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Woh I've only read the new ep and its freakin' awesome.

I love the moves.

Its sooo descriptive.

This is great and I love how you chose to make a Naruto fan-fic cause Naruto rocks.

I read a few paragraphs of ep 1 and it was kinda like an improved form of Shippuuden.

Its great and could you please check my fanfic out, but its not as good as yours-definentaly.

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**BUMP** - New Episode coming up soon. Sorry for such a long wait, but:

1 - I've been catching up with the Japanese Bleach episodes

2 - I've been planning a Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan Fic and hopefully I'll be able to write and post episodes for that too

 

Note: Don't worry, I will not be stopping this Fan Fic. It's just I wanted to make a YGO Fan Fic (since this is meant to be a YGO Fan Fic section) so...

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OOC: Sorry for the large delay on this episode, but I was struggling to display this episode in a satisfactory manner. So thank you for the patience and (as always) hope you enjoy the episode greatly.

 

Episode 07 – The World Council Gathers in Konoha

Episode 07 – The World Council Gathers in Konoha

 

Everyone stood on watching as Suteibu destroyed the ice using the stream of lightning, and eventually watched as Aisu vanished without a trace. “You can all come out now. I’m through here” shouted Suteibu with arms folded as he looked at Aisu’s only viable escape point (a path into the forest). All those in hiding (Jiraiya, Tsunade, Shizune, Neji, Shikimaru and Lee) came out of the forest and walked over towards Kakashi, Naruto, Sakura and the mystery woman. The mystery woman walked over to Suteibu, clutched his right arm and place her head on his shoulder “Are you going to pursue him?” she asked shyly and softly as she gripped his arm tighter, which prompted Suteibu to look down at her. Suddenly (almost in the blink of an eye), he had released her grip on his arm and placed both his arms around her, with his head now perched on her left shoulder (down on one knee) “There is no need for me to pursue him, Nene... He’s not a threat at the moment” he said kindly and she smiled at him slightly and rests her head on his shoulder.

 

“ANBU! Chase after Aisu, he went...” shouted Tsunade just about to point towards the opening in the forest, but was suddenly caught by Jiraiya. “You will not pursue Aisu!” shouted Suteibu while looking over his shoulder sinisterly at Tsunade “There is no way we could chase him now. Not even a dog could find him” he said more calmly as he put his head on the woman’s shoulder again. “What do you mean?” asked Naruto slightly angrily and then just as he finished asking Suteibu pointed up to the sky and it began to snow very heavily (almost blizzard weather), masking Aisu’s scent all together. Everyone stood around looking at the rainfall while Suteibu and the woman stood up together and began to walk away until “Wait!” Tsunade shouted and stopped him in his tracks. Nene continued to walk away from the area while Suteibu turned his head slightly and shifted his eyes over towards Tsunade (looking sinister) as she stood with hands on hips and all the others with her standing behind looking towards Suteibu. “Kakashi, Naruto and, Sakura” she began to say “Suteibu will from now on be replacing Sasuke as the fourth member of your squad” she continued to say.

 

“WHAT!?” shouted Naruto angrily and surprisingly, while Sakura fell to her knees in disbelief while Kakashi walked over to Suteibu. The two stared each other in the eye unfazed by the other while Naruto rushed to Tsunade and Naruto argued over the fact Suteibu is joining. “So you did know about this?” asked Kakashi calmly as the argument between Tsunade and Naruto escalated. Suteibu reached in his pocket and pull out a ring with a small purple sapphire in the centre “No... It’s not my style to be latched onto a team. After all you know about my training in the academy to become an Assassin-Nin, and I’m a pretty accomplished one at that. I haven’t worked in a squad in over a decade, not since Itachi and Aisu left the village” said Suteibu as he stared at the gem and his eyes began to glitter *I hope your OK my sweet* he thought to himself before putting the ring back in his pocket.

 

Suteibu walked over towards Naruto and Tsunade “None the less Kakashi” he shouted “Tsunade has decided to place me on your team, and it is not my style to argue with the leader of this village. And now, I expect you to do the same Naruto” he continued as he smacked Naruto on the head and redirected his anger at Suteibu while Suteibu stared into the sky. “Night will be upon us soon. Since none of us have eaten yet, how about I treat my new squad and their friends to something to eat” said Suteibu nicely and with that Naruto’s anger quelled and changed to excitement “Since I’ll suppose you all agree to this; then meet me there, order and eat to your heart’s content. I’ll be along soon enough and I’ll pay when I get there” Suteibu continued as he began to walk down the path, quickly overtaken by Naruto, Sakura, Neji, Shikimaru and Lee rushing towards a restaurant and Kakashi in quick pursuit of the four, while Tsunade and Shizune walked slowly behind Suteibu.

