fighteronspeed Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 [align=center]Heres a 1st revision of pokemon splice done in MS Paint. Hope to see some CnC. Hopefully not too harsh. I Might have overdone it with this one... More to come.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 The only advice I can give you is to either put wings on it or give it Syther(sp)'s blade hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Needs more scratching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 In my opinion the colour scheme is a bit off but the idea is really good I think the horns should be red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin Seed Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Needs more scratching.What's scratching? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fighteronspeed Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 The only advice I can give you is to either put wings on it or give it Syther(sp)'s blade hands. I like the wings idea. I will have a play with some winged pokemon and see what happens. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Needs more scratching.What's scratching? Custom. You make it yourself using the Pen Tool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fighteronspeed Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 ok I done a little scratching kind of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 28, 2009 Report Share Posted December 28, 2009 This will be a long and well explained C+C, it dives into many different types of errors. It's only purpose is to in some way make you aware of some flaws, and perhaps help you with fixing them. Your newer one I would say has gotten worse. The fact alone that you lost the quality of your sprite by saving as something other than .png is enough to completely ruin it (if at any point you saved as something else, you take risk of it being completely ruined, not even saving again later as something else can save it). Those wings though aren't from a Pokemon sprite either, I do believe they were actually made by another user on this site, and without proper credit and or permission, you shouldn't be using them. I'd go more into some of the changes you made, but it's hard to tell due to how it's been messed up. So the original is a lot more clear, and I can make better comments on it. First thing I have an issue with would be in general it all doesn't flow together. You can definetly tell someone just took different parts and slapped them on. You have to be a lot more percise and specific where you put things, making sure they can flow right. Time has to be taken to view where each pixel is. Zooming in and seeing where things stop and cut off is important. Next issue I had would be the recoloring job you did. In general you didn't do a full recolor, ass you kept some red, white, and green, and it all doesn't mix well. You also forgot to change a bunch of your border colors, somethin I just really don't like. Make sure to get to those borders. You also missed out on the coloring of the back spike thing on the right leg. Laslt yin general some of the choice you made are too cluttered and confusing. The main chest area I have a clue what's going one. I see what is Galade's usual body, but you have tat red color there, and I don't know what that is suppose to be even. Attempting something interesting is nice and all, but lack of quality shouldn't be abandoned for it. The head is also cluttered both Gallade's and Blaziken's head pieces. Also about the tip about scratching, don't scratch on just any old parts. Use scratching to make it flow better. IcyBlue probably should have been more specific about what kind of scratching I did notice on your newer one you added something at the end of it's hand. I don't know what it even was. Stick to just changing and scratching pixels up to fix areas that don't look right combine, like making a leg flow better into the main body or something. Well that's all I have to say I suppose. I'm sorry if I'm being too 'harsh' or something, but I don't mean to attack you or anything. I just know a good bunch of stuff when it comes to splicing, and I wanted to let you know what was wrong and maybe how to fix it all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fighteronspeed Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 This will be a long and well explained C+C' date=' it dives into many different types of errors. It's only purpose is to in some way make you aware of some flaws, and perhaps help you with fixing them. Your newer one I would say has gotten worse. The fact alone that you lost the quality of your sprite by saving as something other than .png is enough to completely ruin it (if at any point you saved as something else, you take risk of it being completely ruined, not even saving again later as something else can save it). Those wings though aren't from a Pokemon sprite either, I do believe they were actually made by another user on this site, and without proper credit and or permission, you shouldn't be using them. I'd go more into some of the changes you made, but it's hard to tell due to how it's been messed up. So the original is a lot more clear, and I can make better comments on it. First thing I have an issue with would be in general it all doesn't flow together. You can definetly tell someone just took different parts and slapped them on. You have to be a lot more percise and specific where you put things, making sure they can flow right. Time has to be taken to view where each pixel is. Zooming in and seeing where things stop and cut off is important. Next issue I had would be the recoloring job you did. In general you didn't do a full recolor, ass you kept some red, white, and green, and it all doesn't mix well. You also forgot to change a bunch of your border colors, somethin I just really don't like. Make sure to get to those borders. You also missed out on the coloring of the back spike thing on the right leg. Laslt yin general some of the choice you made are too cluttered and confusing. The main chest area I have a clue what's going one. I see what is Galade's usual body, but you have tat red color there, and I don't know what that is suppose to be even. Attempting something interesting is nice and all, but lack of quality shouldn't be abandoned for it. The head is also cluttered both Gallade's and Blaziken's head pieces. Also about the tip about scratching, don't scratch on just any old parts. Use scratching to make it flow better. IcyBlue probably should have been more specific about what kind of scratching I did notice on your newer one you added something at the end of it's hand. I don't know what it even was. Stick to just changing and scratching pixels up to fix areas that don't look right combine, like making a leg flow better into the main body or something. Well that's all I have to say I suppose. I'm sorry if I'm being too 'harsh' or something, but I don't mean to attack you or anything. I just know a good bunch of stuff when it comes to splicing, and I wanted to let you know what was wrong and maybe how to fix it all.[/quote'] first of. Thank you. I found that to be very constructive criticism. and when I get time to start on some graphics I will redo that one. One thing though. ("I do believe they were actually made by another user on this site"). Yes and that other user is me. I drew them and scanned the in then done colouring and beveling in photoshop. they were bigger when i done them. and I made the for a dragon. but NeriesUmbra said that I should put them on something so i tried a non sprite based pokemon. and then when Dark Justice said about putting wings on it. I tried to resize them. and it went from bad to worse. then instead of doing what I should have, taken time over it. I ended up rushing and messing it up to the extreme. I am a programmer by trade so my graphic skills are little to none. I am learning to use photoshop and Blender3D. but application development takes up most of my time. Thanks for your advice. and thanks to everyone for their comments and views on the images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 31, 2009 Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Oh sorry. I didn't notice you were the same user I guess. I can noticed missed placed pixels from far away, but something like names I can't =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fighteronspeed Posted December 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2009 Oh sorry. I didn't notice you were the same user I guess. I can noticed missed placed pixels from far away' date=' but something like names I can't =P[/quote'] Thats OK. Thanks for the CnC anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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