~Kip~ Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 [spoiler=PLOT:]A young boy, Peter, meets up with another boy about his age, named Mitchell. Together, Peter and Mitchell will face many dangers, but will also team up with the "Children of Time" in order to stop the most evil force, the Valuan Empire, who is plotting to rule the world. [spoiler=PROTAGONISTS:][spoiler=Peter:]Age: 14Main Character #1[spoiler=Appearance:] Bio: One day, Peter was taking a walk with his mom and dad, when a group of Valuans grabbed his mom and took her away. Nobody knows what became of her. To this day, Peter has been looking for his mom.Personality: A calm boy who will do anything for his friends. He doesn’t want anything to happen to them, especially what happened to his mom.Deck: Immortal Angels: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-178742.htmlAce Card: Immortal Angel Dragon [spoiler=Mitchell]Age: 14Main Character #2[spoiler=Appearance:] Bio: A boy who’s mother and father died. He knows nothing of them, for he was raised by a dwarf. He has no idea he has been adopted.Personality: A boy who takes everything too seriously. It seems as if he has no humor.Deck: Spellcaster’s Command Structure Deck (The real one, but with some changes)Ace Card: Tempest Magician [spoiler=Valuans:][spoiler=Drachma]Leader of the empire of Valua, Drachma Valu is the father of a wimpy boy, Crafos, who seems to hate Peter and Mitchell for some reason. He demolished Spirit Town, the hometown of the two boys, and is now seeking to destroy them as well. [spoiler=Chapter 1: The Heroes Meet] One clear, sunny day, Peter was running down the street. His duel disk was on his arm, and his deck was in his pocket. His brown hair flew the teeniest bit in the gentle breeze. Suddenly, he ran into a kid and fell over. The kid was a big, bulky 15 year old who was also quite fat. He had black, short hair, and his skin was dark. (Like Barack Obama's) His black shirt and brown pants gave away he was a bully. He stood over Peter like a cat to a rat. "Hey! Watch where your going, punk!" the kid screamed at Peter. The kid then picked Peter up by his shirt high into the air. Peter stayed calm. The kid slammed Peter back down, injuring Peter's right leg. The kid then started to kick Peter's injured leg, while Peter was clutching onto it. All of a sudden, another kid, about Peter's size and age appeared. "Hey kid, try picking on someone your own size!" the 14 year old said courageously to the bully. The bully turned around to see who was threatening him, but was soon socked straight in the nose. Blood was dripping quickly, and the boy could only hold it and watch himself bleed. Peter raised himself off the ground slowly, but was still in pain from his injured leg. He walked a few feet away from the bully, and just stood there. His leg was bleeding, and his hands were also covered in blood from holding his leg. The courageous boy walked over to Peter. "Hey, you okay?" he asked. "My name is Mitchell, what's yours?" "Peter." "Nice to meet you, Peter.""Nice to meet you too, Mitchell." Mitchell walked over to the bully and held up his duel disk. "Okay, time to finish you off." he said. The bully merely walked away. "My name is Crafos, son of Drachma, the Emperor of the Great Valuan Empire, and don't you forget it!" Crafos then ran away, like a cat would when chased by a dog. "Looks like we won't be seeing him for a while." Mitchell said. "Nope..." replied Peter. They both walked away solemnly, toward the town where Peter and Mitchell both came from. Spirit Town. [spoiler=Chapter 2: Rubble Town] In the direction of their town, Peter and Mitchell could see smoke. The rising black cloud menaced along the skies, absorbing everything in it's path. Peter and Mitchell were so worried, they rushed to Spirit Town as fast as their legs could take them. When they finally got to Spirit Town, the place was a mess. People were being slowly killed, and all Peter and Mitchell could do was watch from the distance. A tall man in a white shirt and a pair of blue jeans came out from a ship flying overhead, it's propeller a spinning fury that could chop a man in two. "Mitchell Samaru, come forth." Mitchell came from his hiding place. "You have gave my son, Crafos Valu, a broken nose, and are therefore sentenced for a Shadow Duel with him. He's protected, but you're not... Muhahahaha!" laughed the man. "I am Drachma, emperor of the great Valuan country to the North. "I accept your stupid challenge!" replied Mitchell, readying his Duel Disk. He shuffled his deck and placed it into the duel disk's deck slot. Crafos then came forward, already ready for the duel. "I'll go first!" he said, as he drew his card. "Great, now I summon The Six Samurai - Zanji! I then use Double Summon, allowing me to summon another time this turn, so I summon The Six Samurai - Irou. This ends my turn, but I can't end without placing a face-down." "Fine, whatever. My move, so I draw! I summon Breaker the Magical Warrior in Attack Position!" A great red warrior in a red magician's cloak appeared on the field. "Now, sice he was summoned, he gets a Spell Counter, and his Attack points go up to 1900. Now, I use his effect, and remove the counter, destroying your face-down. I then activate Swords of Revealing Light, ending my turn." "My draw! I summon The Six Samurai - Kamon in Attack Position." A red samurai wielding a firecracker emerged slowly from the ground. "Now, sice there is another Six Samurai on the field, I use his effect, destroying your