PikMan Posted January 3, 2010 Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 In my adaption, the first change I know I'll make is changing the first chapter's name to "A Voice in the Sky." This is because I'll be tacking on part of the prologue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2010 I try to make the titles funny. The funnier, the more it makes people want to read it. I'm half-way done with chapter 6, but I'm taking a break right now. Edit: I'm done with chapter 6! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted January 4, 2010 Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Why'd you change the title of Chapter 6? The first title made more sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2010 Again, I try to make them funny. You think the other was better? Ok, I'll change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted January 5, 2010 Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 Not to [possibly] spoil the story... but is Jayline dead now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2010 I can't tell you that. By the way, I'm back to school. It's going to be harder for me to write the chapters. Chapter 7 is half way done though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2010 Sorry for the wait. Chapter 7 is up. I'm on my weekend so hopefully I'll finish chapter 8 faster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Nice fanfic so far. One question though... what were Lily and Leru arguing about anyway? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Leru went to Ria and Lance. He called Lily thinking they can beat them. Lily becomes afraid and argues with Leru not to do that again. Chapter 7 took a while because I got loads of homework. It would have been longer, but it's okay. Chapter 8 is already halfway done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PikMan Posted January 10, 2010 Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 In Luma's character description, it says that she never trusts anybody. Are you going to explain later in the story how she ended up allying with Ernest and/or Zane? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted January 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2010 Yeah. I'm planning to have Part 4 filled with flashbacks. Edit: Because of the lack of posts and my lack of time, I have decided to discontinue this Fan Fic. I may revive some time later, but for now, this is gone. I'm sorry, readers. Edit 2: @PikMan's PM: It won't matter if more people took interest. The main reason I stopped is because my teachers are flooding me with homework. I couldn't enjoy YCM with a not-so-popular fanfic. I found no reason to continue. I may revive it someday, but that day is far away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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