 

Meanwhile Aisu was running across the plains outside of Konoha while thinking heavily about the situation with Suteibu. *Why has he gone back to Konoha?* Aisu wondered as he lowered his head slightly and closed his eyes to think, yet he continued to dodge trees, rocks and other obstacles around him (now going from the plains into sparse forest). The further into the forest Aisu travelled the thicker the forest began to become until the canopy of the trees almost completely blocked out the sky. Suddenly Aisu stopped on a tree branch and looked around before closing his eyes again. “I know you’re out there” he shouted as he slowly opened his eyes in the direction of what he could sense, yet no one appeared. However the fact was Aisu was right... one of Orochimaru’s special ninja was in the area hiding from Aisu in the trees. *I have to avoid him at all costs. I must complete Lord Orochimaru’s wish as quickly as possible, and in order to eliminate Suteibu... I’ll need...* his thoughts were suddenly cut off and his eyes quivered as most of his body (not including head) and the tree he was standing on were completely encased in ice. Suddenly before even a couple of seconds passed, Aisu appeared right behind him with arms folded “What does Orochimaru want this time, Matto?” asked Aisu.

 

***An Hour Later***

 

Naruto, Sakura, Shikimaru, Neji, Lee, Ino, Choji and Ten Ten were all sitting around a table with 3 piping hot Barbecue grills in a row in the centre of the table while Suteibu, Kakashi, Tsunade, Jiraiya, Shizune, Asuma, Kurenai, Guy and Nene were sitting around a table in the restaurant far away from the younger ones; the younger ones were talking about the fight Sakura, Naruto and Kakashi had with Suteibu (and the ensuing interruption by Aisu), while the older ones were sitting around with Saki mugs all over the table but not saying a word. Suteibu lifted a cup of Saki to his lips and drank a mouthful quickly. “Why are we here Suteibu?” asked Tsunade sharply as everyone around the table began to become restless. “Soon... just waiting for one more man to turn up” Suteibu said ominously. A heavy silence protruded over the older table as everyone seemed to know what he was talking about even though he said nothing about his reasoning and no one drank anything for what seemed to be an eternity. The door of the restaurant opened and one man walked in wearing an Akatsuki outfit, and everyone in the room (excluding Suteibu and Nene) stood up and prepared to fight him. “Suteibu, you said I would be welcome to attend. I thought I could trust your word” said Itachi calmly as he scanned across the massive Shinobi force in front of him with his Sharingan eyes.

 

“Everyone, sit down” shouted Suteibu as he slammed his hand on the table, denting the floor below it. Everyone stared at Suteibu grudgingly and refused to listen as all the young ones rushed at Itachi while the adults watched on, yet Itachi seemed unfazed by the overwhelming odds in front of him. Suddenly Nene appeared in front of them holding a Blade-Bow weapon primed and ready to attack, yet her appearance there was unnecessary as all of the young Shinobi suddenly became paralysed by Suteibu unleashing a wide stream of pressure on them. While they were all paralysed by this manoeuvre Itachi (led by Nene) walked over towards the table and sat down opposite Suteibu while Nene sat down next to Suteibu. “Nene if you would, please go and take the kids with you; their ears must not be soiled by this revelation. I’ll fill you in on the details of this conversation later at home” whispered Suteibu as he placed his hand on her thigh and stroke it softly. Nene nodded at him and kissed him on the cheek (near to his lips) and walked away, leading the younger ones out the door.

 

“Are they gone?” asked a strange voice as Suteibu leaned forward and place his head on his clasped hand. Suteibu looked up “Yes Orochimaru... it’s all clear” Suteibu said calmly as he stared at Itachi intently as if preparing for him to react as Orochimaru fazed in through the wall and sat on the seat beside Itachi. “Not attacking Itachi?” asked Orochimaru baitingly. “He doesn’t have to attack you Orochimaru, as you are no threat to him anyway” replied Jiraiya smuggly, which annoyed Orochimaru greatly and the two began to argue, and the argument between Orochimaru and Jiraiya quickly escalated, yet within a few seconds Tsunade snapped.

 

“THAT’S ENOUGH! I DON’T WANT THESE TWO HERE ANY LONGER THAN THEY HAVE TO BE, SO SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO SUTEIBU NOW!” shouted Tsunade commandingly, and everyone calmed down and paid close attention to Suteibu. “She’s right... we should stop fooling around now... So, let’s get down to business” said Suteibu ominously...