Swords of Revealing Light!" The samurai then then threw it's firecracker, destroying all three of the swords around Crafos's monsters. "Now, my Irou attacks your Breaker. LP: Mitchell: 3900 Crafos: 4000 Now, my other two samurais attack you directly! LP: Mitchell: 600 Crafos: 4000 This ends my turn." "I draw!" shouted Mitchell. "From my hand, I use Magical Mallet, sending all five cards in my hand to the Deck, allowing me to draw five new ones. I now summon a face-down Defense Position monster and end my turn with a face-down. Will Mitchell be able to finish this samurai wielder? Find out in the next episode of Yugioh: Maker of the Heroes! [spoiler=Chapter 3: The Impossible is Achieved!] When we last left of, Peter and Mitchell came back to Spirit Town, noticing it was demolished. Mitchell was then challenged by Crafos, which turned out to be a bad idea to accept. It is now Crafos's turn, and Mitchell has only 600 Life Points. Can Mitchell prevail? "With you having 600 Life Points left, this will get easier than I thought." said Crafos. "I draw! I now summon The Six Samurai - Yariza in Attack Mode! Using his effect, another Six Samurai is on my side of the field, so it can attack you directly. Finish Him!" "Not so fast!" interrupted Mitchell. "I activate my face-down, Mirror Force! Not only is the attack negated, but all of your monsters are destroyed!" Mitchell declared, slightly relieved. "I place a face-down and I end my turn." replied Crafos. "I draw! declared Mitchell. "I activate my Field Spell, Magical Citadel of Endymoin, and I flip up my face-down monster, Apprentice Magician, placing one Spell Counter on my Field Spell. Now, I use Spell Power Grasp, placing a Spell Counter on my Field Spell. I can also add another Spell Power Grasp to my hand. Since Spell Power Grasp is a Spell Card, Magical Citadel of Endymoin gets yet another Spell Counter. I then place a face-down, and end my turn." "I draw!" replied Crafos. I summon Marauding Captain, and use his effect to Special Summon another Marauding Captain. Then, I use the effect of my Trap, Ultimate Offering, by paying 500 Life Points... Mitchell: 600 Crafos: 3500 I can Normal Summon again, so I Normal Summon another Marauding Captain. Using his effect, I Special Summon another Warrior, and I pick Shien's Footsoldier. With this, I end my turn." "I draw!" said Mitchell. "I summon my Apprentice Magician in Attack Mode, giving my Citadel yet another counter. That makes four. I now use Spell Power Grasp, adding another to my hand, and giving my Citadel it's fifthSpell Counter. Of course, we can't forget that Spell Power Grasp is a Spell, and that's a sixth counter. I now use Double Summon, summoning my Skilled Dark Magician, and thanks to another Spell, I give my Citadel it's seventh counter. I remove them all to summon from my hand Endymoin, the Master Magician! As the last card in my hand, besides the card I added to my hand, I use Lightning Vortex, discarding my Spell Power Grasp to destroy all of your monsters. Now, all my monsters attack you directly!" LP: Mitchell: 600 Crafos: 0 "Now go cry to your daddy, who apparently needs to defend you!" yelled Mitchell. He walked back to Peter, and signalled him to get up. This 'Drachma' person rose tall. "You dare defy the Valuan empire? Nw, you are up against the world!" he yelled, then laughed a malicious laugh. Peter and Mitchell knew this would not end well. But what could they do to help. Find out their idea in the next episode of Yugioh: Maker of the Heroes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Im excited for it one problem you know where it says Valuans well you needed an extra I think.Valuan seems intresting,The plot seems intresting,well everything seems intresting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Yeah, I need a few Children of Time and Valuans before I can start, though. Join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 Chapter 1 posted. I won't need more Children of Time yet, but I will need at least 1 more Valuan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted January 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-gi-oh Dude Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 You've forgot that this is a YU-GI-OH FanFic. Oh well. It's alright, i'll give you that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted January 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 It sort of says : "Yugioh": Maker of the Heroes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Oh sorry I haven't commented on chapter 1 it's an ok chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Oh sorry I haven't commented on chapter 1 it's an ok chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted January 8, 2010 Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Oh sorry I haven't commented on chapter 1 it's an ok chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted June 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Chapter 2 made. I know it took a long time but, well here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des HERO Posted June 18, 2010 Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 Horay it's back, chapter 2 was great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Kip~ Posted June 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2010 thanks. Are they a little short or is it just me?Chapter 3 will be sometime this week.Or maybe right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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