FunkyMonkey Posted December 12, 2007 Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 this is my first fanfic there are 13 chatecters 7 of them want to destroy the world with the power of darknessthe group of bad guys are called the destroyers of lightcharectersvillinsfire steamfire steam is the leader of the destroyers of light he almost destroys jason in a future duel and he has a power that he dosent know ofwater-jincehes a master of water cards and can ealily defeat anyone well thats what he says.darky sparkydarky sparky says that he can deafeat kon-joy greatest duelest in the wolrd.darky sparky has a deck of fiends and dark monstersspell castshe has all great spell cards and only 3 monstershes also a teacherother 3 villians will apear in episode 4good guysjasonbest duelest in the dorm hes a slifer red and hes bean offerd to go up a dorm 5 times but he refuses every time.alexanerhe isnt in a dorm he needs to past a test first he allways falls he has a good deck but dosent use itporfeser craba teacher who teaches all about effects and ruelsother 3 guys will apear in episode 4 episode 1jason was walking to class when he saw 2 people just finishing a duel 'goblin attack force end this know!!' shouted a teacher 'now leave pefore i send you to the shadow realm' 'whoo' said jason 'awsome can i duel you please' 'no you have a class to go to' said the teacher 'no i dont its 1 hour after shcool' sayed jason.jason blinked then when he opened his eyes the teacher was gone.jason ran to his dorm.then he saw a big black hole in the sky 'arg' said jason he heard a voice saying'jason go to the main duel hall someones dueling for there soul 'well c,mon what are you waiting for' said the voice jason turned around he saw his freind alexander jason turned around again 'what are you waiting for' said alexander 'look in the sky' said jason suddenly lightning struck!!!.Then they saw a shadow walking towards them 'duel me or ill make you' 'who are you' said jason 'im fire steam' now duel me or ill make you' jason was scared so he ran away but fire steam chased him and caught him.'Let me go'said jason 'no not till you duel me' said fire steam 'ok i will get your game on' said jason.jason.i go first.i summon elemetal hero spark man now i ativate polimerzatian i fues spark man and clayman to make elemental hero thunder giant i place one card face down to end my turnthunder giantatk/2400def/2600fire staem.i sommun neo the magic swords man in defense mode now i attivate heavy storm i place one card face down and end my turnneo the magic swords man atk/1700def/1000jason.i ativate dark hole destroy all are monsters now i play monter reborn i bring back my clay man in defense mode end my turnfire steam.i sommun marauding captin in attack mode now i equip him with lithning blademarauding captin i end my goatk/2000def/400jason.i play card destruction...... end of episode 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonkey Posted December 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 doesent any one like it?episode two'noooooooo!!!!' said fire steam i end my turn said jasonfire steam i play seal of areycalcos now person who loses loses there soul so i play fisser your clay is destroyed now i play my goblin attack force and i play reinforcement of the army to bring my gearfreid the iron kinght now i equip my goblin attack force with divine sword-phoenix blade now destroy him noooooooooooooo!!!!! said jasonyou lose your soul now ha ha ha know said fire steam 'what whats that i see its a pendent it might save me what theres two of me arghhh'said jason 'no you found the melenium pendent you,le live' said fire steam 'im stael here sweet'said jason.jason ran to his dorm on the way he saw some one dueling it was the teacer he saw dueling in the main hall.jason ran towards them no please spell cast please nooo said one of the people dueling. now jason was scared he ran right to his dorm .end of episode 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted December 14, 2007 Report Share Posted December 14, 2007 Episodes are short They need to be longer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 Spelling needs to improve. A lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted December 15, 2007 Report Share Posted December 15, 2007 its good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
derby county hunter Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 i think its 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 why did you bump a 3 month old thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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