recolored (to red,maybe.)

[spoiler=Almighty the Divine Emperor]

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[spoiler=Black Fire Dragon]

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[spoiler=White Lightning Dragon]

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Tell me if I made any mistakes.

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I made the Scion Monsters! I didn't put on a pic' date='SRG,because I didn't know what you'd like them to look like. I plan to get the card backgrounds recolored (to red,maybe.)

[spoiler=Almighty the Divine Emperor']

320107.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=Black Fire Dragon]

320107b.jpg

 

 

[spoiler=White Lightning Dragon]

320107i.jpg

 

 

Tell me if I made any mistakes.

 

You're close, but this is actually what they should look like

[spoiler=Scions]

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I'll post them in the first post

 

P.S. Sneak Peak!

Chapter 10 is going to feature the return of Brendon (in duel action)

Chapter 11 is going to show Izzie's deck for the first time

AND

Chapter 13 is going to have Tim duel again, and we get to see his ACE MONSTER!

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BADDA BOOM!!!

After 3 months since the last chapter, and plenty of bumbs by me, chapter 10 is finally up!

Thank you to all of my readers for putting up with all of this, and now that school is over with, I'm going to have a lot of time to work on this! Whoo Hoo! Expect the conclusion the the Black Bridge Tournament to be up by the end of the summer!

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I like it. Some of the dialouge is kinda predictable, and a lot of it's really cliched (you knew from the second "Champion" was said that that Matt fellow would beat him), but I do like it. There are a couple grammatical hiccups that you could fix if you wanted, and I know to grammar freaks like myself, it's like nails on a chalkboard, but I'll not let my psychological problems stand in the way of your fanfic. It's really not bad, though, and I hope to hear more!

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I like it. Some of the dialouge is kinda predictable' date=' and a lot of it's really cliched (you knew from the second "Champion" was said that that Matt fellow would beat him), but I do like it. There are a couple grammatical hiccups that you could fix if you wanted, and I know to grammar freaks like myself, it's like nails on a chalkboard, but I'll not let my psychological problems stand in the way of your fanfic. It's really not bad, though, and I hope to hear more!

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Thanks for the comment, but what do you mean by grammatical hiccups?

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