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Worst series you've ever read/watched.

 

Mine would be yugioh.

 

Not worst series I've read' date=' more like Worst series made.

 

"Hot Gimmick."

 

Oh my god >.>...It was recommended by someone, I don't even remember. I was trying to get into the romance genre more and some of them were really good and than I read this, I avoided romance or manga all together for a few weeks. It was so bad that it made me read the whole thing because I kept saying. "it can't be this bad, it'll get better."

 

IT NEVER DID!

 

summary

In company-owned rabbit-hutch apartments live tenants who can't afford to live anywhere else, and the apartment complex in which high-school girl Hatsumi Narita lives is ruled over by the rumor mongering, self-righteous Mrs. Tachibana. Get on Tachibana's bad side, and life becomes hell. When Hatsumi has to buy a pregnancy test because her popular sister Akane is late, Mrs. Tachibana's son, Ryoki, who used to bully Hatsumi as a kid, promises not to tell the world about Hatsumi's secret, only if she becomes his slave. Suddenly Azusa, Hatsumi's protector in their youth, reappears to save her again! He's moving back into the neighborhood! Despite the budding romance between Hatsumi and Azusa, Ryoki has control over her through the secret that could ruin the lives of everyone in Hatsumi's family, and he hasn't forgotten who his slave is!

 

Synopsis ala' me:

 

- Narita is shy, even hinata would slap her for being so stupid and shy.

- Ryoki bullies Narita, douchebag makes Narita slave. (story gets interesting)

- Azusa comes back and protects Narita (romance story begins)

- Narita is too shy to hit on a person that has openly expressed his feelings to her. (what's that aiming for the fan?)

- Azusa goes out with Narita, and they go to a party

- Azusa tries to gangbang Narita (wait what!?...)

- Azusa douchebag, Ryoki saves her (surprise...)

- Ryoki begins to have character developement, and falls in love with Narita, he's not that much of douchebag (ok..The lines were bad, the art was bad, but I like where this is going.)

- Character developement flies out the window and he becomes a douchebag again and now even overprotective (what the hell..Where are you going with the plot)

- Azusa and Ryoki now terrorizes Narita. Who is still shy, being abused, but stays by Ryoki's side.

- Her brother falls in love with Narita(oh what the hell)

- Oh! but it's step brother(oh that's ok, and he actually cares for her.)

- Narita runs away from Ryoki and goes with brother (crappy story but atleast it's a good endin-)

- Narita is too shy and her step-brother bothers her because they're step brothers and goes back to Ryoki. (WHAT THE FU-)

- Narita and Ryoki lives happily ever after and Ryoki still abuses Narita and Narita stays a shy little bastard.

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problems with story

- Ryoki is not likeble, has cheesy lines, and no character developement

- Narita is not likeble, has cheesy lines, and no character developement

- The most interesting thing about the entire story was actually the hierarchy in the apartment complex that was only mentioned and shown like once or twice that could of made the story great.

- cheesy lines...

- All the female characters look the same (blond huge eyes, long ponytail) and all the guys are tall and have bob-head hair so I could not differentiate 1/2 the characters in the beginning of the story.

- NO F***ING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!

- way too long. . .

- Worst ending I've ever seen(oh if you're curious the brother becomes a monk?)

- Lazy artist(no background work half the time)

- The three best characters were

Akane (younger sister)

Asuza

and Akane's nerdy friend in the friend zone. (forgot name, it wasn't in description)

 

All 3 character had character developement, all three characters had some backstory, and asuza even started developing a darker story about why he was a douchebag and soap operas wish they had this kind of stuff.(Ironically this whole dark story plot about his dead mother and father was thrown out the window and not even mentioned until the last 6 chapters which somehow resolved itself).

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You could just give this book to someone and paste the title "HOW NOT TO MAKE A MANGA" on the front and there you go.

 

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