Dwhale Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Here It Is! As soon as I saw this image I fell in love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 You amaze me. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 nice job. it is pretty good. 9/10make another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Thanks Guys :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
celoco28 Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 This is awesome, very well balance. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Some slight grammar mistakes. 9/10. It's great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Thanks People, I truly appreciate the comments & post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 ok um opponent's needs the ' before the s, and i think you need to switch around this part of the effect:blank blank..., increase this cards ATK by 1000 during the Battle Phase. 9/10 =) keep it up! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 ok um opponent's needs the ' before the s' date=' and i think you need to switch around this part of the effect:blank blank..., increase this cards ATK by 1000 during the Battle Phase. 9/10 =) keep it up! 8)[/quote'] Thanks, Your A Good Man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 ok um opponent's needs the ' before the s' date=' and i think you need to switch around this part of the effect:blank blank..., increase this cards ATK by 1000 during the Battle Phase. 9/10 =) keep it up! 8)[/quote'] Thanks, Your A Good Man! lol wow, thank you! but what if i was a women? lol just kidding, just kiddin =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 ok um opponent's needs the ' before the s' date=' and i think you need to switch around this part of the effect:blank blank..., increase this cards ATK by 1000 during the Battle Phase. 9/10 =) keep it up! 8)[/quote'] Thanks, Your A Good Man! lol wow, thank you! but what if i was a women? lol just kidding, just kiddin =) :shock: I'm Scared, I Hope your not a Woman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Nice card Derek but I think he gets to fast to strong. Because when your opponet has a level 4 or higher monster with only 2100 ATK or even lower than he destroys it right? Then he has an attack of 2100 (2200-100) Than all you need is a level 4 or higher monster with an attack of 3000 or less and it is destroyed giving your monster an attack of 3000. Than it could be almost invincible with the right cards so I should change the ATK lowering effect to 500. I give it an 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 9/10 It is OK, the OCG needs some improving and the image is sooooooooooooooooo cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Nearly perfect OCG, same with grammar, great pic. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sabre Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 that is great!!! 11/10! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 i like the effect! it's original! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Nice earth support. Topples Cyber Dragon, but gets crushed by monarchs, a nice balance. Doesn't it look more like a Beast Warrior than just a Beast? You could also make its ATK 1100 and double it when it battles a high level monster. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 sorry, i forgot to mention. you don't say whose "stars". you say "level" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 sorry' date=' i forgot to mention. you don't say whose "stars". you say "level"[/quote'] Good Advice, I'll Make Sure To Remember That =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Great card 9/10 just for the star/level thingy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 I love this card. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Great card 9/10 just for the star/level thingy Other Than That You Think The Card Is Perfect? :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Grammar is almost perfect, very balanced, AMAZING picture. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted December 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Grammar is almost perfect' date=' very balanced, AMAZING picture. 9.5/10[/quote'] Thanks Man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Straybyrn Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 You don't capitalize every word you type, btw. Posts Should Not Look Like This Unless They Are Titles. It gets annoying, fast. Make the level attack requirement higher, and make it so it increases the attack. Then it's great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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