-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 [align=center]Credit: Koramore for OCG AttributeHolo and Card itself: Dark Mousyrest: me The name sucks IMO..... [/align] Constructive Critism only please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkenhayn Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Image could be much better, besides that i don't understand it. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 -.-you don't understand the sense of showcase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 @Valken:What are you talking about? The picture is genius! It goes perfectlt with the card. Don't like the blue plating -19/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 loldon't rate in showcase you should comment on the text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 No [kanji] No part looks like a face xD Now seriously ^-^"I would say your letters in the tittle are too close to each other, you need to leave some more space.[Type/Effect] part looks like the writting is too big. Blue borders aren't normal in a card. As far as I've seen at least. That's all I can think of by the moment.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 No [kanji] No part looks like a face xD Now seriously ^-^"I would say your letters in the tittle are too close to each other' date=' you need to leave some more space.[Type/Effect] part looks like the writting is too big. Blue borders aren't normal in a card. As far as I've seen at least. That's all I can think of by the moment.. Thanks for this helpful comment^^ I made the borders for Someone else, he wanted Blue Borders and a Japanese card, I know it's not normal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Me no likey blue borders. Pic is awesome. Don't holo (Correct word?) on stars. It makes them worse. Wish I could understand Japanese. Oh and font is wrong although I don't know the correct font for Japanese text on Yugioh Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Me no likey blue borders. Pic is awesome. Don't holo (Correct word?) on stars. It makes them worse. Wish I could understand Japanese. Oh and font is wrong although I don't know the correct font for Japanese text on Yugioh Cards. Like i said, someone wanted to have the star holoed. As well as the border recolor. lol I really would like to know which font Japanese font they use... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 What does the name say? I don't think Anu should be romanised =/The whole title is supposed to be japanese, i guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Name is kinda strange. Doesn't make much sense in Japanese.You also forgot "Zoku" after "Senshi" in the monster type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 I dont see the point in making japanese cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 It's so see how they would do, see it as a little self-observation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Name is kinda strange. Doesn't make much sense in Japanese.You also forgot "Zoku" after "Senshi" in the monster type. Explain that a little bit more please^^ i can't speak japanese i only used a translator @Notorious i guess anu is a name, that's why the translator couldn't translate it :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarshyK-XS Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 @Valken:What are you talking about? The picture is genius! It goes perfectlt with the card. Don't like the blue plating -19/10. yep couldn't of said it better my self, he also said judge on the creativeness (even if it is a bit annoying that you dont know what it says.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Name is kinda strange. Doesn't make much sense in Japanese.You also forgot "Zoku" after "Senshi" in the monster type. Explain that a little bit more please^^ i can't speak japanese i only used a translator @Notorious i guess anu is a name' date=' that's why the translator couldn't translate it :([/quote'] mmkay, t'is good anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Looks good, really goodBut the "Anu" thing isn't japanese <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Look.http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/96/EarthboundImmortalCcarayhuaSOVR-JP-UR.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Look.http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/96/EarthboundImmortalCcarayhuaSOVR-JP-UR.jpgIf that was to me, the url is incorrect and don't try to show me japanese EI, i know them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 I don't recomend translators. I've heard that translations don't always make sense. The translators translate every word you put literally in the way its written in the language you want but not the sentence as a whole. When a person that knows that language reads that work, its just not the way they say it.. I would say ask someone that knows japanese :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 mhm i don't know anyone who speaks japanese^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 I LOVE Japanese text. Though the font style of the text doesn't quite fit some how....it seems too "Blocky" while the normal symbols tend to be sleek and "pointy" on the ends. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 mhm i think i made it too much bold. next time it will be more sleek^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Look.http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/yugioh/images/9/96/EarthboundImmortalCcarayhuaSOVR-JP-UR.jpgIf that was to me' date=' the url is incorrect and don't try to show me japanese EI, i know them.[/quote']I meant that there is English text in Japanese cards. @HP doom. Get rid of the stuff after Anu in the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 why? what does it mean? are you japanese or are you able to speak japanese? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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