My Latest and Best from a long time

[Cyber Altair]

Lately my cards have been reducing in quantitys and when it increased i found it's quality decreased:(. So i spent about 30 min. making this card to prove to all of you i can still make good cards.

and here is my latest card *Drums Rolling.....Curtain Rising*

 

This card is great in 3 situations-

1) you are in tought position and need to keep a card you have in future so it might help you later.

2) you want to play it safe so you use it so that by the time something bad happens it comes and helps you.

3) you need this card later for a combo so you can keep it for later till you are ready for the combo.

 

Any help about the card is appriciated.

[VainZiler]

The CG and wording is kinda off. Face-up doesn't need to be capitalized, and how can they attack once returned, yet not attack the turn the card is activated, when it says to remove it, then to just bring it back?

[Cyber Altair]

the effect of it makes you sacrifes your battle phase so you just remove the card you chosse from play. then return the card back on the field an attack with it.

[RestLess-BoTics]

Meh...work on your grammar, but otherwise, pretty good!

[Cyber Altair]

thanks more comments people. please say if you like the idea.

[VainZiler]

But the thing is, it doesn't say that. It just simply says: remove card from play, return it to field.

 

I'm just saying, you might wanna get into specifics with these things.

[Cyber Altair]

opps there is a mistaske in the writting i'll fix it. i forgot to write "after 5 turns". my bad sry.

Error Fixed.

[VainZiler]

There, now it makes more sense. Just change face-up and put 'in' before it, and it'll be perfect.

[KuzoNh]

DATTEBAYO!

 

[VainZiler]

Dude, seriously, that was spamish of ya. And please don't post your cards in other peoples topics.

[EbonMagician]

Nice, and I like the idea. One thing does bug me, however. If you activate this on your turn, then your monster comes back on their turn, but if you "fixed" it by shifting the turn count to an even number like 4, then you'd have the same problem if you used it on your opponent's turn. Plus, the whole "you cannot attack" thing is kinda pointless on your opponent's turn.

 

But this is an easy fix. You could solve it any one of the following ways without messing up the concept:

 

1) Restrict it to activation on your own turn and give it an even-numbered turn count.

2) Have it force the returned monster to attack during your soonest coming Battle Phase after its return.

3) Have the card only count your turns.

 

Other than that, it looks good to me.

[Cyber Altair]

you didn't get it, you cannot attack when you use the cards effect and you have to wait five turns of your own like-you,opp,you,opp,you,opp,you,opp,you and then you use it.

[EbonMagician]

Uh,...I'm pretty sure I do get it. It's a trap--ergo, you can activate it on either player's turn (assuming, of course, that it's been set for at least one). And...since you count turns one by one (reference Final Countdown), the count would have to be either --oppo., you, oppo., you, oppo.-- or the reverse, depending on whose turn you initially activated it on. If you want it to count a particular player's turns, you have to specify that (like on Nightmare's Steelcage).

 

And, actually, I missed another little snag (sorry, I'm really not trying to come down on you lol). The card just says that the monster returns, but it doesn't specify when specifically (Stand-By Phase of the turn after, End Phase of the 5th turn, etc.).

 

And just out of curiousity, is the return just a "return to play" (like on Dimension Hole), or did you mean to say that it's Special Summoned? I actually like the implications of it just "returning to play", as that sidesteps stuff like Bottomless and Torrential.

[Cyber Altair]

no just returns and sry i didn't specify when.