Alcander Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 [align=center]Hi again, I made a new tag, this time with brushes and smudge effect, added some gradient maps to change the color a bit, etc. CnCMade with PS Note: don't talk about "depth" I know about that but I don't wanted to add it. I know the text sucks, tell me how to improve it, please.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixel. Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 I like it, but what exactly is up with the random darkness on her arms? Also The Background is meh... If I was you, I would have her like on a stock image of a park or something, Would fit it way better. Also, the reason the text "sucks" is because the outer glow of the lettering matches the circles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 thanks for your comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Text isn't actually that bad.BG not bad............Doesn't flow all too well....Needs C4D All in all not entirely bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 of course it's not bad, I don't like c4ds but I'll try to add them, the only thing bad it's the shadow in her arms and the text I guess... anyways thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Yea, it is bad. No basics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Blending needs work.Colors are random and bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 It looks cool...But try to blend more the render with the BG...maybe a yellow glow?BTW text isn't that bad, but add a color to it.Also those circles should blend more the BG too, they blend with the render, but not with the BGOr maybe try to make the BG with black, brown you know, some dark colorsBut it seems cool =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 Can I have the original render? I really like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted December 29, 2009 Report Share Posted December 29, 2009 look planetrenders ;)it is one of the new ones ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted December 30, 2009 Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 thanks :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted December 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2009 thanks above :D I'll try to improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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