SPM3 Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 No. Just no. Add take out the double letters and add a shadow instead. ...You just lost the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 This needs a lot of work tbh.Lighting for starters. You have a lot of exposer effects which make it look cluttered. It seems that the light is coming from everywhere. You need a slick transition. Also you forgot to change the right side of the clothes colour. Since you have green glowing on the right' date=' you will need to recolour his right side to the same level of green. Also you will have to add a thicker glow to the effcts. You can do that with soft brushing and gaussian blur. Also remove the text because it throws the whole thing off. Concept is not bad. But execution is.[/quote'] Thanks bro. What would you class this as? And are you on pr/fringe? No. Just no. Add take out the double letters and add a shadow instead. Shadows would just make it look reeeaaally bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 Mod. Yeah I'm on fringe but not active. I'm more active on deviantart and pr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 What's your name on PR? da? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted January 12, 2010 Report Share Posted January 12, 2010 You are one guy that really knows how to crop something and retain all of it's epicness. Text isn't exactly brilliant though, though I do like the Mirror Effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Lost Posted January 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 thanks yo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 13, 2010 Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 You are one guy that really knows how to crop something and retain all of it's epicness. Text isn't exactly brilliant though' date=' though I do like the Mirror Effect.[/quote'] Trust me, I can too, but I never do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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