koramore Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 cnc. v1 v2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I don't like the black and white streaks. Just not feeling it.Looks pretty good overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Work on your focal placement. Colours could be a lot better too. Remove the smudge because it only makes that tag worst. Then get a better lighting transition? Yeah work on those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 That C4D's pimpin'. Link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Go to Tutorials in my PSD thread it should have a C4D Pack link.and thanks for cnc everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Why did you wash out the colors like that? The smudges distract from flow and mess up the compo, sir. The lighting is messed up, in part by the c4ds that are getting hit by a blue light source, which tells me that the tag should be getting light from the bottom left somewhere by blue. If you got rid of those c4ds, you could probably try something different. I'm rusty, so this sheet is probably wrong. :P Anyways, it looks flat, as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 i really like this piece :D can i wear?^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I love it. I'm not gonna give a critique right now though. Depth is good, the streaks are good, effects are good, just fix the lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 I like it alot but as said, the lighting is bad and colours look pretty dull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 The blue of the C4D just thows the whole tag out of balance. If it had been white, it would have been better. Eh, the left part of the top streak looks bad, otherwise they're ok. KIU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koramore Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Yeah Wanderly you can wear. Yeah I kno its crap but thanks for cnc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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