 

 

Note: My apologies go out to Ulquoirra_Remixed; I promised him a showing of Matto's fighting ability and I chose to postpone it until a later date. Again I'm really sorry.

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Episode 08 – The Revelations

Episode 08 – The Revelations

 

“THAT’S ENOUGH! I DON’T WANT THESE TWO HERE ANY LONGER THAN THEY HAVE TO BE, SO SHUT UP AND LISTEN TO SUTEIBU NOW!” shouted Tsunade commandingly, and everyone calmed down and paid close attention to Suteibu. “She’s right... we should stop fooling around now... So, let’s get down to business” said Suteibu ominously. There was a deafening silence that gripped the restaurant as Suteibu slowly stared at everyone around the table in turn “Shall I suppose that our three guests (Jiraiya, Itachi and Orochimaru) have an idea what I’ve asked you here for? For those who do not know why we are gathered here... it is to discuss the Dark Emperor” said Suteibu as everyone around the table stared at Suteibu. “What about that scum of a man do we need to discuss?” asked Kakashi sharply as he lowered his book. “Rumour has it the gate has begun to weaken, and the gem is cracking apart” said Itachi softly as everyone around the table shifted their attention to him, and quickly looked towards Suteibu for confirmation, who had now just pulled out a pack of cigarettes.

 

He quickly slammed the pack on the table and forced a cigarette out of the top, and almost as quickly he grabbed it out of the packet and placed it in his mouth. He placed his thumb and index finger together and clicked; this set his thumb alight, which he then used to light his cigarette before smoking the cigarette and he blowing out a puff of smoke (cigarette out of his mouth). “It is no rumour... I received a message about it from a highly reliable source and she assures me that the gate is close to complete destruction, and if that happens... we all will be targets for his wrath” Suteibu spoke sombrely as he replaced the cigarette in his mouth and replaced the packet in his pocket. “How strong is he?” asked Tsunade calmly as she placed her head on her clasped hands and rolled her eyes to look at Suteibu. “Stronger than the 9-Tailed Fox” he replied to the amazement of everyone else (excluding Itachi) “And possibly even stronger than Madara Uchiha” he added which now added Itachi to the list of amazed people at Suteibu’s words.

 

Suddenly Orochimaru slammed his hands down on the table and rose to his feet “That’s impossible! There’s no way someone could be that powerful!” he snapped as he stared with murderous intent at Suteibu. He slipped a Kunai knife out of his sleeve and lunged at Suteibu “It would be wise of you to stop making up stories and tell us the truth about Shadow... Now!” he snarled as he placed the knife up against Suteibu’s throat, yet instantly felt something sharp against the crotch. Both Suteibu and Kakashi were looking at Orochimaru’s eyes and could see them quiver in absolute fear at the possibility that Shadow’s power could be that powerful to rival even the 9-Tailed Fox in power, as well as Madara Uchiha. “Suteibu is telling the truth” said a mysterious, wispy voice. Everyone looked over towards the table where the younger Shinobi were sitting earlier and saw a muscular man sitting on the edge of the table. *Could he have broken out of the gate already?* thought Itachi as the other Konoha Shinobi stood up and Orochimaru pulled the Kunai away from Suteibu’s throat and turned to face this mystery man.

 

“Guys sit down. He’s not really here” Suteibu said softly as he continued to smoke his cigarette “This is just him making a metaphysical body on this side of the gate, which in itself is a marvel of strength and technique but still not physically real” Suteibu spoke as he threw a Shuriken at the man. The man sat there and didn’t flinch as the Shuriken spun towards the centre of his forehead, and then the Shuriken passed straight through his head and pierced the back wall, confusing all of the offensively set ninja. “So the rumours about you are true then? You can sense and identify the chakra in the air” the man said as he leaped off the table onto his feet and applauded Suteibu’s ability. “But of course... that’s not your greatest talent is it?” he asked ominously as he began to disappear slowly, laughing manically until he had completed vanished.

 

