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Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone [Screenplay, Draft 1 - UPDATED!]

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I won't look at it because, you know, it's an attachment, and those aren't allowed. Besides, it looks like a download.

 

And it follows the plot of the original book? Is that even necessary? There's already the book, not to mention the movie (and trust me, they're not that different). So I'm going to report this.

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I won't look at it because' date=' you know, it's an attachment, and those aren't allowed. Besides, it looks like a download.

 

And it follows the plot of the original book? Is that even necessary? There's already the book, not to mention the movie (and trust me, they're not that different). So I'm going to report this.

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Right, I'll start with telling you that you don't tell me what's against the rules and what isn't. I think I've been here a bit longer than you to know that, so shut the hell up. Attachments aren't allowed in CC and that's it you idiot, YCMaker wouldn't keep them on if he didn't allow them.

 

It's called a fan-screenplay, I'm not the only one to do one. No different from a fan-fic, though it'll obviously differ from the original. I feel the original Screenplays were lacking, and as part of SAW Productions I plan to re-write the Harry Potter Screenplays in a longer, darker version of it.

 

Don't report my damn threads without knowing that it's against the rules.

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This is pretty good. I think I'll be reading this with every update.

 

Can't wait to see more.

 

Thanks. =] This is of course, just a draft. Later versions will contain more description (though it's not needed as most of it is up to the Director, as I wouldn't have one I feel it's needed) and changes I feel are needed.

 

Right now, I'm writing Gringotts. Next time I post a release it'll go up to the end of Harry's first day at Hogwarts.

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This is very well done! The only thing I would change is Voldemort's dialogue' date=' it doesn't seem like him to me.

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This is a good point. I feel that his dialogue is similar to mine in OotP and DH during meetings, but I do agree with you. I plan to change it.

 

Thanks. =]

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I'm sorry, then.

 

I'm sorry. Goodness, I didn't look at this page long enough to notice much but I THOUGHT attachments - read, THOUGHT - still couldn't be used by even moderators. Now I actually look at the rules and see that it says nothing about that. I get confused when I go to multiple forums and read different things.

 

Then I'll just leave.

 

And I know I was saying something that was invalid and kind of spammy, and I also know you've obviously been on the forums much longer than I have, but gosh, you don't have to curse at me for being forgetful. You give me a talk and I'll learn from that.

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I'm sorry' date=' then.[/b']

 

I'm sorry. Goodness, I didn't look at this page long enough to notice much but I THOUGHT attachments - read, THOUGHT - still couldn't be used by even moderators. Now I actually look at the rules and see that it says nothing about that. I get confused when I go to multiple forums and read different things.

 

Then I'll just leave.

 

And I know I was saying something that was invalid and kind of spammy, and I also know you've obviously been on the forums much longer than I have, but gosh, you don't have to curse at me for being forgetful. You give me a talk and I'll learn from that.

 

Whoa, an apology. Guess I was expecting more of an;

 

What you said would be classified as "Idiotic rebuttal". Ie: A rebuttal that is idiotic and serves no purpose.

 

Well, I can understand the mistake but it wasn't a good idea to assume before posting, attempting to make me look like an idiot. Anyway, I apologise for being a dick, I tend to bite back when people attempt to make me seem stupid. So yeah, sorry.

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Ron didn't run into the wall? :3

 

Well' date=' keep on going. This is kool. :3 makes me want to read the book again.

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Ron obviously does, it just isn't shown. :3

 

And lol, I'll try to. I'm considering whether I should make the lines true to the book or to make it different, still. It's only a bare draft atm, so alot will be changed eventually.

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