♠Decietful King♠ Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Okay after I finish Yugioh D-City I will begin a Digimon Fan-Fic It will be named Digimon Rebirth the Prologue will be posted before tomorrow and i will be accepting Character submissions [spoiler=Prologue]Once there was a time where only a chosen few new about the existence of digimon and the Digital World. Those people called themselves the DigiDestined but after 1000 years of secrecy the Digital World and the Human World were exposed by to the other and waged War on one another and after a brave soul sacrificed himself to merge the two worlds the War ceased. Now after 134 years of peace The Digimon Sovereigns (Excluding Fanglongmon), The Seven Demon Lords, and 4 of the remaining 6 Olympus Twelve Digimon attacked The Royal Knights and the remaining two Olympus Digimon and without the all powerful Alphamon they were no match for the assault and only Gallantmon, Dynasmon, Kentaursmon(Sleipmon), Apollomon, Dianamon, and UlforceVeedramon survived the assault and returned to their Digi-Egg forms'. The humans and the other Digimon had no idea of the battle taking place but the surviving 6 Digimon were paired with a human partner when that partner is born as all digimon are when they in their Digi-Egg forms. After the assault the 13 evil digimon planned to destroy all the humans and their digimon partners wanting to revive the digimon for they're own evil purposes. Submission/Application FormAppearance (Put in SPOILER):Name:Digi-Vice Color (Season 3 Digi-Vice)Digimon Partner(Put evolution Chart in SPOILER):Antagonist or Protagonist?:Personality:Bio: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 News Flash! Once there was a time where only a chosen few new(OMG' date=' you spelled knew wrong!)[/color'] about the existence of digimon(it's not important enough to be captitalized?) and the Digital World. Those people called themselves the DigiDestined(comma plox) but after 1000 years of secrecy the Digital World and the Human World were exposed by to the other(I have no idea what the bolded part meant) and waged War(oh so war is more important than Digimon?) on one another(comma plox) and after a brave soul sacrificed himself to merge the two worlds the War(why is war capitalized?) ceased. Now after 134 years of peace The Digimon Sovereigns (Excluding Fanglongmon), The Seven Demon Lords, and 4(spelling out numbers is pro) of the remaining 6 (same thing with four)Olympus Twelve Digimon attacked The Royal Knights and the remaining two Olympus Digimon(period plox) (cross out and)new sentence) without the all powerful Alphamon(comma plox) they were no match for the assault(comma plox) and only Gallantmon, Dynasmon, Kentaursmon(Sleipmon), Apollomon, Dianamon, and UlforceVeedramon survived the assault and returned to their Digi-Egg forms'. The humans and the other Digimon had no idea of the battle taking place(comma plox) but the surviving 6(spelling out numbers is still pro) Digimon were paired with a human partner when that partner is born as all digimon are when they in their Digi-Egg forms.(I don't get it. Make more clear.) Without knowing a Dorumon was also matched with a Human partner(new sentence plox) this Dorumon was destined to become the next Alphamon. After the assault the 13 evil digimon planned to destroy all the humans and their digimon partners wanting to revive the digimon for they're own evil purposes.(what is does the bolded part mean!?) Since I don't know much about Digimon, I was confused the whole time I was reading. But, I can still fix your grammar mistakes. So there you go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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