:ABC: Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 AquisiupA Chapter: Prologue In the year 30XX the game dual monster has become a game every person loves. People can be poor before a dual and rich after, if they won. And now the greatest tournament since Battle city is going to take place, Sky Kingdom, so begins the challenge of I life time for one man. “I Summon Aquis Aniscot - 1000 ATK, 0 DEF - and send Aquis Dragnor – 1300 ATK, 1700 DEF - to the Graveyard, and double Aniscot’s level, then I will send it and my Squia Fira - ? ATK, 0 DEF – to the graveyard to Synchro Summon Aquis Lanc-Pi - 0 ATK, 0 DEF – and I use it to attack your Celtic Guardian.” “I activate Hinomoto-Zetsumei and remo…” BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP… the alarm was turned on, Tyler was angry, he had been having the same dream every morning for the past two months and he still hadn’t got to the end of it. So like every morning he awoke frustrated and razed, he wore a plain white T-shirt, and he slipped on some blue jeans. He walked around his apartment looking for things he thought he would need, some food, his Deck, and some spare cloths, aside from that was only small things he treasured. The Sky Kingdom Tournament, the most talked about tournament of the year, and all Tyler could think was that he had been invited to it, “ o…K, I’m ready let’s go.” Tyler said to himself, than he rushed out his door to the air way platform were an giant blip would pick them up as an memory to Battle City. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 :?:? What am I supposed to be looking at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 highlight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 You mean highlight the first post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 yes=D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 yes=D Why the hell are you making your story in white? It's difficult to read with the white text against the blue highlight background, and'll dissuade people from visiting your page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 sorry fixedT-T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Not bad. I'd like to see more very soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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