Pixel. Posted December 27, 2009 Report Share Posted December 27, 2009 [align=center]Hello, I will be posting all of my splices I make here, I will update it usually daily. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Last one looks like that one from Jappio's splicing tutorial Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Needs more scathing, looks like a bunch of copy and paste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 Ok the creation you got from my tutorial is different, but I have to say some of the differenses you made weren't the best. Although perhaps nitpicky, you should have the skin and body white colors, match the whisker colors. The fluff added the head also looks a bit out there. Doesn't make much sense on Togetic, since Togetic has a not so furry body. Keeping the wings on yours I feel added a bit too much clutter, removing them might have made a better mixture. Sealeo also seems to take a large back seat in this mix. Only his whiskers appearing makes it feel like he isn't even there. Either more Sealeo parts and features should have been user, or nothing from him at all. The tails' placement doesn't look perfect, doesn't flow with the shape of the body. Maybe should more into the body. The Egxecutor mix has be somewhat confused. I really don't get the glowing bulb. You also have some old gray borders on the Geodude arms, and unrecolored borders should not be. The leaves were cut off weird and added to the head weird also. The arm on the left and the faces have this weird border issue going on between them. The mix I also think is a little bland. It looks like a weird Egxecutor overall I think. For your last one, I'll comment on the one with the tail, as it is a more fluent mix and has more equal part sharing. I think you should have had the ears be Snorlax's belly colors, since that's how Kangaskhan did it, and it looks weird with the blue. The Kangaskhan baby probably should have gotten full blue skin or something, to match its parent more. I will say this one doesn't look too bad, but at the same time feels a little simple, but perhaps in the end that might be a good thing. Well you followed some things well from my tutorial, which is good, but you still need some practice and better attention to details before your sprites truly start to shine. I hope in some way I was able to help you out or point something out that will help you in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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