Meanwhile Aisu and Matto were still on the tree; Matto was still trapped in the ice that Aisu caught him with about 20 minutes earlier and Aisu was now sitting down in front of Matto, and they both stared into the others eyes with malice from Matto and aloofness from Aisu. “Are you going to tell me what he wants, or am I going to have to torture you to within an inch of your life?” Aisu yelled at Matto to get him to release the information he needed, yet Matto’s mental tenacity was as solid as a rock. Matto closed his eyes slowly and began to breath deeply (with Aisu looking on patiently) and this continued for a few seconds until Matto opened his eyes sharply, revealing icy blue eyes. Just then Matto smashed out of the ice that was holding him and made fast hand signs “Ice Style: Ice Prison!” he shouted and the ice Aisu had him trapped him formed into several large pillars and formed a small circle around Aisu, trapping him inside the ice prison on the ground below the trees (breaking the branch the two were on). Matto jumped down from the tree and reached into a pouch on his belt with his right hand. “You think your so high and mighty don’t you, Mr. Akatsuki?” he asked Aisu smugly as Aisu touched and smoothed the poles of his prison before backing off slightly, closed his eyes and holding his sheathed sword horizontally by the hilt. *Orochimaru gotta reward me big time for killing an Akatsuki member* he thought selfishly while he continued to keep his right hand in his pouch and began to chuckle at himself. “Don’t be stupid, kid” Aisu calmly protested, much to Matto chagrin “Orochimaru doesn’t give a damn about you”.

 

“SHUT UP!” shouted Matto angrily “He does care about me; I am his next host body when his current body (unfortunately) collapses, and trust me when I kill you not only will that cement my place as his new host, but he will reward me generously for doing something that loser Sasuke cannot do” and with that Aisu tweaked and smiled slightly (scarce event alert), but quickly reset his face. “You shouldn’t be so cocky, kid. For you see when you get cocky with the best...” Aisu began to say, before he suddenly appeared behind Matto “The best make you pay” he said before slashing his Katana, forcing Matto to dodge quickly, yet he looked back at the prison and saw Aisu still in the prison (sword still sheathed), but with snow coming out from behind him. The snow shot past Matto (missing by only an inch) and settled on the ground in the shade of the trees, while Aisu’s clone charged at him again sword primed for an attack and the real Aisu still holding his sword out and closed eyes. The clone slashed his sword and cut through Matto before a puff of smoke enveloped him. “Where are you, boy?” queried Aisu quietly while he and his clone stood around, waiting for Matto to show himself.

 

Back in Konoha the younger Shinobi (those who left with Nene) were walking along the streets and chatting away about the same thing they were talking in the restaurant before being ousted by Suteibu and Nene, however the difference is that Sakura was walking up ahead with Nene while the others were talking behind the two women. “Umm... do you have any idea what Suteibu meant when he said ‘Their ears must not be soiled by this revelation’?” Sakura asked curiously. Nene looked back at her with crystal-blue eyes “I’m not sure Sakura. All I know is that Suteibu doesn’t want any of you to hear all the details, and I trust his logic and wisdom” she said as she smiled softly at Sakura. Suddenly all the young ones were struck by a wave of what seemed to be a huge vertical wave of pressure; this wave knock all bar Nene, Sakura and Neji off their feet and held them down while the other three were standing in a partially squatted position with eyes widened. “What on earth is this pressure?” asked Neji, struggling to catch his breath as his chest seemed to become constricted, as it was for Sakura too (Nene wasn’t as heavily affected). *This is insane. What the hell is going on here?* Nene thought, but just then a strange figure appeared in the gap between Nene and Sakura and the rest of the group.

 

“Ok... That’s all I have to say. Anything else for any of you to add?” asked Suteibu as he leaned back into the seat and looked around at the others around the table. “I have something to say” said Jiraiya boisterously “What is Matto doing in the forest just outside Konoha?” he asked, which tweaked Kakashi, Itachi and Suteibu’s interest and infuriated Tsunade greatly. Orochimaru’s eyes squinted in anger at Jiraiya “You shut your mouth, scum” he snapped. “Answer the question” said Itachi calmly yet assertively, and Orochimaru spun his head towards Itachi and snarled “Fine if you want that answer so badly, tell me what Aisu is doing nearby then?” asked Orochimaru smugly, believing that Aisu turned up in the same capacity that Matto turned up in. “Aisu was here prior to Itachi’s arrival in the area; he was here because of his involvement with Nene, not because of this meeting” he said, and that sapped Orochimaru’s smug look away quickly. However before anyone could say another word to Orochimaru they all sensed the presence of an unruly evil nearby. “What the hell..?” queried Tsunade, and before another word could be said Suteibu, Jiraiya, Kakashi and Itachi all rushed out of the door towards the strange presence and Orochimaru disappeared in a burning away fashion Leaving Tsunade and Shizune alone with the bill in the restaurant (Tsunade was not happy about that).

 

“Is it him?” asked Kakashi as the four men hustled through the streets. No one said anything for what seemed to the four an eternity until “I sincerely hope not” said Suteibu portentously...

 

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I know this is against the rules and whatnot (Bumping an old thread, which is nearly a month old), but I'd like for you to continue this. this is by far the best Naruto Fan-Fic I've read so far, and is getting more and more interesting as i read further. please? do it for a stranger? O_o

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