JG. Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Entry for PR N/SOTW. And first one to post gets all my points, I see no use for them anyways. But the poster must give soem good Cnc. I will determine what good is when we get that far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 The little butterflies beside the dude. Hawt. Mix well with the color of his sweater. I like how the lighting is presented. Really good how it comes from the top helping present the focal. I like the choices made on this piece. Looks excellent. Maybe you could have added more depth by blurring the Stock in the BG some more. All in all it looks really good. Nice job and keep the good work up ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 More blurring would look bad. And it's fractals, not butterflies xD And points on the way to you. Now, guys, before you think bad of me for calling this good, this is YCM-kun ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 lol. They looked liek butterfly things to me ;D I hear what you are saying. Hope you do good in the PR N/SOTW :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Well, so far only 1 entry has been posted otehr than mine, and mine is quite a bit better =/ But actually, I haven't posted yet. But will soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 I find the sharpness of the piece a little overwhelming, especially with the bright spots of the fractals, but I do like the vibrant quality it gives it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 JG, I am both glad to see you improve, and saddened to see elementary mistakes all the same.The focal is wrong, you seem to want to make the focal of the tag the face, but when I looked at the tag, the first thing I looked at was the jacket. That's where all the color is. I would honestly suggest rethinking some of the effects, to help draw the eyes to the focal, instead of some other salient place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 fireworks: What sharpness?Lem: I see waht you say. Thanks anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 It's all very bright and crisp, especially on the face, the detail seems almost exaggerated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted January 6, 2010 Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 To simple, imo. And poor effects, or lack of. But this looks decent enough. GRAPHICS LOLRATE 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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