card maker man Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 im makin a naruto deck. heres a ritual monster and spell from it. just a preview. post feedback.[attachment=16515][attachment=16516] heres more.[attachment=17089][attachment=17091][attachment=17090][attachment=17092][attachment=17093][attachment=17094][attachment=17095][attachment=16528] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Good pics, simple grammar problems. Good start. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sojiro Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 Pretty cool. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 Good cards. Just some slight OCG problems in the first two. Great start. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trevdagamer Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 some ocg problems, but other than that nice pics and cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dragon Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 nice realy lyke them ... just take care of the grammar problem:D:D:D........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 You should work on your capitalization; things like Summon, the beginning of a sentence, a cards name, all need to be capitalized. As well as work on your effects wording. There is a topic in the Realistic Cards section that's dedicated to helping with writing proper card effects, a good read over of it will help you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice_Beam Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 i have one to.http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=316952966jpgset123265seli6.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
card maker man Posted December 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 i posted more. rate them plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 21, 2007 Report Share Posted December 21, 2007 Hmm....fix your grammar. For effort : 8.001 / 10Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Lord Proteus Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 a 2000 ATK lvl 4 monster? Sorry, but this fails. 1400-1800 is more realistic. Bare in mind there are already ninjas in Yugioh, many of which are doubtless capable of the same feats of ninjitsu Naruto and his friends are. Try to be realistic please, fave character does not = must be overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 i have to say theres way to many naruto cards floating around the forums (nothing wrong with naruto i mean im a fan too) 8/10...fix your grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dannystfu9898 Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Normal monsters aren't really popular anymoremake them effect monsters instead6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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