[~ɸ~] Yu-Gi-Oh! The Omega Organization ~ Chapter 3 is up! (25. July 2010)

[Lord Ursus]

"Jolly good" is Jupiter's catch phrase, so to speak. I might reconsider it, though.

 

But I can see that you are absolutely right.

 

I don't think I'll change Torment, as then I will have to remake most of the fic.

 

The writing is somewhat off, due to me stressing with finishing the chapters.

 

I thank you for the heads-up, as without it, I would have crashed in the long run.

 

The next chapter is underway, and I'll use your advice as much as I can.

 

 

I'm sorry, dear readers, Max is right. I have not been writing properly.

 

You can take my guarantee, however, on that the next chapter will be better than this.

[Max Darkness]

"Jolly good" is Jupiter's catch phrase, so to speak. I might reconsider it, though.

 

Please do, because it just doesn't conjure the image you would expect.

 

 

I don't think I'll change Torment, as then I will have to remake most of the fic.

 

A S.S. by RFPing "Memory Requiems" from your hand or Deck (giving it a limited life span) could work. PM me the pic and I could show you what I would change.

 

 

The next chapter is underway, and I'll use your advice as much as I can.

 

Excellent.

[Rokandre]

I really like the concept and your style. Keep the good working

[Lord Ursus]

I am very grateful for that comment, Rokandre. I will.

 

The chapter should be finished by the end of this week, but I'm not sure when I will be able to upload it, due to me not having a reliable internet connection at the moment.

 

I can also inform you that I will be editing the past chapters, as Max here "woke me up" or something along those lines.

[Rokandre]

Yes, I agree with Max that you can improve your writing. But I think you're already good (with Max tips you will be better).

 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[Lord Ursus]

Ok. The newest chapter is up, but read the "Please Note" part.

 

How do I change names now? Of topics, I mean.

[Lord Ursus]

You know what folks, I'm shutting this down.

 

Because this is just plain silly.

 

Of the 900+ of you who read, only about 30 commented, and with MONTHS between the comments, and I'm sick of it.